(Strong female + cultivating immortals + growth flow + no cp + micro group portrait)
Jiang Yi traveled through time, and when she opened her eyes again, she became the female supporting character in a cultivation novel. Judging from her overall role and plot, there are only three points:
First: Bullying the male protagonist severely when he is still in his prime has become a major motivation for the male protagonist's early development.
Second: After the male protagonist counterattacked, he was beaten by him, King Tianliang, and was severely slapped in the face, which became a great point for the male protagonist to stand out in the middle period.
Third: When the male protagonist is at the top of his game, he will be jealous of other beauties, and he will be jealous of all the beauties, and provide a romantic scene where the male protagonist becomes successful and becomes famous in the later period.
Jiang Yi: That's not necessary. If you can't offend me, why can't you hide from me?
The system that appeared with her sudden death: In fact, it is a dead end anyway, because the world is about to collapse because of everyone's wisdom!
So for the sake of the cannon fodder, tool men, and backdrops that have been poisoned in this world, and for her own destiny, Jiang Yi embarked on an alternative path of cultivation.
Until much later...
The cold and talented female protagonist who originally died for the male protagonist put a hairpin on Jiang Yi and smiled tenderly.
The dodder flower heroine, who originally treated the male protagonist tenderly, fights side by side with Jiang Yi and aspires to the path to immortality.
The original male protagonist, who was originally invincible and cold-hearted, pointed the tip of his sword at Jiang Yi, his eyes full of obsession: "The only one who can defeat you is me!"
Jiang Yi: "... Thank you for your love, but I am undefeated."
Reader comments
The writing is okay, but the beginning is a bit wordy and cumbersome, which almost put me off. Later, it gradually got better, but it suddenly tied it. (I finally found one I could watch. Why am I so thin? I really cried.)
I really like it. The plot is very exciting and does not fall into the cliche. The biggest advantage is the characterization, which is not traditional.
Characterization/
In addition to being smart, witty, sincere and straightforward, the heroine's character is also very tolerant, that is, she can only give a little guidance. All the storylines that need to be corrected actually come from the character's subjectivity. This is very obvious in the Ling'er line. The protagonist is not a preachy or cynical person. She focuses on the gentleness and calmness of her heart, but she is not frustrated and has her own humanity.
For example, the second senior sister, I know from the details that she is a homebody, who reluctantly takes over the little flowers raised by the heroine during her training (Xiaoyu finally got New Year's money from her ()); she doesn't want to do anything, so she will quickly go out to practice when it is time to choose her first apprentice; daily life She is very lifelike and can sleep in late (it is hinted in the article, but it is said that she is in Qingxiu); in the Jiang Mansion incident, she turned the tide at the last moment (in fact, the second senior sister is usually very quiet, I really didn't think she was very powerful at first until she became the boss)
For example, Master, on the surface he is cold, but in fact he is very kind. He is a bit sad when he mentions the exercises (there is a story tbc), and there are hints in the article that Master was also an unintentional person in the past (there is a story tbc)
For example, the senior brother who just appeared has been practicing abroad for many years. I just saw him being chased by other sects with dogs. It can be seen that he is a very trouble-making character (there is a story, which will probably be in the next plot)
Another example is the elder sister candidate of another sect who is a bit like Black Heart Lotus, Xiao Huahua who is poisoned by the heroine's "beautiful singing voice", the cold male disciple in black with superb swordsmanship, and the original heroine who has a photographic memory (structural flow).
I am very good at writing. I love character creation! ! !
One day, I tied it up. There are too few reviews for such a beautiful book, so I have already passed it on to friends around me.
The advantage of this book is that
There is no data overflowing from the explosion (such as rubbing tens of thousands of spiritual stones with one hand)
Without losing IQ, people will not be able to understand the point of choice.
The plot is basically interconnected, without a strong sense of fragmentation. It is a paradise for plot lovers, and the writing is excellent.
Shortcomings
Some scene descriptions could have been described by another author (such as Jiedan), but the author really did a good job of telling the story without talking nonsense, and it is not actually a shortcoming.
The description of the supporting characters is still a bit weak. Maybe the book is still in the early stages, so although the supporting characters have different personalities and leave an impression, they still feel like they are rushing the plot, lacking flesh and blood and in-depth exploration? Perhaps the author can focus on describing the love-hate entanglement of one or two supporting characters in the future?
The writing is good, but the plot is a bit rough in some places, but overall it's very enjoyable.
So well written! The quality far exceeds the heat! The writing and plot are very good! Female friendly and non-sexist. Hope it becomes popular soon! Really like it! I think this is the best one among all the female cultivation texts that Tomato has read!
Good-looking, but a little lacking
The author should do a lot to update it. It's not enough to watch. I'm so looking forward to the follow-up plot. I really like the girls in the book. They walked out of the established plot and walked on their own path.
It's beautiful. I really like the author's style of writing. The writing style is also good. There is no inexplicable female rivalry between the heroine and the supporting character. Even the serialized novel is straight into the trap [Blow kiss]
It's very interesting. I think it's very interesting and meaningful. Although not many people have read it, this book is really good.
Beautiful! The plot is step-by-step. I like Jiang Yi's character very much. It's even better. There will be more to come! Love to watch
Good-looking, good-looking, take care of yourself first
Www is really beautiful! ! !
Good looking good looking
Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking
Super pretty, hehehe
Why is there only 86 chapters? ? ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhinging reading, it's not easy to find a book with a lot of female supporting characters and important roles.
The author raised the question of teenagers and corrected it. He is a very good author.
I have only read the previous part of the content, and I will add comments about the content later.
I wish the author will write better and better.
The writing is okay, but the beginning is a bit wordy and cumbersome, which almost put me off. Later, it gradually got better, but it suddenly tied it. (I finally found one I could watch. Why am I so thin? I really cried.)
I really like it. The plot is very exciting and does not fall into the cliche. The biggest advantage is the characterization, which is not traditional. Characterization/ In addition to being smart, witty, sincere and straightforward, the heroine's character is also very tolerant, that is, she can only give a little guidance. All the storylines that need to be corrected actually come from the character's subjectivity. This is very obvious in the Ling'er line. The protagonist is not a preachy or cynical person. She focuses on the gentleness and calmness of her heart, but she is not frustrated and has her own humanity. For example, the second senior sister, I know from the details that she is a homebody, who reluctantly takes over the little flowers raised by the heroine during her training (Xiaoyu finally got New Year's money from her ()); she doesn't want to do anything, so she will quickly go out to practice when it is time to choose her first apprentice; daily life She is very lifelike and can sleep in late (it is hinted in the article, but it is said that she is in Qingxiu); in the Jiang Mansion incident, she turned the tide at the last moment (in fact, the second senior sister is usually very quiet, I really didn't think she was very powerful at first until she became the boss) For example, Master, on the surface he is cold, but in fact he is very kind. He is a bit sad when he mentions the exercises (there is a story tbc), and there are hints in the article that Master was also an unintentional person in the past (there is a story tbc) For example, the senior brother who just appeared has been practicing abroad for many years. I just saw him being chased by other sects with dogs. It can be seen that he is a very trouble-making character (there is a story, which will probably be in the next plot) Another example is the elder sister candidate of another sect who is a bit like Black Heart Lotus, Xiao Huahua who is poisoned by the heroine's "beautiful singing voice", the cold male disciple in black with superb swordsmanship, and the original heroine who has a photographic memory (structural flow). I am very good at writing. I love character creation! ! !
One day, I tied it up. There are too few reviews for such a beautiful book, so I have already passed it on to friends around me. The advantage of this book is that There is no data overflowing from the explosion (such as rubbing tens of thousands of spiritual stones with one hand) Without losing IQ, people will not be able to understand the point of choice. The plot is basically interconnected, without a strong sense of fragmentation. It is a paradise for plot lovers, and the writing is excellent. Shortcomings Some scene descriptions could have been described by another author (such as Jiedan), but the author really did a good job of telling the story without talking nonsense, and it is not actually a shortcoming. The description of the supporting characters is still a bit weak. Maybe the book is still in the early stages, so although the supporting characters have different personalities and leave an impression, they still feel like they are rushing the plot, lacking flesh and blood and in-depth exploration? Perhaps the author can focus on describing the love-hate entanglement of one or two supporting characters in the future?
The writing is good, but the plot is a bit rough in some places, but overall it's very enjoyable.
So well written! The quality far exceeds the heat! The writing and plot are very good! Female friendly and non-sexist. Hope it becomes popular soon! Really like it! I think this is the best one among all the female cultivation texts that Tomato has read!
Good-looking, but a little lacking
The author should do a lot to update it. It's not enough to watch. I'm so looking forward to the follow-up plot. I really like the girls in the book. They walked out of the established plot and walked on their own path.
It's beautiful. I really like the author's style of writing. The writing style is also good. There is no inexplicable female rivalry between the heroine and the supporting character. Even the serialized novel is straight into the trap [Blow kiss]
It's very interesting. I think it's very interesting and meaningful. Although not many people have read it, this book is really good.
Beautiful! The plot is step-by-step. I like Jiang Yi's character very much. It's even better. There will be more to come! Love to watch
Good-looking, good-looking, take care of yourself first
Www is really beautiful! ! !
Good looking good looking
Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking
Super pretty, hehehe
Why is there only 86 chapters? ? ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhinging reading, it's not easy to find a book with a lot of female supporting characters and important roles.
The author raised the question of teenagers and corrected it. He is a very good author. I have only read the previous part of the content, and I will add comments about the content later. I wish the author will write better and better.