One Punch: the System That Has Been Maintained for Three Years Is Finally Activated

It's okay, I hope the heroine Tatsumaki and Fubuki [face covering]

Judging from the situation, it must be the heroine of Tatsumaki.

What a good book. Why is it only rated 6.2? I think Gaga is good. When writing, I can bring in more sweet daily life and a little SS stuff [laughing], so I like to read it more. Ahem, to be honest, I really like this book. It suits my taste. Another shortcoming is that the protagonist is too powerful as you wrote above. There are not so many extra props, such as money, capsules, and fairy beans. If you take out a lot at once, there is no challenge at all. Most people should not be happy to see this kind of thing.

I'm scared to death of your update speed. Why don't you just collect the tornadoes and blowing snow together? [Laughing]

Beautiful! When else would the protagonist have a relationship with Tatsumaki?

Come on, it's best to give Saitama more scenes.

I just don't know who the heroine is, or there is no heroine It's really fast, I'm also 6

It's pretty good among One Punch Man fandoms

Judging from the current look and feel, it looks okay. There should be a high probability that a remake will be written in the future, right? And it should gradually gravitate towards the plot of the remake in the later stages. In that case, I feel that the ending of Mr. Yang can be visually judged. If he does not write to other worlds, the first one should be written according to the original work, that is, if Starry Sky Wolf fights Saitama, the plot can continue to be written in the later stage, or the second kind of protagonist fights Starry Sky Wolf, which may be divided into two types, or It will be the same as the first one, but Genos is still dead. In the second one, it is possible that Genos is not dead, and Saitama and Genos are there to save people or eat melons. With the current character of the protagonist, I feel that the wolf in the starry sky should be saved, and then directly beat the god to death in the later stage, and then it will end with Fubuki and Tatsumaki. And if the author wants to write a comprehensive comic, it is best not to write comics from DC and Marvel. Writing comics is just a matter of risking one's life. If you are interested in comprehensive comics, you can check out my third page, and you can see it on my homepage [smile][smile][smile]

It's good-looking, it needs to be daily and daily, it needs plot, plot, and fights, but the only flaw is that it lacks a little bit of innovation, innovation based on the humanities

The plot is pretty good I hope the heroine is a tornado

I hope the heroine is a tornado Why is the rating so low?

After reading half of it, my summary of this book is that it is good, but I do not recommend reading Dragon Ball: One Punch and Two Chefs, because too much understanding of the world view of Dragon Ball will affect the viewing experience of this book. It is only suitable for those who have not read Dragon Ball to read the article, and you can polish it a little. I started complaining about why when I read Chapter 11, some content was added that I couldn't understand. How did the protagonist and Tatsumaki know each other? And how did the protagonist crush Tatsumaki at the beginning even though he had a pseudo-Saiyan physique? I can understand if it's a mixed-blood Saiyan and a pure-blood Saiyan, but his blood is not pure. Hey.

It fits the anime very well. As an old bookworm, I think this novel is quite acceptable. The settings of various plots do not seem very abrupt, and the details are well controlled. At least for now

Although it follows the plot, it is well written. I hope I can add some of my own subjective plot and plot. Don't look at it for nothing.

There was a little setting problem in the early stage. Generally speaking, the protagonist Saitama is invincible, so you don't need to look at the setting or anything like that.

It's very beautiful. It's one of the best fanfics. Good luck to the author. Good looking, good luck to the author

It's well written, but I'd like to update it faster. I'm really looking forward to the second battle between the protagonist and Saitama ^ω^. The protagonist travels through the world of One Punch Man and gets system repairs. Three years later, Invincible is about as strong as Saitama and is his neighbor.

If you don't accept the tornado and Fubuki sisters, you will get one star and a serious punch.

Not bad 🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅 🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅🅅 Beautiful Living creatures, please stay here. Do you admit that Miss Liuying is unparalleled in beauty?

Sisters Tatsumaki and Fubuki are deeply in love and cannot be together forever [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky laugh] Ahem, the hero understands

Not bad, good, very interesting

Please, the author should be faster. I want to see the main character and Tatsumaki together!

It's pretty good among the punches I've seen, at least for now.

Haha party retro haha

It feels okay, but it's a bit embarrassing and feels like it deviates a bit from the original work [laughs crookedly]

It really doesn't work in the front, but it looks better the further back you go.

The best One Punch Man fanfic I've ever seen

Pretending to be B makes you fly

The heroine hopes it is a tornado