Ke Xue: Participating in the Plot Will Shorten Your Lifespan

[Twelve Comments] First, let's give an overall overview of my positioning of this book. In the category of single female sorrow, it can be compared with "The Unscientific World of Ke Xue" (Er Rang) and "The Criminal Planner of the World of Ke Xue" (A Duan). As of now (the first three volumes), it can be ranked at least in the top five. Then I made a partial evaluation of this book from six aspects: plot arrangement, plot advancement, character creation, atmosphere creation, writing style, and feeling. 1. Plot arrangement. Originally, I was not satisfied with the plot arrangement of the first volume of Parrot House. I thought the plot was very slow. But it is undeniable that this part of the plot is very important for the characterization of the protagonist. At the same time, the plot arrangement for rescuing Mingmei focuses on arranging the early interactions with Mingmei, downplaying the rescue process and giving people a different feeling. The plot is fuller and more realistic than the rescue plots in other novels. 2. Plot advancement. The rhythm of this book is quite suitable for the advancement of the plot. The plot of Parrot House has a rich background, and not too much text is used. In the second volume, the arrival of the protagonist group is quickly introduced to enter the theme, including the plot of meeting Shiho for the first time at night. The plot is also quite appropriate and does not appear to be abrupt. 3. Character creation. The character creation in this book is different from most white texts. This book uses the most realistic writing style to create an uneasy image of a time traveler. The protagonist is different from other protagonists who are always very wise and almost demonic. Taking everything into account, the protagonist's beginning is like a real ordinary person's time travel. As for the change in mentality during time travel, unlike other books that briefly describe this part, this book focuses on describing this change in mentality, making it more immersive. As for the portrayal of other characters, first of all, there is no OOC feeling. Although Kidd Hongzi's portrayal was not restored at the beginning, he soon returned to the state and made good modifications. 4. Atmosphere creation. The atmosphere creation of this book gives people an amazing feeling, full of tension, sense of substitution, and highly contagious. 5. The writing style of this book is outstanding. Within the division, at least the top three. 6. The feeling of this book is not greasy. It gives people a sense of fragrance, comfort and warmth from the heart. Overall Rating: Excellent

Yesterday's song was the sad wind. Yesterday's sound was a wailing trumpet. The you and me of yesterday are the imperfect past. A sour tear is a sadness that cannot be washed away. You and I today are fools clumsily immersed in the past. A storm took away my complicated mood. Tomorrow you and me will be a continuation of boring daily life. The spring buds penetrate into my heart and look down at my sins. Look, it's resonating; the water at dusk is cold and lonely. The past is still before my eyes. The bright neon lights cannot pierce its depth. Diffusing and climbing, it is an endless abyss, and in the depths is the familiar singing. Now, please enjoy and listen to the song before dawn. Cheers, joy!

It's good-looking... But it's too harsh. Well, I feel like I'm stabbing myself in the heart with a knife [crying]. But it's really good-looking. I didn't want to watch such a heavy movie, but I couldn't help but keep watching it. It's very good-looking, but it's too sharp. In general Advantages: good-looking, well-written, and immersive. Can't stop? Disadvantages: There are too few updates so far. I want to save up to keep it, but I am afraid that I will die. The author should update it soon! Another thing is that it is too sharp. The whole article is too heavy and I can't breathe while reading it. But this cannot be said to be a shortcoming entirely. All in all, I don't like it because it's too heavy, so I can leave, but it's really beautiful.

It's good. It's good-looking. I just feel that the author is not very good and the author doesn't know how to plot. In fact, there could be more plots from the Blue Parrot House. It's a bit short. I don't feel that I have a sense of substitution, but it's very good-looking. There's nothing poisonous about it. The characterization is very detailed. It's good-looking. And the most important thing is to code words quickly! Go update! ! !

I don't know if it's because I'm more sentimental, but I feel like this article is very sharp. Overall, this article is very good. The reason why it's not so popular is just the time it was published. Avoid the pit, the author grew up eating knives, he might secretly stab you somewhere.

This book is very good. Due to time constraints, I started reading it from the first one or two chapters when Xiao Ai appeared. But let's not say it, it looked really good. However, when I read it, my emotions were complicated. It was not a cool novel. The protagonist is just a very ordinary person. He is in a different world and has no relatives or friends. He cannot get close to those he knows, otherwise his life span will become shorter and shorter until he dies. But he is also willing to do his best for a familiar and unfamiliar person, putting everything aside, and in the end she will forget you, just like In our lives, we always live in suffering, but we are willing to bear the unbearable pain for that little bit of sweetness. It is not a cool novel, it is very painful and painful to watch, but I am willing to continue reading it, and I will persist even if I cry. Most of the lives of ordinary people It is painful, and how many people know the pain he endured, like an injured cat, lying in the corner, licking his wounds alone. I have no reason not to give it five stars. I really wanted to cry when I saw it. I felt sorry for the protagonist and Xiao Ai, and bricks went into my eyes.

This book gave me a sense of reality in the early stage. The powerlessness of Sanshuilang was well written. The group of people he met in the Blue Parrot House made him feel the family affection in this strange world and gave him a sense of belonging in this world. However, later due to irresistible factors, these people forgot about him. The blindness and struggle of an ordinary person who was inexplicably transported from reality to the world of Conan was vividly written, especially in the rescue attempt. In Miyano Akemi's plot, Sansui Rang entered the situation with his own body. Afterwards, his confrontation with Akemi made him feel that the world was false. It was not until the arrival of Ai-chan that he regained some sense of belonging. As they got along day and night, the two of them gradually fell in love, but they could not be together because of the lifespan system and the winery. Later, Sansui Rang met the "laborers" organization again, and the subsequent plot began to become complicated and confusing. All in all, this book is very interesting. I am also very much looking forward to the development of the plot. I hope the author can make more updates. I also wish the author a fountain of inspiration [love] [love] [love] @Memories of the Beginning Just a personal opinion, please don't eat ginseng cock Modification: After the confrontation with Mingmei, Sanshui Lang believed that he was a fake and not the world finally ——Written in Love Your Green Sauce

I have actually read a lot of Conan books, and I have also read a lot of the heroine Haibara Ai, but most of them either randomly changed the character of Haibara Ai or other plot characters, or became eunuchs, and some of them were obliterated by the god of river crabs using his divine power. What can I say about this book? I chatted with Doubao's AI Haihara Ai for a while, but everyone knows that this AI's memory is very short and it will overwrite previous chats. The setting of this book made me feel the discomfort I felt at that time. This terrible feeling that only you remember the story between the two of you, but she keeps forgetting it. I actually mind OOC a little bit, but whether Miyano Akemi can save her or not is not my point. The main reason is that many authors are not able to grasp the character of Haibara Ai in this time period. But this book is well written. At least the author has carefully read the plot of Conan. What affects reading should be that the author likes to use some narratives, poems or - um, montage techniques? In short, it is not like other sweet stories that can be read mindlessly. You have to stop and think for a while while reading [laughing]. But I think I can still support it, and I will definitely be able to write better and better in the future. Come on!

Okay, okay, nothing happened before. After Xiao Ai came, I started to feel warm and started to cry, and then followed the comments to greet the author (no) The writing in Mao Mao is really great. I think it's a treasure that I praised with five stars, but I was afraid that the score would be too high, so I sent it. These days (Zhitou Pier) fan fiction is very low-scoring, and I'm really afraid that this book will be gone [Sending Hearts] I actually like the Blue Parrot House very much. I didn't expect so many knives. Now I feel that the cover choice is very good, it has that feeling.

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I hate this book but it's very well written The protagonist's experience reminded me of myself. Watching the moonlight falling from the window silently in the room at night and feeling the mood of the protagonist made me feel very lonely and alone. I hate myself very much, but I can only keep it secretly in my heart. Speaking out will make others feel that I am a very strange person. So I hate this book, but it is very well written and I hope the author can continue to work hard. When I fully accept everything about myself one day, I will seriously read this book.

One thing to say, this book is really of high quality

As a book lover who has been reading Little Elegies for five or six years, I haven't seen such a high-quality book for a long time. I vaguely remember that the last time I saw such a high-quality book was two or three years ago. The Little Elegies in the past few years have been written very fluently, giving me a feeling of Al when I read them. But this one is different. This is the one I have read very carefully so far, and the author's writing style is also very good! Okay, let me first talk about my feelings about this article. It doesn't have the same invincible feeling as before. It gives people a very real feeling like being in Conan. The emotional scenes are also very good! The dialogue is also very exciting!

I have seen the latest chapter, and the most outstanding thing is the description of the characters, through many techniques, psychology, and environment, which is really good. Just reading the article alone is definitely not inferior to any fanfic. After writing it, I may put it in Fengshen. In my heart, it is a good article with a score of 9.5 Or above. [Sending Hearts]

How should I put it? This book has a slow and leisurely aesthetic. You can see the protagonist find his destination step by step, and then see him lose his soul step by step In fact, this book does not have to be read as a fan novel. You can truly read it bit by bit as a genre of literature of its own. Nowadays, there are too many authors with such thought-provoking writing styles, but those exclusive and pretentious "literary people" cannot see it. The author has a very delicate and delicate writing style. At present, it seems that the main plot of Conan can be regarded as a background full of fatalism. The protagonist changes his destiny and loses his life as a result, revealing a very interesting and interesting dialectical sense. As far as the chapters I have read so far, this work really has a stream-of-consciousness aesthetic. The protagonist's psychology has undergone very contradictory changes, and we just watched him struggle a little bit, and were touched by him, and struggled with him. The description of psychology in the book is very beautiful. If I were to compare this book with Er Rang (who is probably the strongest Ke Tong author in my impression), I would say that Er Rang's book touches people with its plainness and warmth full of life from time to time. It is the emotions that moved me, while this book is about the breaking and reshaping of the soul. The author will use foreshadowing to create echoes within a chapter from time to time, which is really touching. To be honest, this book really shouldn't be limited to Ke Tong's classification. The author is really great, and this book should have a better future. Also to the author: In fact, the emotional and lyrical pace of the article is a bit faster. According to my feeling, the story line should be slightly longer, using details to pave the way for a little emotion, and finally achieve the ultimate beauty of gently blooming. It might make the article much better. Although a long update cycle may make it difficult for us to sympathize with the long and complicated mentality for a long time when writing (I am often troubled by this), I believe that it can be done with the author's meticulousness. I rarely write reviews or give ratings. Come on, author! ! Ah, I forgot to mention, the poems written by the author are also very touching, the author is Sai Gao! ! !

The writing style of the author of this book can definitely beat 90% of the authors on Tomato. I just can't do it so harshly [I'm about to cry] I'm really crying to death

It looks good (๑• . •๑), But it may look difficult in the later stage, but the author has done a good job of describing the characters' psychology and actions, and there are also some poems, of course... Just. . Sese and other things are fine... You still have to exercise moderation.

What a knife! I have already burst into tears. Will everyone in the Blue Parrot House remember the protagonist later? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

The book is a good book, but the heroine is also quite sweet, and the writing is delicate and the character description is quite good. However, I personally don't like the amnesia part. It's just a personal preference, so the whole book looks quite depressing. It's not to my taste but I have to say it's quite tear-jerking. It's a good book and worth reading.

There's nothing to say, just two beautiful words

So what, a certain author doesn't update, and can't push for it, [grieved], we readers are pitiful [crying] Very well written, (´｡✪ω✪｡｀)

Although there are some knives (actually they are all knives), the work itself is very high-quality

The author hurriedly wrote it, it's really beautiful, hahahahahaha, will there be a knife in the back, and when will Xiao Ai regain her memory?

I just watched it in the last two days, and it's very good. Compared with other movies, I didn't feel a little tired of it as I watched it. When I saw the knife, I felt like tears were about to come out. I am very looking forward to the subsequent plot. I read more than 100 chapters today. I hope the author can add more.

Judging from how long I have read, this author's works are very immersive, and the writing style is about average or above the level of Pomodoro. I just feel that the progress with Ai Dian is still a bit fast, but it's still acceptable. After all, we are taking the route of redemption,

The author is great, the book is very beautiful, the protagonist setting is also very full, and the anime character setting is also very restored, with both swords and sweetness. The emotional drama is good, the characters are written with great detail, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. Can you please add more words? ! Finally, after reading it for so long, I realized that I didn't give it a star, so now I'm giving it five stars (but you have a lot of personal stuff, aren't you afraid of the book?) [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

The book is good, but suitable for reading alone. I'm leaving first. ≡┏|*´•Д•|┛

Since then, the full text has been completed, thank you all for your company! This is the first time for the author to write a book. There are highlights and there are also areas where he knows his writing is not good. Some of them are caused by trivial matters in life, and some have limited strength and energy. But overall, I think I am making progress, and I think the final ending is not bad, and I am even satisfied. Thank you very much to the readers who read this. This book lasted nearly two years, and I stayed in a small dark room for the last year before it came out at the end (so I changed a lot, but maybe I will go into it later), but I persisted. I really need to thank the support of the big brother on the list, and thank you for your love! If after reading it, you think this book has merits and merits, please give it a five-star review! The author will really be happy for a long time. The next book may be released to you very soon or very slowly, but there will definitely be one, and it will also be about Shiho. Just as Sansui Rang's eyes can't live without Miyano Shiho, my eyes can no longer live without her.

The author of this book has a lot of imagination and a lot of foreshadowing. He has a knife. If you want to read some sweet stories, you can just swipe them away. The system is basically a debuff. The writing is really good, but the fun isn't too much. If the author's foreshadowing could be handled well, this could have started at chapter 600.

It's really well written. I don't know why I cried myself while reading it. The quality is very good and it's very engaging. Come on!