Quick Travel: the Yandere Villain Always Wants to Live with Me

The writing style is good, and the wording can also express its excellent aesthetics. The first world is well written. In the second world, the male supporting role is too strong and hinders the female protagonist. The female protagonist loses her dominance and is in a controlled position. In the third world, the male protagonist rescued the female protagonist again, which made the female protagonist appear weak. The male protagonist restored the memory of the previous small world. The male protagonist and the female protagonist were evenly matched or even slightly weaker than the female protagonist. Now due to poor information, the female protagonist has become the weakest among the three. She cannot even take the lead like in the first world and can only passively accept the plot arranged by the male protagonist. In the fourth world, the male protagonist is the highest-status immortal and accepts the female protagonist as his disciple. It is a bit like a traditional kitsch romance. Later, the female protagonist is rescued by the male partner... It is a bit difficult to comment, and the female protagonist seems to have been refusing to think about the plot of this world and the psychology and actions of the people around her, leaving herself in a passive and helpless state. The author's control over the relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist in the first world has surpassed many others. He gives five stars to encourage all the first world and the female and male protagonists in the second world, but he also bears deep responsibility for his love. Let me add, it's not PEG, it doesn't have a black female supporting role, and it doesn't have a male rivalry. The author has surpassed many novels I have read in terms of logic, plot and characters. I have no intention of disliking the author. I am just pointing out some areas that may be improved. It is because I like the author's thoughts, writing style, logic and characters that I gave it five stars. Mainly, I don't like the male supporting cast being too strong, and I don't like the female protagonist not thinking or judging the plot, and just blindly following the plot. I hope the author will continue writing. I feel that the author has great potential and will write better and better.

It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, and it's a rare fast-traveling novel that doesn't involve female rivalry. It has many positive female characters and is worthy of praise. It can be regarded as a qualified female love story. The female protagonist is lustful and either loves the male protagonist very much or treats him as a beautiful little toy. The emotional line of the whole story is made up by the male protagonist himself. But the heroine seems a bit dull hahaha. The male protagonist is also a man, and he has a good mind for love.

I have to say, Da Da's writing style is really good. After this book is finished, if the author writes another book, please kick me [shy]

It's really nice to watch, and it doesn't feel like a cookie-cutter movie. In the past, when I saw female attackers, they would deliberately weaken the male protagonist and then increase the female protagonist's power. It seemed weird, like a dodder flower. The male protagonist here is different. He does like the female protagonist, but he also has his own career and so on.

I just finished watching the first world, it was great. There is no female rivalry, and the emotional tension between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is handled very well. The heroine is not as frustrated or helpless as other guides. It looks pretty cool [eating melon]

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooocha According to your sweethearts every time we kiss.

Sure enough, people always fall into the trap of the same author! I love watching it. The male protagonist is charming but not girly, and the female protagonist is A but not fake.

The big new book is also very beautiful! Looking forward to the follow-up plot! Please update more, I love you so much [blowing kiss]

It's really super fun! ! ! I have read all of the author's books. The writing is humorous and interesting, and the storyline is not dull. The heroine's character is very real and vivid. The woman attacks the man and is the victim... The hero is super arrogant and cute, and he pretends to be pitiful and begs for the heroine's sympathy! ! !

Although I finished reading this book in less than two days, I still like this book in my heart. I like Bai Sang's character and the setting of this book. But I am still a little selfish. I hope this book can be longer. It is not enough to read, not enough at all [crying]

It looks good, I like the big style [laughs]

It's so good, so good, so good. The more you look at it, the better it gets, because it's being serialized. I couldn't bear to read it, so after reading the first Little World, I went to read the author's second book, and it turned out that I had finished it!!! I didn't give up and read the third book, and I had already read more than 400 chapters on the bookshelf!!! Teacher, we are a match made in heaven hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

I personally wasn't too interested in the theme of the first world, so I skipped through it. The rest of the worlds were very interesting. The female protagonist was not annoying and made people feel that she was very cute. The male protagonists in each world also had good personalities, but it ended so quickly. Can I read the letter she wrote to Jishi [face covering] Bai Sang & Jiang Qi!

It looks good, but why do some places only have foreshadowing and no answers? For example, what happened to Jiyue and the heroine in the second world in the previous life? Why does he say that the heroine cannot remember it after reincarnation?

，，，～ Woohoo, how could the author do this? How could Nan Yu recover his memory? Jiyue, Chen Feiying and Jishi are actually Baishi, right? This affectionate male lead really makes me feel so sad, so distressed, ah ah ah (breaks down and cries) (screams) (it hurts so much that my heart can't bear it, ugh)

The first part is great, but the ending is a bit sudden. The last world ends a bit too quickly and ends directly. However, the stories in the first few worlds are all great, and the male and female protagonists are also great. The only regret is that the ending is a bit anxious, but the ending is very good and satisfying.

The characters really have distinct personalities. It's really good-looking. I can't even describe it (´◊ω◊｀). I gave up on all other fast-traveling stories after reading them halfway through. This is the only one I've finished reading. It's so good-looking.

The first world is really interesting. Oh my God, the yandere feeling is really good. The characters of the male protagonists in the subsequent worlds are well described, but it is a pity that it ends suddenly and ends abruptly. I hope there will be a side story [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] to make up for the lonely life of the heroine.

It's really good-looking, hee hee hee [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [understood] [smirking] [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy]

It just looks good! It's not draggy In fact, it is recommended that you don't use your brain when writing the introduction. After all, many people still like to be realistic and look for logic when reading novels.

I quite like the character Bai Shi, but it's a pity that the heroine has an official partner.

It's nice, but a bit short. Can the author make it longer next time?

As for Jishi, the heroine can't have both! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The first few worlds have always been dominated by the female protagonist. I was a little uncomfortable seeing the last world, but fortunately, the female protagonist is not someone who has to sacrifice herself from the beginning, which is quite good.

I would vomit blood if you didn't write such a touching male and female protagonists into four loves, but overall it looks good.

There are almost no degrading words in this article, and the male protagonist's character is also attractive. However, except for the first world, there is no content in the other worlds that ends too hastily. But the author is great, he will definitely write better and better [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

It's great. The normal routines are mixed with some other novel little routines. There is no female protagonist, no heroine Kurohara, and the heroine is not a love brain. The only shortcoming is that it is too short [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

Why is the score so low? Come on, super! Class! Good! Look! Is it good? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh setting design of a beautiful character design is great hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

I like this type of [admiration]

A bit GB style, very nice

I love the male protagonist M so much, and the female protagonist has a great personality, but it's really a pity that my younger brother Bai Shi