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It's very good, but it feels like something is missing. It feels weird to only have one Poké Ball. I read a similar Poké Ball before and the spirit will split into other Poké Balls. It would be better if it develops like this.

Fire, water, super power, and I guess the latter ones include electricity, dragon, flying or poison, ghost, evil, and ice. To be precise, Groudon is a ground-based beast with a fire element. The fire-based beast Phoenix King is better, but the Phoenix King is too ugly. The super-power beast should be Mew, I guess. I hope the electric beast will be Kapu Mingming, and it can also come with Z moves. The dragon-type beast is Rayquaza, which adds the finishing touch to unlock the mega evolution, and is also really handsome. The flying divine beast is Lugia, which can be considered a first-level god. (Flying feels unnecessary. After all, which mythical beast can't fly? The evil beast hopes to be the god of nightmares, handsome and powerful It seems that Kyurem is the only ice divine beast that is okay, but it can't be Freezing Bird or that divine pillar [awkward laugh] The ghost beast can be Giratina, with an anti-matter space attached [smile][smile] Grass type recommends Celebi or Xerneas, one life per time Poison attribute is infinite, and it is extremely powerful.

I think that if the protagonist is in the later stage, after obtaining the seventh soul ring, he can try to fuse the elf with his true body. The elf will appear and become his true body, and then his strength will increase. I'm wondering if the soul rings can be fused in the later stage, and then form a new Pokémon for super-fusion battles

As long as you keep updating, I will be your most loyal reader [blowing kiss]

It looks good. That's what I want to ask. It means that as long as the elves are fire attributes, as their strength becomes stronger, they can all be summoned, right? If they are water, they can also be summoned in disguise as their strength increases, right? That should be the meaning.

Very pretty. I hope the author can stick to it and not interrupt or unfinish it.

Author, your writing is good and very creative, although I haven't read it yet

I suggest the author change the picture and find an AI to draw it. No heroine, multiple heroines, or single heroine?

Come on, author!

Write quickly! ! ! Please, this is the first time I want to read a fan fiction so much (-^^-)

It looks better, but I don't know if there are ground and steel types. One is stronger at the offensive end and the other is stronger at the defensive end.

The writing is very good and the writing style is good. As long as it doesn't suck, this book will be popular.

Very good, come on, come on, come on

It's such a beautiful book, but I'm not allowed to write it

It's very well written and has a lot of ideas. Keep developing your ideas and update soon.