The Old Worlds Invade the Star Dome Railway

Is there anything bad about original plots? I feel that the writing is really good. The protagonist is flesh and blood, the supporting characters are also three-dimensional, and the plot is logical. To give one or two stars just because it is too far away from the main line is really discouraging for an author. I personally think that compared to other Bengtie novels that just shoehorn the protagonist into it, I think it is quite awkward and awkward. It is not easy to read Bengtie novels with a growth story line for the protagonist. Although I haven't read too much, it is still quite interesting so far. Please support the author.

I think it's quite interesting. Although it may not have much to do with the Star Dome Railway for the time being, it is at least somewhat related, and the plot is pretty good, at least it's not poisonous, right?

The prequel is too long, and I might leave it before I even read it.

The polish is very good and delicate, a lot of effort has been put into the character creation, and the writing style is also good. I recommend it to old bookworms, but if you just want to watch fighting and killing to release negative emotions, forget it. The protagonist is a normal commoner born in socialism. It is slow to read but very comfortable to read. The author's use of the world view is probably a long one, and the first part will not be connected with the plot. The idea is very good, it depends on how the author controls it. At least from the article, it is very good. Of course, if you are only interested in the star tag and don't care much about the content of the article, it may be a bit uncomfortable to read. The above is the impression after reading. Later book friends can refer to it and decide whether it is suitable for you.

The prequel of Bengtie fanfic is too long, and there are still very few about the starry sky, but the plot is good and the subject matter is good. I hope the author can speed up the progress. Come on!

Looking at Star Rail from another perspective, we didn't feel it at all when we played the game. Just a single Yadino Six curiosity, because of the tragedy of Xinghe. An ordinary man's struggle. There are no blocking points at all, and the plot is quite compact.

Well, so far so good. Well, it's quite innovative among Bengtie fanfics. Well, it just feels like the connection with Bengtie is a little less. Looking forward to future developments. Well, it would be okay if the protagonist really became a celestial being. But if it turns into a woman, personally, I can't stand it.

Don't be a bad writer, I watch three videos for you every day [crying][crying][crying]

Come on, the subject matter is very novel, I am optimistic about you

By the way, this novel is of high quality, so why doesn't anyone read it? On the contrary, those that are very poisonous and abstract are very popular, which is outrageous. But I hope the author will continue writing, I will keep reading, come on

She looks good, when will she become a girl [shy]

It's quite good. Although before joining Star Train, I wanted it to be an original martial arts novel rather than a Bentie fanfic. However, I didn't expect that the fusion of Star Breaker King Insect would gain the power of breeding. Currently, this is the only one that has seen the operation of breeding (there may be others, but I haven't seen it). Other breedings are all about opening a harem, so it's not as good as this one.

The setting angle is very strange, come on [eat melon]

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

No one at the scene responded. Lin Keke was obviously stunned for a moment, and his whole face turned red in the blink of an eye. "It's the young lady from the Lin family who was stripped of her fork by the idiot young master from the Ning family." During this period of time, he could clearly feel that his body was gradually becoming more feminine. It was not obvious when he was at the yellow level. Maybe at the earth level, this change would be very strong. [Laughing][what][laughing][thinking][cool] The author's writing is really getting better and better😊😍

It feels like a treasure novel that introduces part of Bengtie's worldview.

Can't I just fill it up for you? If you don't update again, you'll be sorry for me At least it's finished and there's an ending, right?

It finally ended amidst regrets, and the reversal in the later period was really strong.

The main character changes. I can't stand it. But the plot is okay. It's just sad and hard for me to accept.

It's good to write a new story line in a certain background. Pretty good.

It's really good👍, it's a masterpiece that shines in front of your eyes. Don't ask, just ask and you'll be greeted by a sea of ​​people. I love you so much.

It's a very interesting book, the characters are well-drawn, and the author shows the world as he thinks about it, and he manages to pay for his own feelings [Learned]

This book is relatively slow to read. I skipped the part about Star Train. It was similar to the feeling of Immortal Lord. It has a very realistic feeling. No one will be nice to you for no reason. How should I write this book later? Are you following the main line? Moreover, the author said that there is no heroine and the main plot is like being a nanny.

After seeing the latest chapter, don't let the protagonist be plotted by Void Manzo. At least the protagonist must know Void Manzo's plan. His skills are not as good as those of others and he has never fought before. He cannot be deceived as a fool.

Personally, I think it's okay. Each character has his or her own thoughts, and it doesn't feel like they come from the production line [Thinking] It's more beautiful than those that don't change much from the main plot. The author can just write according to his own ideas [please update] [please update]

It's good to read, but the author is definitely deeply inspired by this comic, Corpse Brother. After all, the names of those moves are so evocative.

The front is fine. , A bit watery in the mid-term, but super exciting in the later stage.

Wonderful, I feel this article is well written and wonderful

I really like it! There are really very few articles like this. They don't completely follow the plot. It's much harder to write than those who copy the plot. Good luck to the author!

What does the protagonist look like?