After transmigrating to an ancient world, Jiang Haowen takes up storytelling in the capital, hoping to make enough money to live as a carefree little landlord.
He plans to earn enough silver and then leave for some remote place to enjoy the rest of his life.
But he never expects his stories to set the entire capital abuzz.
A great scholar at court declares, “The world has eight pecks of talent, and Jiang Haowen alone possesses a whole bushel. The world owes him two pecks...”
The empress says, “Do you think I want to be emperor? If Jiang Haowen hadn’t refused to marry into the imperial family, my grandson would already be telling stories!”
In the eyes of impoverished scholars across the land, Jiang Haowen is an unparalleled minister of the ages, holding the reins of the world and wielding its power.
In the eyes of the aristocratic clans, he is a thorn in their side and a splinter in their flesh.
To the people of Great Qian, Jiang Haowen is a minister who will save the world. To the northern Xiongnu, he is a bloodthirsty star descended from heaven.
The subject matter and pacing of this book are good, but the plot is rubbish and your protagonist is very pretentious. He obviously has no ability and no confidence, but he is very pretending. Even when he is tied to the prison, he has to rely on others to rescue him, and in the end he is still pretending. From the first chapter to the latest chapter, there has been nothing exciting. The protagonist is completely He has no ability to save his life, but he is still a traveler from the ancestral planet Earth. You can give him a setting where the traveler's force increases every day, but the protagonist in your novel has no ability except a mouth. If you continue writing like this, this book will really be bad. Most of the stories written by other people are in which the important person ends up personally. For example, the empress personally comes to listen to the book. Someone wants to harm the protagonist, but they are killed before they start harming them. This is called pleasure. You, the protagonist, have been tied up in prison and whipped. How can there be any pleasure at all? Your writing style is terrible.
I feel that there are too few storytelling plots. It's not like the main plot. It's a mess. The protagonist is calm and confident in talking about how good the storytelling system is. It's all about making money. You need to be a member to listen to the storytelling. It's completely different from the kind of story telling that the protagonist pretends to be.
What a licking dog
It's well written, with good control over human relationships and sophistication, without being overly intellectual.
It's well written, don't cut it.
Text expression is okay
Too wordy, too messy