The protagonist was about to withdraw his master's degree, and when he came out, he found that everything in front of him was something he had never seen before. It felt like he had been abducted by aliens and taken to an unknown place in another world.
Reader comments
I can't see what's interesting about it. I feel like it's all about the water chapters, and there's nothing attractive about it to keep reading.
I can only say it in one word
Come on, it looks good
The more I write, the worse it becomes. Fortunately, I was able to transform in the early stage and then it was completely gone.
Generally speaking, it's okay. The problem is that the protagonist has too few scenes, and there is always a feeling that it doesn't make any difference whether there is a protagonist or not.
I can't see what's interesting about it. I feel like it's all about the water chapters, and there's nothing attractive about it to keep reading.
I can only say it in one word
Come on, it looks good
The more I write, the worse it becomes. Fortunately, I was able to transform in the early stage and then it was completely gone.
Generally speaking, it's okay. The problem is that the protagonist has too few scenes, and there is always a feeling that it doesn't make any difference whether there is a protagonist or not.