Welcome everyone to read my work. I am a newbie and have a sudden whim. If you have any questions, please give me advice and give me some suggestions. If you want to scold me, I will secretly scold me. Thank you for your glass heart. The heroine Meng Xi, no cp, thank you.
Reader comments
This fanfic of the previous "Ye Luoli" is unfolded from the perspective of Meng Xi, showing the various states of living beings. The characters' personalities and emotions are described in detail, allowing readers to feel the changes and growth brought about by the years (hehehe, let me praise myself ~ don't expose me). However, the development of some plots is slightly abrupt, affecting the overall coherence. Overall, this fanfic is remarkable in terms of creativity and emotional expression, but there is still room for improvement in plot polishing.
Author: I know that this novel has too many shortcomings, and there are many places that need to be revised, and there are very few memorable points, but I will continue to work hard to write a better work, please believe me. Finally, I would like to thank my readers who tolerate the shortcomings of my writing style.
The pace is too fast and the logic of the story is not very clear, but I believe you can do it, come on
It feels a little weird, but I don't know where it is
This fanfic of the previous "Ye Luoli" is unfolded from the perspective of Meng Xi, showing the various states of living beings. The characters' personalities and emotions are described in detail, allowing readers to feel the changes and growth brought about by the years (hehehe, let me praise myself ~ don't expose me). However, the development of some plots is slightly abrupt, affecting the overall coherence. Overall, this fanfic is remarkable in terms of creativity and emotional expression, but there is still room for improvement in plot polishing. Author: I know that this novel has too many shortcomings, and there are many places that need to be revised, and there are very few memorable points, but I will continue to work hard to write a better work, please believe me. Finally, I would like to thank my readers who tolerate the shortcomings of my writing style.
The pace is too fast and the logic of the story is not very clear, but I believe you can do it, come on
It feels a little weird, but I don't know where it is