Elf: Shadow of Dawn

The Pokémon world depicted is very real. Pokémon are very powerful but need someone to command them. Humans also have technology to use. The writing is good, the plot flows smoothly and there are no obvious errors. The protagonist has a distinctive personality, is meticulous and cautious, and is one of the few characters in Tomato who does not cheat, has no system, and relies on his own Pokémon writing. But doesn't the author know that combat attribute skills are useless against ghosts? Looking at it, I feel like the author has never played the game. The Dragon King and Scorpion obviously don't have the insect type.

It's quite beautiful, it's very interesting without any system [Adoration]

Okay, okay, the writing is very good, the protagonist kills decisively, and the details of the elf battle are also very good. It is a high-quality elf novel. I recommend it.

I love reading it, but I can't help but want to lock the author in a dark room and write a letter to Ten Grains of Rice [Sending Hearts]

It's a very good book, one of the best among Pokémon, but the number of words is a bit short now, so I look forward to the author's steady updates.

Just focus on the protagonist, no system, no background, and rely on myself throughout the whole process, so I deserve a five-star rating. Uh... I looked back and felt that the protagonist was too murderous. Abandon the article.

It's okay. I don't feel it's so cruel at the end. I can barely count the 20 or so at the beginning. It is recommended that the pure black and dark streams be deleted. I think some ordinary ones are darker than this. The protagonist's brain sometimes disappears.

I think this book, in addition to the main line of raising Pokémon and climbing upwards, should also add a description of the protagonist's spiritual level, thoughts and spiritual changes between daily life plots and some activities. After all, no matter how outstanding the protagonist himself is, I think he will have a lot of emotions during this journey of wandering. I hope to see that the end of this book is not just a brief review of his path to becoming stronger, but also the bitter tears he paid on this path, and the emotion of finally reaching the top.

The early rhythm is very good, there are no bad points, the protagonist, villain and supporting characters all maintain their characters well, and there are many wonderful twists and turns. The clearer poisonous point is that after the villain disguised himself as the little girl's parents, he kidnapped the little girl and threatened the protagonist. The protagonist originally didn't want to take care of it, but Xiao A had to take care of it because of his kindness. At that time, I really wanted to give up the book, but I felt that the rhythm in the front was good, so I was reluctant to pursue it, so I pursued it. I think the pitfall in the later part was fixed (although I was still a little unhappy) In the later period, from pretending to be Hunter W to the final finale, the pace of the writing speeded up a lot. Every time he appeared, he just slapped people in the face and pretended to be brainwashed and conquered the legendary Pokémon. It was too similar and made me impatient. The length of the chapter about fighting Arceus seemed rather sloppy. The finale was also full of meaning. It felt like a very ordinary ending. But overall, it is a good book. Although the pace is much faster later, the writing style is also maintained, and there is no heroine. Although there is actually a female in it who wants to do something, but it has not been developed. If I insist on saying it, the pseudo-heroine Emri is so novel... But it is not bad. At least she is sincere to the protagonist and helps a lot. You can take a look

It's very good, the plot is coherent and reasonable, the protagonist's image is perfectly created, and the various plots are exciting. Although the supporting characters are not developed enough, I think this book can get at least an 8.5 Or 9.0 Rating. I always feel that someone is maliciously trying to score points [angry]

In the past few weeks, I have been reading several Pokémon novels from morning to night. The articles are okay, but the follow-up fantasy beasts are not very good, but compared to other Pokémon novels, it can be seen that the author was very careful in the early stage. A bit creative, I hope this book doesn't end hastily. There are not many novels that Bizhang can read with some brainpower. After reading this book, I also fell in love with Zhi Ti Que Shan.

The plot is reasonable and coherent, and the protagonist is very courageous and perfectly portrayed. Although the escape part is a bit watery, the climax part is also very well written, especially the part where Wang Jin comes on stage and the words Roz said are really burning. Compared with other dark streams, it is more reasonable to look at it in such a way that the people at the bottom are not portrayed as useless. After all, they are human beings, and they have the possibility of climbing up. It is a very good book to deal with the possibilities reasonably and know your own strength. Exploding lights! ! !

Very good, the content and plot are very exciting

Why are there so many who are always the kings and champions? You must know how difficult it is to cultivate a king or champion! The wild can come out at will, right? [Eat melon]

Much better than other Pokémon stories

It's quite good-looking, and the protagonist's upgrade process is also very realistic. Overall, it's pretty good. A small suggestion. The main character's reason for time travel is to act bravely and get hit by a car. However, in the Pokémon world, the main character becomes decisive and killing without any excessiveness. This makes it difficult to imagine that he would sacrifice himself for strangers in the original world. I suggest that the author change the reason for time travel or add some excessiveness.

Hello author, although I am not sure if you will see this message. I've been reading this novel, and to be honest, it's pretty good, but I feel like you didn't understand some of the elves' characteristics. For example, your recently updated Kyurem cannot fly. It can only fly when it turns into dark or flame white form. There is also Uxie. Its Pokédex introduction states that anyone who sees his gaze will have their memories erased.

The writing is very good and beautiful. Keep it up [top post]

I have been chasing this book for a long time. I just ran out of books to read, so I just found one to read. But in fact, the writing of this book is okay, but the setting in the early stage is not very good. The king-level rhinoceros that the author saves the protagonist's life feels very strange. However, after writing it, it seems that the setting is still good. I just feel that the scientific research pictures are a bit strange. Give me five stars for encouragement [Thinking]

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. Demining completed, Pokémon + Dark Wind + civilian style + more realistic. This Pokémon Dark fanfic has a few plot holes, but the realistic settings and growth potential are pretty good. Despite its shortcomings, it is worth recommending. I still support the new book and give it a thumbs up.

The writing is very good. Although the plot in the Galar region is a bit not smooth, I can see the improvement of the author's writing style. After changing the map, the plot became very good, like a numb person regaining some emotions.

Personally, I feel that the writing is quite realistic. The combat power level feels a bit fast. Maybe it is close to the game? I prefer no system. After all, in reality, it is not possible to tell at a glance what skills the opponent has at a certain level. Dark flow, decisive killing, brains, good food and grass. The attributes mentioned in the comment area and various unreasonable issues have been corrected by the author (anyway, there were no big problems when I read it). I hope the author will not stop updating.

I feel like the negative review is malicious, but it's actually quite well written. If you want to watch Utopia, go watch the original animation yourself. The theory of darkness is completely defensible, right? [Smile]

It's a book with great potential. The decision to kill is always clear. The characters in the book are not black and white and are more distinctive than other books. The plot design is also very good, and the main plot is slowly drawn out, and the protagonist's cognitive personality changes with the plot.

I gave you four stars because you were procrastinating and never updated the map.

Steel Kai Crow's skills are a bit lacking, so he needs to learn more moves, such as Provocation, Clear the Dense Fog, Yu Qi and Brave Bird Attack.

The plot is very good, but I don't know why the rating is so low

The Tomato rating is nothing. Really high-quality novels may be hidden, but everyone who reads it can feel the meaning it exudes.

It's pretty good. No heroine to support it.

Nice Pokémon article, I remember the previous rating wasn't 9. What?