Star Dome Railway, at the Beginning, It Directly Hits Yueyuejun

Wow, this book gave me more surprises than I expected. I was originally just reading it to kill time, but after reading it, I found that the writing is really good, very natural, and it doesn't feel awkward to read. The character design is also very good, and I can see its bright future. So if possible, can I seriously update it? If this book suddenly stops updating one day, I will be really sad. Of course, if it can have a stable update status, I will also be very happy. Although I have no money now (sad), it is still okay to give free gifts from time to time.

It's a good read, it doesn't feel awkward at all, and the plots are connected very smoothly. It's a warm, sunny, and positive little sweet novel. The only drawback is that the author's updates are too slow and it's completely unreadable. Dear author, can you update it faster? I'm not greedy, as long as there are 100 chapters a day, and each chapter must be more than 2,000 words, the author is so good, he will definitely agree.

I thought it was another cliche book when I read the title, but I didn't expect it to be unexpectedly good-looking. Great support from the author [please give me more updates]

Absolutely amazing, this kind of happy and silly plot, with a slightly bitter [almost crying] feeling at the end. MiHoYo's stuff looks so good even with a little razor blade. This article is so damn good [send heart] [send heart] [send heart], I highly recommend it. This is the first time I have encountered such an amazing article on Tomato. Wow, wow, wow, hurry up. I don't have enough to eat. Why why why not meet Wuwu at the end [crying]

I finally found such a high-quality book on Tomato. I was really touched (ಥ_ಥ) and I hope I can continue writing (≧∇≦)/Come on, you are the fattest (ง•̀_•́)ง The writing is great, the author is great, and the story is amazing and unique. The score is over nine points, which is still too low. I must give me a full score ψ(｀∇´)ψ

It's so pretty, so pretty, to be honest, I forgot about the memory of Leyan when I saw it, Jingyuan. When I suppress my emotions, it really makes me feel uncomfortable watching it. Ah, people with low tear points really can't stand it. I can only shed my little pearls. I watched it before the author finished the update, but I forgot to give a five-star review, grandma's, so I again I'm here to give a five-star review. I feel that Blade's cb direction is really cool. Friendship is always good [shy][shy][shy] Perverted Dan Feng. As for Dan Heng, I seem to have forgotten a little. Why do I feel that he seems to be very innocent [smile][smile][smile]

Really, after reading it, my heart still hurts. Although it was also in the mission, I was also stabbed. I read it again and it was more stabbed. Ah wu wu wu... The writing is so good. From the beginning of being heartless to now, it has gradually grown. The process has been ups and downs, and I have lost a lot. It hurts, it hurts! But I still hope that Yin Yuejun is the CP of the protagonist, and Jing Yuanyuan is also good... Hehe, it really doesn't work... 1+1... Ah, it's not impossible!

It's okay, pretty good among tomatoes. Personally, I prefer the plot of the story in which the amnesia is not lost before the reincarnation. What to say next, I feel like it didn't reach the point that I like. . I feel that, especially in the later part, there is a bit too much emphasis on Jing Yuan Danheng's affection for the protagonist. It's not that I don't like the love line, but I think the emotion between them is a little deeper than love. It is a very complicated and somewhat fatal feeling. I feel like the author really wanted to write about this, but it just didn't make sense. What I like about Yunwu is the sense of the knife that was once glorious but now falls apart. When I read the story, I also look forward to the sadistic knife feeling when several people meet again. But I feel like this place is a bit biased towards jealousy (probably), and it's not very enjoyable to watch. Finally, my personal opinion is that everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables, but overall it's pretty good.

It looks good, the characters are not broken, it is not awkward to read, and the writing style is good. I definitely deserve this 5 stars! Quick update

Ahhhhh, it's really not a loss to invest in this book! The teacher's writing is really great, and the plot is easily brought into the story. The scene where Yanyan hugged Danfeng and said there was a lot of homework is still vivid in my memory. (Screaming) (Distorted) This book is the first in my ranking on Tomato. I look forward to updating it every day. If I can't eat enough, it's simply not enough. Teacher, ahhh, my Camisole [love] [love] [love]

If you love delicious food, please have more delicious ones! Meal! ! ! ! (Sunny and healthy running) (Hurdle) (Sunny and healthy running) (Three-point shooting) (Colorful radio gymnastics) Yeah! ! ! (Twists hula hoop) Ahhhhhhhh! ! ! (Three-point shot into the frame) (Dancing) (Floating in the wind) (Confidence) (Happiness) (Bathing in the sun) (Sprinting) (Comfortable) (Not dizzy) (No discomfort in the chest) (Invigorated) (Increased appetite) (Light on the feet) (Gentle) (Heart-warming) (Tranquil) (Love life) (Breeze comes) (Excited) (Work hard) (Strengthen the body) (Heat flow in the body) (Go to the room) (Dance) (Out of the galaxy)

It's really beautiful! Looking at their past, things have changed now, and fate is sad and harsh. It hugs you and me, running in the long river of time, making everything helpless and irreversible.

It's good to watch, the overall pacing is good, there's no bloody plot, and the characters aren't very OOC. I recommend watching it. (Ps: I hope the author can turn into a code machine and code words [sneered smile] [sneaky smile])

Looks good! Very pretty! I had a good time with Dan Feng's cp, and it was so sweet that I rolled on the bed🤤 I also had a good time with Jing Yuan's cp, a bamboo horse matches a bamboo horse😚When can Jing Yuan kiss A Yan, just touching the dragon's tail is nothing🤤

Excellent and wonderful plot. The transformation of the protagonist from an ignorant and cheerful young man to a majestic dragon king is very reasonable. It makes people feel sympathy and heartache for him as he is pushed forward by fate involuntarily. However, I feel that the author is not good at writing emotional lines (´•.•`). It is a bit abrupt for each character to have feelings for the protagonist. It is really touching to be able to see Ayan start over, return to the state at the beginning of the story, return to his hometown and meet his friends. I hope he can take the path he wants and live a happy life o(￣▽￣)o

Nice looking, but knife. I didn't read Dao Ziwen in the first place. I was attracted by the joy in the early stage. In the middle, I was knifed while eating life and death. When I was stabbed, tears flowed down my face, and when I knelt down, the corner of my mouth was shoulder to shoulder with the sun. Now, my heart is full of holes, it's really beautiful and it's also a real knife [smile] To be honest, can't we come here happily? My little heart can't stand it [crying]

It's super good-looking, and it's probably the best Star Iron article I've ever read on Tomato. The protagonists of many of the recommended articles before are all Star Gods, etc., With extremely high martial arts, but the story is flat, and the writing is not strong enough. I can't hold it in my arms at all. I just threw it away after dozens of chapters just to refresh my mind. However, this article really captures the emotions, the story line, the power system are also great, and the characters are not OOC. Don't miss it if you pass by. This is a article that will make people work hard to catch up!

If it's not enough, we will fly up happily! There are just too few and it's not enough to watch! ! The attraction of bloodline is so touching! The way Jingyuan and Leyan get along is so happy!

Da Da gives Le Yan his unique charm, making him stand out among other fan fictions. However, his vivid and emotional writing style is also Da Da's advantage. I hope to see more Da Da's works in the future.

Nice! (Although I didn't want to watch it at all at first, and even blocked it...) I originally opened it because there was nothing to watch, but I became addicted to it... And then I didn't know what to say. . . And, sir, would you like a little more? 😭

It's very beautiful, thank you to the author. ૮(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)ა

I really like this book. So far, the front part is quite sweet, but now I don't know what to say about the back part. Anyway, it's really good-looking, and the plot is also very twists and turns. I strongly urge everyone to fall in love with this book. In fact, even if you don't play Bengtie, this book is still very interesting. But after watching Beng Tie, I felt more immersed. So whether you want to read a book with two male protagonists, a heartthrob or no CP, or just a plot, or you just want to read a book by Beng Tie, this book is really highly recommended. .

It's a very good fanfic with very distinct characters and personalities. From what I've read, this is the only one with two male protagonists, at least for now. It may not overturn the original tragedy, but it makes the story more dynamic. As a senior captain, to be honest, I don't really like looking at knives, but knives are also essential to sublimate the plot.

The ones written in big letters are great. I have always wanted to see Long Long and Yuanyuan Tie Tie. The other ones written in big letters are also very good, but none of them can pierce my heart like yours. This book is highly recommended if you like Dan Feng, Dan Heng, Jing Yuan, etc. You can give it a try. The main plot is a bit ambiguous, with different one-on-one episodes.

A very good novel that made me want to read! There is no OOC in either character interaction or character design, and Leyan, as the protagonist, has fulfilled his due role in this story. He has a sincere heart and a desire for light. He gives a lot of love and receives a lot of love. This is really a good story!

This book is so beautiful! Leyan is really good! And it's not very sharp! That Danfeng extra story made me feel so overwhelmed that it finally became sweeter. Oh my god, I love you, author!

The author's writing is really good, the characters are not OOC at all, and the emotional descriptions are delicate and real, and the plot is coherent and logical. It is one of the highest quality articles I have ever read. But when the author updates it, can he choose a day during the day? I can't stand it every time I wait for a new chapter. [Sending Hearts]

It looks great, Ayan is really cute, and the car is pretty good too🌚In general, there is no knife, the knife is part of the original plot, I don't think it's a big deal, unless you have low tears, and the main tone is more daily, quite warm, in short, I recommend it

I have never seen this kind of new railway track before, maybe it's because of the novelty, but I especially like to see this kind of track. It's easy to understand like this. It won't sound boring, it has its own understanding, it won't be the same as other fans, and it will have a very poor sense of substitution.

Wuwu, Leyan, Wuwu, you are real, I cry to death. Great plot and made my brain spin. Inheriting mhy's sword, xx looks at you tenderly and says no more I declare! The extra is the main film! Woo woo, cp knocked so hard that the corners of my mouth were flying.