海贼：顶上前夕苏醒，捏爆路飞！

Hello everyone, I am the author~ I started to feel good after more than ten chapters~ I mainly describe the growth process of the protagonist, and the progress in the early stage may be a little faster. I want to get to the top part as soon as possible. Everyone is welcome to give any opinions. I will take a good look at them and consider them seriously.

Just dying so happily for Luffy is such a cool article

As long as you don't get involved with trashy Luffy, Five Stars will be fine

It is a very well-written pirate novel. There are some minor points in the early stages but they are innocuous. At most, the early portrayal of the heroine is deliberately too tsundere-like. There is a small flashback in the finale, which can be considered a kind of romance. The protagonist kills decisively. He kills Luffy in just one chapter, shoots his head directly, and then executes Garp. To be honest, Garp and Roger's backstabs are really disgusting. They are really clowns, and there are Kirby and Momonosuke, look at it, it's very exciting, the final battle with Im is a bit forced to end, [laughing and crying] I can't help it, this is also an ending. The wedding of three people in the century is the most romantic and the most detailed chapter. This chapter deserves two stars, one for the justice of the protagonist and the heroine, one for the good ending, and the remaining one, damn it! [Pouts] What the hell is this broken system? You can't finish it even after you hang it up? How can you reverse the course of history after absorbing the power of the King of Heaven? Even the sick, weak and old Whitebeard is injured? So buckle it and give it 4 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐

The thunder fruit on the sky island must be taken. Later, the protagonist will get a double fruit, which is very satisfying. However, it seems that the strength will grow a bit faster. Hahahahahaha. Just say it casually. Come on, author. It's just too little and it will be gone in a while.

Such a good book is not rated 9 points! The male protagonist is both wise and brave, and he will never show mercy to pirates! It can be said to be an upgraded version of absolute justice! Luffy, Ace, Blackbeard, Momonosuke, etc. No longer exist! The ending is perfect!

Five-star praise. Update soon! ! ! It would be nice if there was more of a shock to the protagonist coming back. And how do I feel about it? There are so many minor characters that the protagonist needs to personally take action from. It would be nice if a subordinate suddenly stood up and said something rather mean. Hahahahahaha. And why hasn't Moria's identity been revealed yet? ! The most important thing is to update quickly! !

Okay, okay, kill the protagonist group, and kill Garp too. The Garp family don't know how to position themselves, one is a navy, one is a revolutionary, and one is a pirate. All three major forces have his people [laughing evilly]

The author will reply to people, no matter what the content is, give 5 stars first [Learned]

The score is so low, but there is a reason. I guess the author killed those characters who are fans of One Piece, haha, they were targeted!

It's beautiful, and the author will also listen to readers' suggestions.

I can only say that I can't get enough of it. The quality is very good. It's a very good book. Keep it up. [Smile] [Smile]

Rocks' last-minute curtain call was great, taking this dazzling D to a new level

Just because the protagonist group died cleanly, it deserves five stars! It's even better to also get a Cap as a gift 👍🏻.

If you're jumping to watch it, killing Luffy and Garp is worth five elements [Thinking]

Great writing. Garp, Ace, and Luffy died well. It felt so good that I picked it up. I just watched the war on the top.

The look and feel is very good. The lack of one star is purely a matter of personal preference. The starting system only gives me a fruit and space and then disappears. It is better to directly get these functions in another way, otherwise it will be a bit abrupt.

The writing is very good. Come and read it.

It's a pretty good novel, keep up the good work

It's very cool, invincible, decisive in killing, the character trajectory changes in the plot are reasonable, unified, sweet ending, the system is not very bubbling (purely a fun sub-system). The author is very lively and polite, and he also accepts readers' suggestions. It would be better if he could be more tough. Some people are used to it. There is also a paragraph where everyone has to laugh together to make the commentary fun. One brother asked the author several times for breeding, and another asked the author three times whether he was a match. He laughed so hard (｢･ω･)｢

The overall structure is very good and the plot progression is also very reasonable. Although I quite like some of the pirates, there is really no problem following the protagonist's ideas.

Okay, okay, come on!

Not bad, very good

Not bad, come on, author.

It's pretty cool, I hope it won't be interrupted or unfinished (by the way, why does the protagonist's fruit only have defense but no recovery ability? Other fantasy beasts have very strong recovery capabilities)

I really like this book, Invincible, but it ended too quickly.

It was very exciting in the early stage, especially when it came to the battle at the top, it was so exciting that it exploded. [Face covering][OK] I'll check it out in the early stage.

It's pretty good, the protagonist kills decisively. Did you miss the Fish-Man Island in the end?

I give you a thumbs up, you wrote it well.

Give you a five star