I Became an Immortal in the Tang Dynasty

I feel that the pace of "On My Own" should be faster and the protagonist should be more arrogant than writing about trivial things every day. It's a pity that there is such a good golden finger, and I am only one of them, so I should stop playing with the gangsters. Use some cool ideas to improve your life, and then the protagonist can improve his strength and pursue his own path. After earning a small amount of money, he can spend a lot of time playing with local gangsters.

It's okay. The most important thing when reading a novel is creativity, and the most important thing is the plot. It doesn't matter what the writing style is. I hope the author will update it soon. What I enjoyed about reading this book: 1. The protagonist is alone and has extraordinary power. 2. Golden Finger is very clever. I just finished reading a novel about absorbing the will power of all living beings, and I want to find something similar. I retract my comment, it's so fucking awkward, this is the fourth or fifth time I've added and removed this book from my bookshelf. It's extremely twisted and awkward, and makes people feel angry and blood-thirsty after watching it. I originally thought it would be two stars, but since the author worked so hard to update it to more than 200 photos before discontinuing it, I gave it four stars. After all, I can't be left so awkward alone. Come and take a look, everyone.

Can those things about men and women be dealt with in one go? To be honest, the subject matter is excellent, but there are too many emotional scenes.

Okay, I like this kind of self-centered Tang Dynasty, but author, can you do it faster? How does the person next door do ten updates a day, and even add 20 updates a day? If you come and make ten updates at once, the gift will definitely be indispensable.

Author. According to the setting, each of Fengyun's mythical beasts has its own inner elixir, which makes their respective abilities immortal. I think the inner elixirs of Phoenix and Qilin can also be found. Or unicorn blood, phoenix blood, etc.

This little girl can do bad things Ever since I saw that the protagonist didn't kill Zhang Shuxian, I quit the game. Why can I still read this book and keep recommending it to me?

Very beautiful, super exciting

This sister can't take it anymore, turn her elbows outwards

It's a bit toxic, but writing is not easy, so I'll give it 4 stars [crying with laughter]

I'll give it three stars first because the subject matter is relatively novel. The golden finger is exposed too quickly. Powerful people will definitely conflict with the protagonist after they know that the items in Fengyun are real. It will take a while to see how the author comes around.

The subject matter is okay, but you can give others some martial arts. It takes time to practice, and giving nothing is not interesting. It is equivalent to playing with ants every day. You can pass on the elimination, and give nothing to others, only to your own family, and then give it to your sister when she gets married. It is different to pass it on.

After reading the third chapter, I can only say I wish the author a prosperous future. I personally feel that the author's opening chapter is inappropriate. Even if the specific source of this ability is not mentioned, it should indicate that there is such an ability. A family gets along day and night, and they can't see each other when they look up. Mian Mianxiang was initially thought to be a heart attack by his family, and the family resorted to selling pots to cure the disease. Of course, what this article is talking about is that the King of Medicine is kind-hearted and did not ask for money. Okay, let's just say this. I am not qualified to make irresponsible remarks. After all, I have only read three chapters, and the author has been prospering all the way.

A very good book, but the plot is too slow and the protagonist is not very exciting! After reading it all, I skipped dozens of chapters and tell me your feelings! One is slow to heat up! The second is that the protagonist is afraid of wolves before and tigers later, and has many worries! Thirty kinds of horse writing! So far, there are already four princesses in Gaoyang! But the subject matter is definitely good! It's just that I'm not very happy with the writing! Personal opinion

Very well written and very fresh! Why is the rating so low?

For creativity, I am willing to give it five stars, but combined with the plot, I can only give it four stars.

Well written, when will the saint appear in front of people? Very beautiful and very immersive. It's just that the pretentious plot is not enough. Write more about other people's shocked expressions.

It's pretty good to watch, and the more you watch it, the more exciting it gets! Big cheers for the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

I don't feel any shortcomings yet The score is left at 5 points, which feels abnormal. Even if it is worse, it will still be hovering at 6 points. Now I know why the rating is so low, because the progress is too slow.

It just looks good. Are there those who give it low marks or maliciously take advantage of it?

Kill decisively. In troubled times, kill the Holy Mother's heart first. I can't give you a five-star praise!

Overall, I feel like it's not that good. I'll give it five stars for my efforts.

The creativity is very good, but some plots are strangely written.

It's super beautiful, cleverly conceived, and the finishing touch is added to make people fall in love with it.

It is full of imagination and is definitely a good book. The story is narrated step by step. I never expected that Tomato has such an engaging book. I hope the author will not care about the negative fans and start with a million.

Big cheers to the author.

Don't know why the rating is so low! This is the first time I have complained about a book [what][what]

The plot of this article is very fascinating, but the author's recent updates are a bit worrying!

First of all, I have never read this novel with familiar content. Both the content and setting are very new. The author's description of the details is not so perfect, but the flaws are not concealed. This is a good book.

It's pretty, but I heard it's poisonous

The writing is very to my liking!