[Single heroine + no system + no brains + Uchiha Sasuke]
Lin Yehun, who is watching anime at home, crosses Sasuke, beats up the bullying trio at the beginning, and replaces Naruto as Hinata's White Moonlight!
The three Magatama Sharingan awakened on the night of the genocide. He decided to use these eyes to change many regrets in Hokage and become the perfect Sasuke!
"Zabuza, didn't you say you would return to the village one day and change everything about that cruel thing?"
"Orochimaru, I will leave Konoha with you, but not as the container for your reincarnation, but as the hands that push the windmill!"
"Asuma, it seems too early for you to be willing to become the abandoned son who protects Jade!"
"Jiraiya, don't you want to see with your own eyes what kind of future the destined child you have been pursuing all your life will have?"
"Itachi, even if I don't have the same eyes as you, I will become stronger than everyone else!
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Ps: The plot develops slowly, and there are many foreshadowings and designs in the early stage. Those who like mindless and refreshing writing should be careful! You can skip the car-following plot. Chapter 10 will start the main plot, and the original plot will unfold after chapter 70!
Reader comments
This book is a very good one among the Sasuke fanfics I have read. The early plot is similar to the original one, but it is more interesting than the original one, such as Naru Sa's first kiss. The turning point of Sasuke's plot is to betray Konoha, open the kaleidoscope, and merge with eternity. The middle and later stages of the story are very important. I personally hope not to give up on Tenbu-ryu Kenbuki Taijutsu. After all, I have learned eight swordsmanship, but swordsmanship is more suitable for Sasuke. After all, Sasuke is very handsome, and there are also the development of some ninjutsu such as Chidori-ryu. Wall, Thunder Release, and Kirin. If the Mangekyō Eye Technique is still Amaterasu and Kaguto Ming, then the Fire Release can create more. This time, since Sasuke has all five elements, other ninjutsu can also create some. It is best not to have shortcomings. Mangekyō Eye Technique alone People feel that the black flame set is no longer comparable to the dual divine power. The dual divine power is too strong. It integrates offense and defense. The forward swing of the divine power is reduced, and the incorporation time is also increased. You can create a new pupil technique. After all, it reflects the eye of the soul. It is best to use the illusion of time and space. There is nothing in the later stage. Mo Da Yong can be said to be immune to those bosses, and then there is Itachi. After all, there were always people who said "I hope you can grow up with him in the next life, instead of watching him grow up." As a movie fan, I definitely hope that One vs. Seven can survive. Now that the protagonist has Fugaku's Mangekyo, the sacrifice of One vs. Seven is not necessary. I hope the author can try to let him survive. Finally, there is the Rinnegan. This time I think Sasuke can open it in advance. I use Hashirama cells to activate the samsara eye. I am looking forward to Sasuke who has both eyes with six magatama samsara eyes and can close automatically. The ability of Tenshou is very easy to use. I think I can improve the eyes. One is Tenshou and the other is the auxiliary eye technique of Tenshou. Then I hope that these two types of Tenshou can create a barrier. I can change places in this barrier at will and then there is nothing to say. In the end, this book is really good. I hope I can read more on the weekend.
Also, since the original Sasuke is not dead, it may be a foreshadowing. Sasuke's soul is essentially the power of Yin. The key to the six magatama that can be closed in the later stage should be this. I hope the author will not write it down.
The author is great, can you accept more heroines? I suggest Hinata ➕ Ino ➕ Terumi Mei ➕ Tsunade [sneered smile] [admiration] Then I feel that your fighting description is still a bit deceptive. Most of them are physical skills. I feel like I have become a warrior in a fantasy novel. I should write more about ninjutsu duels. After all, this is Naruto [Thinking]
Can you please stop calling me by your original name? Wouldn't it be better to just call him gay? What a show (maybe I didn't see it)
So far so good. There are not many books written about Sasuke, and even fewer that are good. This one is considered well-written so far. The character should not collapse, the combat power system should not be too exaggerated, and there should be no creation of forces (a lot of p things). In my opinion, these three points have a great impact on book reviews. I hope the author can perform stably. Give you a five-star support
I felt that I was going high and low, and things were going well up front. It wasn't until I met Zabuza after I defected that I knew something was wrong. It was obvious that I was going to develop and form my own power. I looked at it again and found that I was no longer interested. It was so troublesome.
Come on, come on, the writing is very good, the character is not broken, you have to stick to it, the author is great [eating melon]
So far it's pretty good, come on! ! !
Remember to pay attention to the number of times Obito uses Susanoo when writing the article later. Obito cannot evolve the Eternal Eye. He only relies on Hashirama Cells and Senra Wanxun to use his ability frequently. But frequent half-body Susano will definitely not work. He will be blind faster than Sasuke.
The author's writing is smooth, the font is fair, and it has a single heroine. Keep updating.
The font does justice and is well-aimed, making up for the film's shortcomings. The author is optimistic about you, don't mess up [like][like][like].
Very well written Sasuke story. There could be more emotional scenes
The writing is fluent and not mindless. The changes to the Chunin Exam Qualifiers are a bit interesting.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Very good! Sasuke is not OOC at all! The interaction with Hinata was also very interesting! There is a lot of foreshadowing, and I am looking forward to the plot behind it!
The author has not released any updates yet! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
I personally feel very good about this book so far. I feel that the author may have written it while watching the video and actually still remembered the names of some obscure characters [OK]
Not bad. Very pretty.
Well written, not bad.
♡(*´∀｀*)(*´∀｀*)♡(ง •̀_•́)งCome on
Good looking, good luck to the author
It's really pretty
Not bad, I'm a little curious about what Sasuke and Hinata's child has eyes like [laughing evilly]
It's very well written, I hope I can keep writing.
It's okay to write, keep it up
It's still pretty good so far
Great, please give it a try, author
Please, the author please update it quickly. [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
It's very exciting. Chapter 82 has filled in all the holes left before and explained the foreshadowing before.
The author writes very rigorously, and it is completely connected with many previous situations where combat power does not match the actual situation [Like][Like][Like]
Not bad. Why did the author run away [crying]
The author's emotional line is really better than most Naruto's
Author, your book is very good. I haven't seen such a rigorous Naruto book for a long time. I hope you stick to it. The reading is very smooth. Come on, I give you a five-star review!
The writing is smooth, and it is a single female protagonist. It is also rare that Sasuke and Hinata have good cp. Please continue to update.
Good writing by Tomato fans
I have a question, is it not enough to practice so many forbidden techniques in Konoha, so I have to leave the village?
It's beautiful, but you're really good at breaking up chapters, every time you get to the most exciting moments [angry]
Not bad indeed. CP Zuohina is very thoughtful. Hopefully new eyes will appear.
It would be better to add a Xiangling.
This book is a very good one among the Sasuke fanfics I have read. The early plot is similar to the original one, but it is more interesting than the original one, such as Naru Sa's first kiss. The turning point of Sasuke's plot is to betray Konoha, open the kaleidoscope, and merge with eternity. The middle and later stages of the story are very important. I personally hope not to give up on Tenbu-ryu Kenbuki Taijutsu. After all, I have learned eight swordsmanship, but swordsmanship is more suitable for Sasuke. After all, Sasuke is very handsome, and there are also the development of some ninjutsu such as Chidori-ryu. Wall, Thunder Release, and Kirin. If the Mangekyō Eye Technique is still Amaterasu and Kaguto Ming, then the Fire Release can create more. This time, since Sasuke has all five elements, other ninjutsu can also create some. It is best not to have shortcomings. Mangekyō Eye Technique alone People feel that the black flame set is no longer comparable to the dual divine power. The dual divine power is too strong. It integrates offense and defense. The forward swing of the divine power is reduced, and the incorporation time is also increased. You can create a new pupil technique. After all, it reflects the eye of the soul. It is best to use the illusion of time and space. There is nothing in the later stage. Mo Da Yong can be said to be immune to those bosses, and then there is Itachi. After all, there were always people who said "I hope you can grow up with him in the next life, instead of watching him grow up." As a movie fan, I definitely hope that One vs. Seven can survive. Now that the protagonist has Fugaku's Mangekyo, the sacrifice of One vs. Seven is not necessary. I hope the author can try to let him survive. Finally, there is the Rinnegan. This time I think Sasuke can open it in advance. I use Hashirama cells to activate the samsara eye. I am looking forward to Sasuke who has both eyes with six magatama samsara eyes and can close automatically. The ability of Tenshou is very easy to use. I think I can improve the eyes. One is Tenshou and the other is the auxiliary eye technique of Tenshou. Then I hope that these two types of Tenshou can create a barrier. I can change places in this barrier at will and then there is nothing to say. In the end, this book is really good. I hope I can read more on the weekend. Also, since the original Sasuke is not dead, it may be a foreshadowing. Sasuke's soul is essentially the power of Yin. The key to the six magatama that can be closed in the later stage should be this. I hope the author will not write it down.
The author is great, can you accept more heroines? I suggest Hinata ➕ Ino ➕ Terumi Mei ➕ Tsunade [sneered smile] [admiration] Then I feel that your fighting description is still a bit deceptive. Most of them are physical skills. I feel like I have become a warrior in a fantasy novel. I should write more about ninjutsu duels. After all, this is Naruto [Thinking]
Can you please stop calling me by your original name? Wouldn't it be better to just call him gay? What a show (maybe I didn't see it)
So far so good. There are not many books written about Sasuke, and even fewer that are good. This one is considered well-written so far. The character should not collapse, the combat power system should not be too exaggerated, and there should be no creation of forces (a lot of p things). In my opinion, these three points have a great impact on book reviews. I hope the author can perform stably. Give you a five-star support I felt that I was going high and low, and things were going well up front. It wasn't until I met Zabuza after I defected that I knew something was wrong. It was obvious that I was going to develop and form my own power. I looked at it again and found that I was no longer interested. It was so troublesome.
Come on, come on, the writing is very good, the character is not broken, you have to stick to it, the author is great [eating melon]
So far it's pretty good, come on! ! !
Remember to pay attention to the number of times Obito uses Susanoo when writing the article later. Obito cannot evolve the Eternal Eye. He only relies on Hashirama Cells and Senra Wanxun to use his ability frequently. But frequent half-body Susano will definitely not work. He will be blind faster than Sasuke.
The author's writing is smooth, the font is fair, and it has a single heroine. Keep updating.
The font does justice and is well-aimed, making up for the film's shortcomings. The author is optimistic about you, don't mess up [like][like][like].
Very well written Sasuke story. There could be more emotional scenes
The writing is fluent and not mindless. The changes to the Chunin Exam Qualifiers are a bit interesting.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Very good! Sasuke is not OOC at all! The interaction with Hinata was also very interesting! There is a lot of foreshadowing, and I am looking forward to the plot behind it! The author has not released any updates yet! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
I personally feel very good about this book so far. I feel that the author may have written it while watching the video and actually still remembered the names of some obscure characters [OK]
Not bad. Very pretty.
Well written, not bad. ♡(*´∀｀*)(*´∀｀*)♡(ง •̀_•́)งCome on
Good looking, good luck to the author
It's really pretty
Not bad, I'm a little curious about what Sasuke and Hinata's child has eyes like [laughing evilly]
It's very well written, I hope I can keep writing.
It's okay to write, keep it up
It's still pretty good so far
Great, please give it a try, author Please, the author please update it quickly. [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
It's very exciting. Chapter 82 has filled in all the holes left before and explained the foreshadowing before. The author writes very rigorously, and it is completely connected with many previous situations where combat power does not match the actual situation [Like][Like][Like]
Not bad. Why did the author run away [crying]
The author's emotional line is really better than most Naruto's
Author, your book is very good. I haven't seen such a rigorous Naruto book for a long time. I hope you stick to it. The reading is very smooth. Come on, I give you a five-star review!
The writing is smooth, and it is a single female protagonist. It is also rare that Sasuke and Hinata have good cp. Please continue to update.
Good writing by Tomato fans I have a question, is it not enough to practice so many forbidden techniques in Konoha, so I have to leave the village?
It's beautiful, but you're really good at breaking up chapters, every time you get to the most exciting moments [angry]
Not bad indeed. CP Zuohina is very thoughtful. Hopefully new eyes will appear. It would be better to add a Xiangling.