Major General, My Wife Aborted the Child.

A book delayed by its title. They were the first book friends I met on Tomato who encouraged and supported each other and pointed out problems to each other. The author made repeated revisions to create a woman who emerged from an unfortunate fate. Come on boy, let your words shine! [Praise]

The more you read, the smoother it becomes, and you can see that the author is making progress.

Big cheers for the author!

The writing is delicate and described from the first-person perspective of the heroine. The story has a strong sense of immersion and the writing is logically rigorous. The heroine is smart, rational and decisive. It is worth reading. [Praise]

After a rough look, the rhythm can be detailed and the writing is very detailed. The early stage is well prepared. I feel like there are quite a lot of knives.

The story unfolds from the first-person perspective of the heroine, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, why do I feel so wronged by the heroine and support the heroine to be strong alone [crying][crying][crying]

I just want to see how many hours I read every day In the past two months, I feel like I can't write a single word, and my mind is completely dry. I vowed to change this book to the third person and finish it in 2024, but it seems that I can't finish it. Today I went to read the first-person version. Of course, it is not the first version, because it has been revised so many times that I have not retained it, but I think the first-person version is also quite interesting. Yes, intellectually I say that no matter what, it will be richer after the changes than before. Emotionally, I feel that it is so overwhelming and unnecessary. Every time I think about forgetting it, I will remind myself of the fact that the first book was a mistake. The completion is more important than perfection. I should try to write a story to the end first, and just drag it on... When can I really write a complete story? ! ! What a pain!