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It's so sweet. I smiled the whole time. That's why there are so few! It's not enough to watch! ! ! Also, why are there no pictures [angry][angry]

After reading it one after another, I can only give it 4 stars. Overall, it is "inaction", but it is also "no fault", which means it is ordinary, but there are not many poisonous points. Because the whole lacks a big world view, the reasons for some of the characters' actions are also unclear. For example, what is the system? Why can you be reborn? Why can the system convert between virtual and real? What is the motivation for the system? There are also some other minor problems, such as the roommate in the early stage who obviously has too few scenes in the later stage. The author's writing style cannot be considered bad, but it cannot be called the top level... In this case, the article lacks a main clue to promote the plot. It is also rare to reach the word count of a medium-length novel. It should be very uncomfortable to write. Also in the later period, after the protagonist's potion was broken and discovered, the heroine's reaction was obviously different from normal people, as if she knew the existence of the system. In short, the system was obviously the biggest loophole. And when the protagonist first takes it, the source of the heroine's sleepy black tea is also very doubtful. Psychotropic drugs are generally controlled substances. Even if they can be obtained through a strong capital background, the protagonist's reaction afterwards is very strange. Normal people may have emotions such as fear, nervousness, sadness, surprise, and anger. Inaction, no fault, I think that is the best evaluation Let me add that there is also a problem with the description of appearance. The author seems to want to portray the cuteness of the protagonist or the beauty of the heroine, but maybe it is a problem with the tone of voice, maybe the description of the environment is not done well, maybe the direct description of appearance is not well-chosen. Until the end, I can only have a vague image of them. What do they look like? I don't know. Not to mention other supporting characters, there is no such person. Maybe the most vivid person is Father Lin. In just a few strokes, he portrays the image of a traditional gentleman, who doesn't talk much and is taciturn. But she always works silently behind the scenes, provides support to the family, serves as a bridge to regulate family relationships, loves to read newspapers, All in all, I spent a lot of time reading it completely, and finally I wrote a long review, which can be considered a good goodbye. The novel always feels like the writing style of a few years ago, or even longer. According to the judging standards at that time, it can be regarded as good.

All I can say is that this book is very sweet, even though there is no male protagonist... It's just that the update is a bit slow (the donkeys in the production team can't rest like this [smile][smile])

1 Delicate brushwork depicts the rich emotions in the characters' hearts, making people feel as if they are immersed in the scene and experiencing the joys and sorrows with the protagonist. In these stories, love is endowed with endless possibilities, making people believe that the power of true love can overcome all difficulties. 2. Several characteristics of sticking to the theme in chronological order and proceeding step by step. In these touching stories, readers can enjoy the joys, sorrows and joys and feel the richness of life. It not only provides leisure and relaxation reading, but also enriches our spiritual world to a certain extent. I feel good after reading it, and the author will continue to update it

It's beautiful, and it awakened a strange attribute in me. The characters in it are unique and flavorful [laughing][laughing][laughing]

How can I put it, so far, the whole book is still very good. It can be said that it is one of the few books that has successfully created characters. The characters' thoughts and moods are also arranged and described very well. The storyline is also very exciting. Most boys like to read it (all of them understand it), and the content is also very humorous, so it is worth reading.

A good book about Lily. Although this is the first time I read Lily, I have also found several books later. It is indeed not as good as this one. It is more everyday. My aunt never stopped laughing. It is worth recommending. It is recommended by 1300 hours of bookworms online.

It's so beautiful. I really recommend it. I hope the author won't do it later.

It's so beautiful, hehe, it needs five stars. More updates won't be enough [laughter]

It's nice to start with the costume, and add the setting of having no father or mother, skipping directly to the plot of meeting the parents. Some books also change to hundreds, but after the change, there are a lot of things to do. Some books handle this part well, but some books do not handle it well, and there are too many troubles. This book just goes straight to time travel and becomes hundreds, and also adds the setting of no family. In this way, as long as one party agrees, they can get married directly, and the two of them will spend more time together. They don't have the stubbornness of parents and the time to get along and understand with some family members. As long as one party understands, you can also interpret it as laziness, but this is quite good. There are less tedious things, and it is sweet to the end. It looks really good. I recommend it.

Very sweet, safe to eat without a knife! The protagonist Nian Nian (Gu Nian) has always been a white-haired little shou [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly], but unfortunately she still has not escaped the persecution of the little black room, hahahaha! The rhythm of the story is very tight and there is no water. It basically covers the time when the two people were separated (unless there are new characters). It tells the story of Nian Nian's 3 years in college and the marriage at the end! Looking forward to more extras! [Send heart][Send heart] Niannian and Ruoxi should always be happy! Everyone should always be happy ~ [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] -2024.10.28 13:50

Beautiful, I fell in love with Baihewen for the first time, hehe Highly recommended! ! I have read several similar books, but I still feel that this yyds is "short and weak" and not enough to read.

I was so fascinated by it. I just finished it today. Although the ending is sweet, I feel empty. I feel like Nian Nian and the others have left me forever, leaving only memories. That feeling of emptiness reminds me of the feeling I had when I was a kid after watching an episode of cartoons but no more. There is no one else around, and I am left alone. The feeling of emptiness and powerlessness...

After reading it, I had a lot of thoughts. When Nian Nian and Ruoxi were together, I suddenly felt like I was watching my children get married. Seeing their happy faces, my tears couldn't stop pouring out. It was obvious that I was just a bystander. Why did I feel so excited and moved? (´°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥｀) Because the author's writing is really good. Every time I read it, I feel like I'm there. Although this is my own habit, this is the first time I can feel it. It feels so clear, the whole story is sweet, neither boring nor greasy, and the daily life is also relaxed and cheerful. Although many of the girls next to Nian Nian I saw in the end became lesbians, I still think Ruoxi and Nian Nian are the sweetest couple. Every time I think of her When the two of them were fighting, I felt like my whole brain had turned into a bitch, and then I would smile like an aunt. ₍ˊᗜˋ₎ I was very sad that such a beautiful book ended like this. I felt that I couldn't read enough, but their story was over. If possible, I still hope to have more time to add more extras to this novel. I really, really look forward to it, and I wish your work will get better and better (,,>᎑<,,)

This book is very beautiful, and the kaomoji written about Nian Nian in it are very cute, but I can only give 4 stars because I think the reading experience of this book is not good. When there are still 100 chapters left before the end, I feel that this book about the story of Nian Nian and Ruoxi will be finished soon (although Nian Nian and Ruoxi The happiness is still going on) So I felt a little uncomfortable while reading the book (˘•ω•˘). While watching the sweet story of Nian Nian and Ruoxi, I suppressed the rising corners of my mouth. I also felt particularly uncomfortable when I thought about the book about Nian Nian and Ruoxi's story being finished. So I can only give this book four stars.

As a book with a high sugar content, it looks good, but many of the plots seem a bit deliberate, such as the system's tasks and rewards, and the most important thing is the protagonist's inexplicable self-confidence. It's not that it's disgusting, but it's just that there are some things about this kid. It feels like eating one thing after another. Many plots are just for the sake of being astringent, and some descriptions are also a little exaggerated. Overall, it is not bad. The sugar content is at least enough. If you read this comment, your aunt must not have stopped laughing while reading [laughs]

How to say it? If you like to read Bai Hewen, I highly recommend watching it. In short, it is super sweet. Another book by the author is also good

It can still be read now, and it has stood the test of time. The whole text is sweet and daily, so it can be read. It is very relaxing and stress-free. It is a very good book that can turn into hundreds of articles. The characters of the slightly sick and charming lady and the silly and sweet little loli are very classic.

This book covers the youthful feeling of the two heroines, I really like it, and then the little Loli and Lin Ruoxi in it, I feel particularly good, do you understand? Anyway, I really like this. I feel like I quite like it anyway.

It is relatively well written in Baihe's article, but it may not have any exciting points due to the review. The writing, plot, and characters are all very good. System Master's settings are quite confusing, and he jumps out to find fault from time to time.

It's a very sweet book. There is no intrigue. The whole book is very comfortable and healing. Maybe Gu Nian drowned in the water like Gu Nian. The difference is that Gu Nian drowned in the helpless and desperate loneliness, while Gu Nian drowned in the sea of love.

This is a pretty good little brainless Lily love book, but the world view is small (but it is not a shortcoming). If the world view is too big, the details will be swept away in one stroke, and the small world view is suitable for this story described in a house with a sense of place. It is this little bit of beauty in life that arouses people's infinite reverie, which I personally think is quite good.

Very sweet lily stickers, from beginning to end, so cute [get it] The dull plot reveals the flavor of life (although it is a life that I have no contact with), and the interesting content and emoticons are also a highlight. It is very suitable for reading a few chapters in bed to relax after a busy day. However, the author's writing skills still need to be improved. The characters' images are not distinct enough and their characteristics are lacking, making it difficult to distinguish between different characters. Each character is too flat, which reduces readability a lot.

A luxury publication, although it still has flaws, is still a luxury publication!

I can't get enough of it, the plot advances very smoothly and there is no sense of abruptness. Character structure: The characters and behaviors of the two heroines are very reasonable.

Um, what is so good about this book? I think this book is good because it is very good-looking. What is good about it is that it is very good-looking... Well, to be honest, I quite like the plot and writing style of the author (mostly because I like this kind of subject [smile][smile][smile])

It took more than three weeks and I read it on my watch almost every day (my phone was taken away), so the Pomodoro reading time was not very long. The overall feeling of this book to me is that it is pure sweetness. The whole book is full of sweetness and happiness. It is a novel that is very suitable for relieving stress and relaxing the body and mind. It is also the beginning of my love to read Lily. (I think about Nian Nian [shy] every day when I go to school) However, there are some small shortcomings, that is, the author's writing style is not very mature, and there are some wrong names in some places, but they are understandable. Overall, I would like to thank the author for writing such a novel that has stayed with me for nearly a month. Thank you to the author. I hope the author will get better and better and be happy every day.

Hehehe, white-haired lolita, my favorite, she is worthy of being Sister Yue'er, she can always find the point to poke xp. It's just that the other few books are updated too frequently. It's okay if you can stick to it (one chapter per week). That's all. (Author! I know you'll see me!!!)

(Good-looking [love] Cute little loli × playful big sister [Adoration] The system acts as a courier, delivering the little lolita to the big sister's... Start The full text is high in sugar, and the emoticons are also very cute [flying kiss]ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ, no knife, systematic participation [note], ordinary life reveals sweetness [love][love][love]

Recommend! The story is plain and refreshing, and the writing is mostly about daily sweet life, without feeling too far away. Wu Dao, but the ending is a bit concise, not as gorgeous as imagined, but it is also quite beautiful, he