Wuxia, but not entirely wuxia. A tale of pride, but one you cannot take pride in. The protagonist becomes Lin Pingzhi, a tragic supporting character. In this turbulent martial-arts world, people are bound to leave, and the storms of the jianghu batter the young man.
He only wants to make up for past regrets. There are too many tragedies that need to be undone, but with talismans at his side, he is destined to forge a different life in a different world.
Each story has only one female lead, or none at all. The martial-arts worlds may be familiar, but each journey of the heart is different.
The Smiling, Proud Wanderer, The Sword Stained with Royal Blood... These are all familiar martial-arts worlds, chapters from old dreams.
The idea is good, but the writing is really not good, it's too messy, it's just a hodgepodge. Yilin's father is a monk who refuses to quit, and there is Dongfang Bai, which is not the version. Moreover, he befriended Qu Yang and Linghu Chong at the beginning, and let Tian Boguang off again and again. After eight years of hard training in martial arts, and with the bonus of talismans, it took so much effort to kill Yu Canghai, I really can't stand it anymore. The author can't help but start from the beginning, I really can't stand this.
Human common sense is so poor. For example, Lin Pingzhi went to intercept and kill Yu Canghai, then Mu Gaofeng came to besiege the protagonist, and finally Yue Buqun was watching. Normal people would retreat first, but the protagonist insisted on fighting to the death. In the end, it was a draw, and Yu Canghai escaped and the protagonist was slightly injured and fainted. Then the protagonist was taken away by Yue Buqun. After waking up, he was very grateful for Yue Buqun's life-saving grace... If it was really a life-saving grace, he wouldn't be watching and helpless, and he was not seriously injured in the first place.
I don't know what I'm going to do, but I'm going to take a big detour and write a dozen or 20 chapters for something that obviously can be finalized. Alas, no wonder no one is there.
Trying to imitate others and act in a nondescript manner
Not good. Not good-looking. Mark it.
In the article, what does Liu Zhengfeng mean by being a human being in two lifetimes? Is he born again?
The idea is good, but the writing is really not good, it's too messy, it's just a hodgepodge. Yilin's father is a monk who refuses to quit, and there is Dongfang Bai, which is not the version. Moreover, he befriended Qu Yang and Linghu Chong at the beginning, and let Tian Boguang off again and again. After eight years of hard training in martial arts, and with the bonus of talismans, it took so much effort to kill Yu Canghai, I really can't stand it anymore. The author can't help but start from the beginning, I really can't stand this.
Human common sense is so poor. For example, Lin Pingzhi went to intercept and kill Yu Canghai, then Mu Gaofeng came to besiege the protagonist, and finally Yue Buqun was watching. Normal people would retreat first, but the protagonist insisted on fighting to the death. In the end, it was a draw, and Yu Canghai escaped and the protagonist was slightly injured and fainted. Then the protagonist was taken away by Yue Buqun. After waking up, he was very grateful for Yue Buqun's life-saving grace... If it was really a life-saving grace, he wouldn't be watching and helpless, and he was not seriously injured in the first place.
I don't know what I'm going to do, but I'm going to take a big detour and write a dozen or 20 chapters for something that obviously can be finalized. Alas, no wonder no one is there.
Trying to imitate others and act in a nondescript manner
Not good. Not good-looking. Mark it.
In the article, what does Liu Zhengfeng mean by being a human being in two lifetimes? Is he born again?
Still very good