Reborn Tianlong: Become a Sweeper Monk at the Beginning

Not bad, but the plot of Se Se is a little lacking.

It must be praised. I hope the author is great and don't be a eunuch.

Be creative and hope it doesn't end badly. Grasp the balance between the court and the world.

Five stars given Advantages: The plot is very smooth, and the male protagonist's character is also very suitable for the feeling of a knight in the rivers and lakes. How can I put it this way? This book does not seem to be too poisonous. It is very smooth. Five stars are an encouragement. Disadvantages: The original note is that the shadow of Tianlong is too heavy. I feel that the male protagonist is shoehorned into the main plot of Tianlong. More stories about the male protagonist should be written. For example, the beginning part about learning martial arts from a master is great.

In my opinion, the core point is much stronger than that of most similar novels. The starting point is very correct. The story of Tianlong itself is a story that all living beings desire. In this book, I can really see that the author is filling in these difficult feelings. Of course, he is also paid for it, such as Zhong Ling Yuxiu, Wan Mu Qingyang, Yuxiao Yanran, Qinglu Morning Flow, etc. The author has always said that he will not write emotional dramas, but in my opinion, the writing is quite good. I just hope that there will be no plot after collecting it and taking it to the palace. This is a bit boring. Even if you follow the protagonist in the follow-up, it will be good.

The writing is okay. But the more I read it, the more it resembled a novel I had read before, called Emperor Wu of Heaven and the Dragon.

Author, come on, I hope you like it. I really, really hope it won't end. Well, since you wrote it, I hope you will be responsible for it and have a good ending. Of course, I will keep chasing it and I also hope it will become popular [smile] Thank you very much and please update it soon. If you see it, please reply [smile]

It's awesome. Just read it. It's probably the last one that I enjoyed so much.

It's very interesting. Please give more encouragement to the author.

The descriptions of the martial arts scenes in the novel are brilliant, and each battle is exciting and exciting. The moves are full of creativity and the combat is reasonable, making people feel as if they are witnessing thrilling martial arts showdowns. The chivalrous spirit is vividly reflected in the novel. The protagonist is loyal, just, and brave, and he will do anything for justice in the world, which is deeply admirable. In terms of character creation, the author is very original. Each character has its own unique personality and characteristics. Whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, they are all vivid and unforgettable. The plot design is compact, the suspense is repeated, the story is coherent, and the logic is strict, making people unable to put it down after reading it.

So far, it's still very interesting. At least it's not a bit of a licking game when you see a woman. The plot is also good, covering military, officialdom, and rivers and lakes. The author, please don't let the plot go astray. Taking advantage of the current high popularity and many people joining the bookshelf, you can update more, otherwise it will become cold later and you won't want to read it.

It's better-looking than Zongwu. Zongwu just steals the lead roles and recruits all kinds of beauties. Zongwu can write the plot of Young Song Xing into martial arts, and even the story of Young Song Xing can be used to cultivate immortality.

It drives very smoothly, but the speed is too little. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

After reading Chapter 50, I specially logged into my account to comment. The writing is very good and natural, except for the previous plot of leading troops to fight, which is a bit dissuasive (it is mainly a fanfic, and everyone wants to see plots related to the original plot. The sudden addition of war scenes will make us think that the author is going in the direction of Clash Royale) But overall it's very good, the plot direction is okay, and it's not too bad. The plot of Se Se is also on point, and I think it should become more and more exciting as it gets written later. Been watching!

Tianlong is mostly upset, but this book seems to make everyone find their own destination. Even though Xu Zhu in the original book has great martial arts skills, it is not what he wants after all. The ancient Buddha of Qingdeng is always with my heart. Qiao Feng is also the same. Anyway, it is quite to my liking.

Author, your writing is very good, but I have a request, please send the saved manuscript. Because you never know when it will be removed from the shelves, it may be tomorrow, the day after tomorrow, or it may be the next second.

On the basis of respecting the original work, you have your own ideas and style, without being exaggerated, and just take it one step at a time, which is great!

Overall, it's good, with some flaws: the ideas and structure are very good, but there are still some shortcomings in describing the compassion of the interpreter and the innocent mind of the sweeping monk, and the control of war scenes is not enough. For example, 10,000 + 50,000 elites only cost 200 people. These are all insufficient controls. But overall it's very good

I have read more than 200 chapters. It is the best time-travel martial arts novel I have ever read. The plot is novel, but the plot of the hero looking for the princess is too much. I hope the author can simplify it later. The overall score is 9.2. It should be okay.

I read the first few chapters very well, the writing is friendly, the content is leisurely, and there is a little bit of humor in it. I almost cried when I saw the words spoken by the master and the disciple respectively. It is well written (at least the first dozen chapters). I hope the author will continue to work hard. If you have fan fiction similar to Jin Yong, please recommend it to me [Like]

I have read Chapter 87 so far. I respect the original CP and give it good reviews. It is much better than those selfish self-studded stories. The disadvantage is that the emotional line is not good. It succeeds with almost no foreshadowing. Does it have to be sentimental to write about the harem? When it comes to writing about women, Moonlight is still good. The classic old novel [The Best Housekeeper] is also good about the harem, with flesh and blood.

Well organized, very nice, please update more [Like][Like][Like]

Yes, very good. I really like this kind of decent protagonist who is in harmony with brothers.

The storyline is pretty good, but I personally don't like multiple girls. I don't know why most of these genres have multiple female protagonists. Maybe it's because I'm more traditional and have always believed that heartbeat is instinct and loyalty is choice. I still prefer the love story of two people for a lifetime.

This book is worthy of mentioning that it is the strongest in the country of Shang; the protagonist sets his mind for the world and lives for the people.

Author Code words, code words, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, hurry up, it's so beautiful

It's pretty good, I recommend it, but it's too short, I read it in a while

The content is good. Come on, I will continue to read.

Hurry up and update it. This Tianlong fanfic is one of the best among the Tianlong fanfics I've read. If you don't update it soon, I won't have to read it. What will I do if I'm too idle? Are you responsible? If you write quickly, you should update ten times a day.

The content is very good, but it's too short. I wonder if the author can update more every day [smile][smile][smile]