Young General, Your Wife Has Aborted the Baby

A book delayed by its title. They were the first book friends I met on Tomato who encouraged and supported each other and pointed out problems to each other. The author made repeated revisions to create a woman who emerged from an unfortunate fate. Come on boy, let your words shine! 👍

The more you read, the smoother it becomes, and you can see that the author is making progress.

The writing is delicate and described from the first-person perspective of the heroine. The story has a strong sense of immersion and the writing is logically rigorous. The heroine is smart, rational and decisive. It is worth reading. 👍

Big cheers for the author!

After a rough look, the rhythm can be detailed and the writing is very detailed. The early stage is well prepared. I feel like there are quite a lot of knives.

The story unfolds from the first-person perspective of the heroine, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, why do I feel so wronged by the heroine and support the heroine to be strong alone 😢😢😢

I just want to see how many hours I read every day In the past two months, I feel like I can't write a word. My mind is completely dry. I vowed to change this book to the third person and finish it in 2024, but it seems that I can't finish it. Today I read the first-person version again. Of course, it's not the first version, because it has been revised so many times that I haven't retained it, but I think the first-person version is also quite interesting. Yes, intellectually I say that no matter what, it will be richer after the changes than before. Emotionally, I feel that it is so overwhelming and unnecessary. Every time I think about forgetting it, I will remind myself of the fact that the first book was a mistake. The completion is more important than perfection. I should try to write a story to the end first, and just drag it on... When can I really write a complete story?!! What a pain!