From Secret Love to Acquaintance, My Heart Is Full of Excitement

The story is very good, and it depicts the reality of youth campus. Since it is a daily novel, it is possible to write this story into a million-word novel. I think the author can write it slowly and slowly, taking the hero and heroine from high school to college to entering the society, from youthful crush to mutual acquaintance and love to being handcuffed for the rest of their lives. Each stage is worthy of being written slowly. Of course, this is just a small suggestion from me. The author can just write as he likes.

The writing is very good. It really captures the youthfulness of campus love. I also had a crush in high school, but I'm just not as lucky as the protagonists [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

Four stars for encouragement. How should I put it? It feels like the author is writing an essay, and the writing style is too "formal". I have read 40 chapters so far, and I am [thinking] like I am watching a documentary. I suggest the author refer to some of the more popular romance novels in the same genre. The text does not need to be decorated so much, and there are more lighthearted and funny jokes. Anyway, it is not so demanding when writing a novel for the first time, so I will still read it.

A beautiful work with beautiful and smooth sentences and delicate creative thinking. It is worth recommending.

To be honest, bro, I have only read Chapter 5 and I feel that what you wrote is really good and feels very real. I am very happy when I go home from shopping with the heroine. It is so real to take the initiative to help with housework [face covering] Brothers are really good-looking and just jump in

The story is well written and made me feel the happy campus time. The author's writing style is also good. Come on.

Come on, author! ! I believe you can become popular