After Traveling Through Ancient Times, I Relied on the Holy Mother System to Live Forever

Well enough. The heroine's design is quite fragrant, and it is bound to the Madonna system, but there are natural loopholes. The writing is good, occasionally funny, not too blunt but to be honest, there is nothing eye-catching about it. The relationship between the subordinates and other female friends who use each other but are mutually beneficial and sincere is still well written. Demining: It is not a completely enjoyable story about a heroine, because the system restrictions will be very frustrating, and the best expressions can make people angry; there are a lot of plots where she works as a concubine for the prince, and my personal opinion is that it is best for the prince to die early and buy vvvip tickets in the beast lane; ♂ There are many scenes, and there is female competition, but it is not very obvious.

I thought I was running away from famine, but I ended up going to the capital. I thought I was going to have a house fight, but the heroine faked her death and escaped. I thought I was going to make a living in the world, but she ended up cultivating immortality [laughing and crying]. But I personally like it because the heroine is really self-improving.

Can there be less house fighting and female competition?

The Holy Mother is not the Holy Mother, it doesn't look awkward, and it is better than other novels about selling sheep's heads and selling dog meat. The plot is very interesting and original. I am looking forward to the follow-up ~ Please hurry up, otherwise the little whip will serve you🌾

Who knows? I just decided to read all night. It was three o'clock in the morning, and suddenly I found that all the books had been read, and there was no more. I was in a bad mood [crying]. I didn't expect it to be so good, so I just clicked on it to kill time. I thought it was a poor kid who was caught. The family is not happy, they make all kinds of difficulties and then just counterattack to run their own business. I didn't expect it to be like this, but the story is getting more and more exciting. The reborn time travelers have appeared, and the cultivators have also appeared. I don't know what kind of excitement there will be in the future. I'm really looking forward to it!

The uniqueness and innovation of the novel, the system elements and tasks, the setting of "Born to Death" are so touching, I love it, and how to show the growth and changes of the characters in these tasks. This setting is not only novel, but also arouses the curiosity of our readers, and we look forward to the follow-up

I was put off by the title of the book. I didn't add it to my bookshelf when I saw the recommendation several times. This time I was in a book shortage, so I finished it in one glance. The author writes well, without dragging on, and the plot is compact, novel, and very interesting.

I hope the author will not stop updating. . It's hard to find a wonderful book in this book shortage. I originally thought it was a story about escaping from the system, but it turned out to be a house fight. I thought it was a house fight rising to a palace fight, and then it became a cultivator. It was exciting, and my writing ability was very strong!

The previous book "Villa" was quite interesting, so hurry up and write this one.

It is a very interesting novel. It is written from the mortal world to cultivating immortals, and it has a little humor. I suggest you read it. It is really different. When I first saw the Madonna system, I thought it was another kind of good old guy being scolded. In fact, it is not. It is well written.

One follow-up comment is that the title of the book is indeed misleading. I hesitated before clicking in and reading the introduction (I suggest changing it, but of course it's just a suggestion hhh) Another surprising point is that he suddenly switched to the channel of cultivating immortals in the later period (I didn't see the introduction at all Σ(ﾟ∀ﾟﾉ)ﾉ)

Although it is a routine stitching article, there are a lot of stitches, so it is quite beautiful. The writing is very clever. In the early stage, the heroine has developed to the top in the ancient world. When she is about to fall into the burnout period of farming novels, the heroine gets clues about cultivating immortals, and then decisively changes the map to the world of cultivation, and starts to develop again from scratch. The upgrading flow is really exciting. However, in the later stage, I discovered that the plot of the world of cultivation is actually very cliche, and it is not as exciting as the part where the heroine brought the system to start from scratch in ancient times. It's still the same formula of apprenticeship to a big boss + searching for geniuses and treasures + slapping the best in the face. The villain's persistence is touching. He doesn't care about anything but wants to harm people. The heroine's master and brother's sudden love for licking the baby is so strong that it's a bit inexplicable, so I won't go into detail in the article. The overall level is quite good, very enjoyable, there are many villains but the heroine never suffers. It is recommended to watch.

From escaping to house fighting to cultivating immortals, I changed several maps, but it was very smooth to read. The heroine was restricted by the system but still worked hard to fight for her own interests within the rules. There was no OOC. Like it.

Immortality writing is also my love [laughs]

Looks good, use the system to collect wool in various ways

The setting is novel. The Madonna system is actually a two-sided system. Those who can't kill me will eventually make my wedding dress. The story of ancient vulgarity reaching the extreme and the heroine becoming stronger.

Miscalculated. I never read serialized books, and the books I read with great interest suddenly disappeared. As a bookworm for many years, I am very picky. The author's writing style is good and everything is logical. The subject matter is very novel. This is the first time I have watched this kind of death training. The heroine is very knowledgeable about affairs. She is patient when she should be patient and ruthless when she should be cruel. Smooth writing makes people feel comfortable

It's good-looking and funny. The heroine has never been wronged. I just hope she won't be fooled by the prince.

Nice! The heroine is not the kind of saint who doesn't pay back after she suffers a loss. She is quite happy. However, when she was not cultivating immortality in the early stage, it was very annoying to have to deal with those princes and concubines. When she was cultivating immortality, she never suffered any big losses. [Blow kiss] A good treasure with love and justice.

I think it's pretty good to watch. There are no plots that made me have a cerebral hemorrhage. The heroine doesn't flirt with men either. It's normal.

The setting is very attractive to me. What doesn't kill me will eventually make me stronger (non-mainstream statement). In short, it is a story about a pig's feet that grow and become stronger through life and death.

When I read it earlier, I thought it was an ancient gold-fingered novel, but in fact it is a counterattack flow about cultivating immortals (I don't know if this counts as a spoiler). Every twist and turn is quite unexpected, and it becomes more and more interesting. Very interesting setting, I hope there will be more surprises in the future

I almost got deceived by the rating, but actually it looks pretty good overall. I quickly caught up with the latest chapter.

It's super beautiful, the setting is very novel, and there are no obvious bugs. The heroine has a Madonna system but she's not Madonna at all. Good luck to the author [sending my heart] I really want to improve the rating of this novel. Why do I finally find a novel that I have read from the beginning and want to catch up on it? The rating is so low. Those with ratings above 90 are not very good.

The writing is very good, the plot follows one after another, and the heroine is an unbeatable Xiaoqiang! Even if you die, you will have someone to support you! The process of changing from weak to strong is very coherent, and it's so comfortable to watch! Please update more authors!

It's good-looking and I like the character of the heroine, who is hard-working and tenacious.

I kept reading it without realizing it, it was very attractive and the writing was excellent. The heroine is smart and courageous but also a little naughty. Although there are some logical problems, the victory is that the system can be self-consistent [laughing] Author, come on, old bookworms have already paid attention to it and added it to the bookshelf. It is worth reading.

Interesting article, cheers

See behind. The more you look at it, the better it looks

It's nice to see the Madonna system bound to the protagonist, but not Madonna.