Travel Through Teyvat and Save Private Amber at the Beginning

"As one of the last descendants of the earth, we represent life on earth and move towards a future that no living being has the chance to see!" Based on this sentence, I will give you full marks first.

Author, you really dare to write, the sky and the shadow are gone

It's very nice. I don't think there's any big problem. The main thing is that the paragraphs are too long. It would be nice if they could be shortened a little or the big paragraphs could be divided into sections.

Okay, okay, but it's very long. I really didn't expect that there would be no rating for over 400,000 words.

Not bad indeed. He has a sense of justice, courage, and enthusiasm, but I feel that the protagonist's strength has grown too fast, and he is simply too stupid. He is invincible to everyone. It is speculated that he lacks combat ability in the later stage and will kill anyone he meets. A truly good story must be an evenly matched showdown, and the finale is the shining moment.

Hey, why do I think this book is well written? Without Sora and Ying, there is no lack of adventure travel, and the unfolding of the story made me feel like I was reading a fantasy novel about immortality. The five stars will not be cancelled, as long as there are no particularly annoying plots (for example, describing a couple other than the protagonist, being ambiguous and not with the female character, pretending to be cool...) I will also give five stars in another review.

Four points, mainly because the main character's name is too ridiculous. Every time I see it, I have the illusion that the teacher is calling his name. It's too difficult.

The content is relatively novel, neither Sora nor Ying are present. The protagonist's strength improves very quickly. I don't know if there is a female protagonist. The protagonist herself is unlikely to take the initiative. I can only watch the female characters. Not bad, keep up the good work.

There are more than 800 chapters yet to be rated, and the author is also a character [laughs][Like][Like][Like]

A very nice Genshin Impact fan novel. It is different from other Tomato novels. It can be seen that the author has written it carefully and gives you a different main line.

Why isn't anyone watching? [What]

You have written more than 1 million words, why are you still not rated? It's already 2 million words, but there's still no rating [face covering]

If you disconnect what the characters are saying, you will feel better when watching it.

Personally, I feel it's 8. Somewhat, it's okay. It will be better after polishing it a bit.

This book is quite good (feeling guilty) Gua, rate, give me a mouthful!

Author, don't cut it! ! ! !

Very good and creative

Although not many people read the comments, the author did write well.

Closer to 3D realistic style. I still need to practice my writing skills, but other aspects are also good.

After reading a little bit, the writing is okay, but there are some signs of a running account. Why is it not rated after two million words?

Please rate it first and comment after a few hours.

The author writes very well, but why do you have so few comments?