The Heart of the Hunt

So far it's very exciting, and I'm looking forward to the development of the follow-up case. I've made a good start at the beginning, and I have a lot of ideas. I hope I can pick it up later. The two of them are also very good at eating, and some small details are well written. However, I still have to make some suggestions. Some sentences are in reverse order and do not make sense. , Missing words, and the interpretation of the word "quan" appears twice. I hope the teacher can detail the details in the future. But generally speaking, it does not affect the understanding of the overall plot. It is a good experience to read it in one go. Finally, I would like to thank the teacher for cooking and writing more and reading more 😘

It's very nice, but there are some awkward sentences and minor issues.

Even though it's a fan, it's a really good story! I got addicted to it without realizing it, and felt like I was reading a new criminal investigation novel. The progress of the relationship between the two is also delicate and natural! Nice

Shen Yi opened his mouth, but before he could speak, Du Cheng took the lead and said, "Shen Yi can't have made a mistake in his drawing. There must be something wrong. Shen Yi, can you draw what they looked like when they were children?" "Of course" Shen Yi picked up the brush again, glanced at the portraits of the two people, and started painting without hesitation. Soon, the appearance of the two children appeared on the drawing paper. Their eyes were still very innocent when they were children, and they were not yet covered with that cold layer.

It's so annoying, ahhhhhhh, the corners of my mouth never come down at all

Super, super pretty, very sweet

The emotions are delicate, the characters are three-dimensional, the plots are interlocking, and the character descriptions are not OOC (in my personal opinion). This article can be said to be the most to my liking since I read Cheng Xin Cheng Yi fan fiction.

Super beautiful, help 🥺

Good-looking, good-looking

It's so pretty, and it's so cute.