HP: When the Savior Becomes Suspicious

After reading it, I really like the trio in this book, Hermione the eldest sister, Ron who is heartbroken, and Harry who squats by the fence. The plot is very close to the original work, and it really makes up for a lot of regrets. In the end, the bees are still there, the bats are also there, and the cats are no longer left alone. This is the perfect victory we expect after the thrilling adventure. (Fuck the desperate victory)

Really recommended! Harry is uniquely beautiful and has no CP tendencies, and there doesn't seem to be any description of Loch. This is how the Iron Triangle will make them lifelong friends. Although the title of the book says that Harry is suspicious, he is not suspicious but thinks about the problem more deeply. He will use his eyes that are similar to his mother's to benefit himself (referring to the potions class taught by Petunia and Si). He is a bit of a (pseudo) white flower/green tea Harry. Compared to the original Harry, his character will be stronger in the later period. Pre-viewing tips (contains some spoilers: ▪️There are some original content on the relationship between the Dursleys and Harry, including whitewashing scenes, but I like the changes very much. I feel that the characters are more fleshed-out, so don't like it if you don't like it. ▪️The part about Sirius James being bullied when he was young is not whitewashed. Harry will know what the Marauders did to Snape, and will call Sirius the stupid dog godfather, liking the caution of the Marauders. ▪️The conversation with Dumbledore will be sharper. He will think about who he is, and "he is a Horcrux" and "he needs to kill him with his own hands." These are the conclusions that Harry came to after thinking about himself. Recommended index ⭐⭐⭐⭐✨

Alas, sometimes I really wonder whether Albus Dumbledore's behavior is correct. Is the greater good he pursues to bear everyone's pain on a child? Although I can understand it, I really can't accept it. If Harry was born in a peaceful era, he should be able to live a happy life instead of heading towards a certain death ending.

Overall, it's okay. The writing, characters, and plot are well grasped. It's this point where it feels a bit "too boring" except then some of the plot is reduced and the rest is basically the same as the original. It may be that it has not yet developed in the first grade. Here are some more exciting points, just like your previous novels, they are all interesting, although the previous ones also had a few bugs. Although this article has fewer bugs, it has fewer interesting points and the novelty is gone. I dare not say that I have been able to read through this book, but I feel that it will not give me too many surprises before I get to Prisoners.

Very nice! So when will Harry use the glasses-removing technique on Professor Snape? [Laughing]

I particularly like the sharp-tongued Harry. The three Gryffindors have all had their own changes in character. Sister Hermione has mastered it. Ron in this book is so touching. He will take care of Harry who has nightmares. Harry's journey is very well written. He is a very intelligent Harry.

Harry's character is very interesting, and his quarrels with his friends are very vivid. I often feel like I saw my friends arguing with each other. I really like the ending, as if after the war, nothing has changed, and Gryffindor's points are about to be deducted by Professor Snape.

The previous content is similar to the original work, but it subtly describes the differences between Harry and the original work without being abrupt. Later, due to this neuroticism, the plot begins to branch off. The daily life of the three little ones with their poisonous tongue is even more fun than the original work, and they unknowingly save the troubled people. If you feel bored in front, you can take a quick look and don't miss the ones behind. It's really good. After reading the full text, it's a bit short, but overall it's a good fanfic. It's great that everyone achieved victory without sacrifice.

Very beautiful! But after taking a quick look, there were many people in the comment section who stopped reading because the previous chapters overlapped too much with the original work, and there were also people who stopped reading because the theme of the theme was not so obvious about suspicion. You've lost a lot of money! ! This book is really very good-looking, has a very happy ending, and is rigorous in thinking. There are no cheats in the whole book. Regarding the high overlap rate with the original work, to be honest, I have read many HP fanfics and their overlap rates are very high. After all, there are only a few main lines, and they basically follow the main line. There are a few that do not follow the main line. In the end, they are all cheating, or the heartthrob system or time travel and other characteristics. In short, this book is really one of the two best HP fanfics I have read since joining this circle. It's not as cookie-cutter as what I've seen before. It's trying to make up for the regret I felt when watching the original work, but at the same time it retains the feeling that the original work brought me. I hope more people can discover this good book.

Like this one very much. Fandom is nothing more than adding some variables to the original work. Why can't we choose to add this variable to the original protagonist? A Harry who is gossipy and suspicious, strong and vulnerable, smart and disconnected, I can really love him. The transformation of the Dursley family is also very surprising. There is no blind darkness or whitewashing, and the plot is basically logical and self-consistent. The plot between Ron and Hermione is also very natural. It can be said that every corner of the iron triangle is very strong, and there is no such thing as "who is whose flaw". The writing style is also interesting, I often laugh when I read it. I hope the rating can be higher so more people can see it.

I feel that little Harry has become cuter after he became suspicious, and I love him even more [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] I think Chapters 186, 273, and 283 are more sadistic, and the rest are just ordinary idiots [blowing kisses] I hope you all enjoy reading

To be honest, I think Harry's psychology may be more inclined to this book. He was abused at his aunt's house since he was a child. His character will definitely be more mature. After reading the big book, I suddenly felt that the original Harry seemed too pure. In short, I recommend anyone to read it.

Although it is a second creation by a fan, and is based on the basic settings of the original work, this book is more deeply written than the original work, and it touches my heart even more. In other words, the male protagonist's psychological journey is more in line with my idea of ​​Harry Potter, with a faint sense of death. She is timid and talkative but dare not speak out. She has fighting spirit but not much. She is cautious and suspicious but not neurotic. The interaction between the three children is really good. I think it is more in line with my ideas than the original work. It's really nice, I like the tone.

Saw the Triwizard Tournament. I feel that Harry's character is more interesting than in the movie. Although the big plot framework is based on the original work, the subtle differences have changed a lot. I have to say, I always felt that in the original book, the things Harry faced became more and more cruel with each grade. This book feels happier. It felt a bit OOC in the middle and later stages. Harry's words to Sirius were too weird, and questioning the principal about it was a bit too much. In addition, it feels like all members are starting to become "homogeneous", and everyone's personality is becoming more and more like the same person. This is especially reflected in the lines. When taken alone, it feels like they may be from Ron, Hermione, and Harry, the principal, or even Snape. It feels like the lines are not used to shape the characters. But it's okay if the pace doesn't drag.

It's beautiful, believe me, the author's writing is really good

This book feels like it has many details that are similar to the original work. It feels like there are many sentences that describe the same details as the original work. I don't know how many times the author has read the book, or it feels like he is writing while reading it. But I have only read it in the first grade, and I am going to wait and see.

HP: When the savior becomes suspicious Awesome! ! ! ! ! He is the kind of sensitive kid I imagined to be dependent on others. The story of family and friendship is pretty good.

What a happy ending. I declare that the author knows more about children's literature than J. K. Rowling! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Understand the applause! ! ! [You taste carefully][You taste carefully][You taste carefully]

I feel that the author's writing style is very mature and beautiful. Please give it a five-star review first! Eight brushes! Woo woo woo...

It's great, but there are too few reviews. To be honest, your book is much better than the 8.0 Book I read before. Your writing style is far better than that one. With your writing style, this book can definitely reach 8.5 Or above.

This book is very good! Funny, less abusive, male protagonist, no cp, fan fiction, family and friendship oriented, happy ending. The setting is novel, the writing is good, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. Firstly, this book cuts into the dark river of the characters' fate with scalpel-like precision, making every decision wrapped in the sand and pain of reality. Those struggles and awakenings that were once symbolized are now embodied in the fluttering eyelashes between breaths, the whitening lines when the joints are clenched, and even the heartbeat frequency that breaks and reorganizes in silence. Growth is no longer a linear climbing scale, but the frost flowers that condense repeatedly on cold nights, reflecting the subtle spectrum of human nature in the cracks of compromise and resistance. Secondly, this book makes human nature turn into liquid moonlight flowing through the cracks of words. Those weights that tremble on the moral scale are originally bronze cast from different standpoints. When the narrative searchlight changes its angle, the phosphorus fire of goodwill flickers in front of the gate of hell, but the thorns of paranoia bloom strange flowers in the cracks of the temple. Every soul is a contradiction woven by the warp and weft of fate. In the corridor of the narrative maze, the boundaries between right and wrong are constantly reshaped by the flowing perspective, just like the tide repeatedly changes the texture of the beach. Those called "evil" may be just unilluminated lonely prisms; the so-called "noble" is nothing but the diffraction of morality under a specific spectrum. When the position is like a rotating kaleidoscope, all hard conclusions are broken into fragments of colored glass, and are reassembled into flowing truth in the wind of narrative. What the story finally presents is not a black and white judgment seat, but a mist of countless gray latitudes, which drops a metallic drizzle in the readers' hearts. Great, keep up the good work^O^~

I like the rich characters of my aunt's family, the mixture of cruelty and tenderness. Harry is even cuter and more lively.

Very good looking, Crazy Savior is my favorite

Maybe he likes Hermione too much. This made watching the Goblet of Fire episode particularly uncomfortable. In the final analysis, it's just that damn desire for exclusivity, even if you don't have it.

Believe me, this should be called "Everyday Thoughts in the Savior's Heart"

I like the author, so I give it five stars^ω^

Read it all in one go! I think it's good and gives everyone a happy ending, but the author seems to be rushing forward? The writing was a bit fast, and there were a lot of things that ended before I even started. Why is it actually Chapter 416, but when I write the last chapter, the title is Chapter 414? I hope there will be some extra stories (bixin)

It's very interesting. I'm more curious about whether Harry will be darkened by Tom's voice and various speculations in his head (what)

It's very interesting. This is the first time I've seen such a crazy Harry.

I really like this book, it's like a different take on the original. Many of the words and dialogues are very original, the characters have no OOC, and because Harry is n times smarter than the original because of his suspicion, he discovered many clues in advance.