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This kind of literature is also good for edifying the soul and has a leisurely feeling.

It's not bad. I think it will become better over time. This is getting better.

Okay, okay, okay, no problem for now, I've read all 135 chapters. It's been a long, long time since I've read such an ordinary but interesting book. I have read thousands of books and they are very good.

Looks good, I don't know why the rating is so low

I understand, the real book is a comic book. Not even a villain is going to die? Several trashy third-rate villains repeatedly appeared with their faces changed. Are you preparing for a few big events? At the end of the big event, reinvigorate the villains who died before? I'm looking forward to it. The dignified golden elixir monk's cave was robbed, his spiritual pet was expelled from the sect, and he almost died. What should our protagonist do? ... Oh, he reconciled with the person who dug out his cave. ... Think... It must be that the person who dug out his cave was too strong... ... Oh, they are some golden elixirs whose cultivation is not as good as his... The protagonist must be kind to others... Right? ... Oh, these guys who dug into his cave almost killed him several times. Then the protagonist won't make it easy for them... Right? ... Oh, he was given something casually to kill him, and he continued to be the supreme elder of the sect that had harmed him... At least the Supreme Elder has a lot of resources! ... Oh, the Supreme Elder still gets a fixed salary, and he even has to use his salary in exchange for reading this book... ... Well... I can't think of a way to make up for it... The protagonist... Is quite amazing.

The protagonist has a gentle personality, but he is not a Madonna-like farming novel. The protagonist talks about win-win cooperation. The plot develops step by step and the logic is clear. It is not the kind of fantasy novel that makes progress all the way. It is very good [like]

Listen to Chapter 282. Traditional fairy tale novel. Although there is a systematic form, it is only used to display the protagonist's current level and other information, and serves as an ability evaluation and reminder. There is no additional cheat ability. The novel is set in a world of immortal cultivation, where the weak and the strong eat each other. The storyline is coherent and reasonable, and the character settings are more in line with common sense. The protagonist is not too cold without the Madonna. Book friends who like traditional immortality novels can read it. I hope the author can maintain his standards and not make the writing too good or unfinished. Don't be a rogue when reading, just send a message and comment. Come on!

The protagonist is an ordinary person, Ordinary villains, ordinary people with ordinary people's IQs and ordinary people's experience, will be deceived, taken advantage of, make mistakes, fail, and be fooled. So far, the writing style is okay. It's a bit slow to pick up. I'm looking forward to what's coming next. I read a hundred more pictures, Advantages: The sense of immersion is very strong, and the sense of substitution is excellent. The author does not directly describe many characters, and there are not many daily life, but he is very good at portraying characters from the side of interpersonal relationships. The upgrade pace is slow, but it is very readable because of the strong sense of substitution. It is really comfortable to watch the protagonist become stronger little by little, and the continuous small refreshments are really comfortable. If the shortcomings are not outstanding, I can give it 5 stars. Disadvantages: The two chapters in the middle are really too poisonous. The author may have too few relationships with the opposite sex in real life, so he portrays the negative female characters deeply, but when it comes to the positive female characters and pets, the protagonist is like a licking dog (licking a dog is highly regarded, at that time (like a child), but I didn't know how to cover up my shortcomings, so I just licked my face and wrote it. There are three or four chapters that I would have given up if I didn't resist Gaozhen. The emotional scenes are negative marks, and this is not the first book. I just can't recognize my own weight, so I have to write it. Are emotional scenes that important in male videos? Panlong doesn't even have an emotional line, but it's still a high-quality cool novel. Other cool novels can have a heroine and no emotions. You're a slow-moving farming novel. The main character is originally suffocated, so why are you thinking about your b-heroine? If you don't know how to write, don't do that scene where you meet someone who accidentally becomes a double cultivator and then pretends to be a slap in the face in the future (this kind of scene can only be as frustrating as a turtle in Gouwen. It neither suits the character nor only adds to the confusion. What's the point?). Can't you be more ordinary? Out of 100 chapters, 97 chapters are rated 4.5 Stars, and 3 chapters are not worthy of 1 star. It won't change if I give them 4 stars.

The previous article written by Gou Dao Xiu Xian is very good! Chapter 47: Character's personality changes drastically and becomes extremely poisonous

It's been more than three hundred chapters, and it's still the Qi refining period. This immortal is really difficult to cultivate. How many words does the author plan to write?

It's a good book. Except for the main character being too bitchy and the upgrade being too slow, it's pretty good. It's a free book. It doesn't matter if you write a little more to limit your level. Don't do it in some paid software, and there won't be too many people complaining about it. The logic is quite strict, and there are no particularly poisonous points. Maybe it's because I'm full of poison resistance. I think this book is quite good [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

It's a pretty good farming story. Cultivation, Taoist companions, wealth, and skills are indispensable. Farming accumulates wealth. The protagonist doesn't just have to farm for a long time. He doesn't have to take risks for a long time. He doesn't have to take risks actively. He can take risks passively. Otherwise, how can he understand the dangers of the world of cultivation?

It is a farming novel with a good story structure. The protagonist is not Long Aotian, and it is not a brainless novel. The writing is also good. It's a very interesting article, the logic is very normal, and it feels like it's coming to you slowly.

The first 700 chapters are very interesting, but in the later chapters, you can feel that the author wants to end it quickly. Some of the foreshadowings buried in the front are not well written. If you write well, thousands of chapters will not be a problem! The overall feeling is that the writing is good. A score of 8.5 Is too low. A score of 9.0 Is achievable. If you expand it later and write a score of 9.5, It will be fine.

After reading the whole novel, let me tell you my feelings. First of all, this novel is relatively bland, with no ups and downs, no bloodshed, and a lot of poisonous points. First of all, there is the problem of the heroine's character. The heroine is relatively unsuccessful in writing, with few appearances, paranoid personality, insufficiently fleshed-out character, and rather abrupt. Secondly, the male protagonist says he is a dog but is not a dog enough, and the male protagonist is a dog but is not a dog enough. There is a lot of nonsense literature, the character is too complex, a combination of being a bitch, naive, kind, demonic, and idiotic. The third is that there were too many descriptions of the male protagonist during his Qi refining period, which led to many people being persuaded to leave the film at the beginning of the story. If the breakthrough is too fast in the later stage, it will be boring. It is a farming novel with a dull beginning and a boring ending. The plot of this novel is well described, the transitions are natural, the writing is simple, and the description of human nature is relatively thorough. Although the understanding of Tao is not deep enough, it has its own unique insights. The early descriptions of Goldfinger are pretty good. The plan for each step is explained quite clearly. If you like refreshing writing, you can change the book to read. Reading this book requires patience. This book can be regarded as a good novel. It does not have the passion of ups and downs, nor does it have the passion of a slogan party. It's good, but not great enough, so I gave it four stars.

Well written, Really good Other novels are about farming. In fact, they tend to be about accumulating grain and slowly becoming king. Farming in the early stage and all kinds of wandering in the later stage. This is where the talent is really used correctly! The main character is fully developed! He is not too promiscuous and does not easily make enemies with others.

A very good choice, it's good to take a closer look

The first and middle stages are good, but the later stages are not developed and the ending is sloppy. Fortunately, it is not unfinished. The ending is pretty good.

This novel is suitable for people who can calm down and read slowly. It is suitable for people of a certain age who enjoy tea and listen to books. It is not suitable for readers who blindly pursue refreshing and fast-food articles! Although chapters 45 and 46 of the novel have a sense of fragmentation in the character of the protagonist, as if it was written by a different person, they were quickly revised later and are well worth reading! Generally speaking, as a bookworm who has read Xianxia novels for more than 20 years, I still have a very high opinion of this novel! Well worth a look, readers!

Such a good book, it would be a shame not to continue it

Although the author's understanding of immortals is not yet complete, the plot still has a certain conception. The characters' dialogues are still unable to reflect the characters' identities, which is related to the author's lack of experience. But these can still be overcome through hard work. I hope the author can communicate more with people from all aspects of society.

I have read more than half of the story here. The plot design of the whole text is relatively reasonable. The psychological character of the protagonist is in line with the setting of a small character. He is ordinary and determined. I don't see any mistakes or ugly paragraphs. The author is very rigorous and steady, and he is a very good narrator.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that this book is well written, with clear ideas and a beginning and end.

It's worth appreciating. When I first read the introduction, I thought it was going to be some kind of heroine who couldn't compete with a time-traveling girl, which was a bit frustrating, but I didn't expect that I felt really comfortable after reading it. 1. The heroine is a lady, has the talent to attract attention, is smart and clever, can afford to take things on, and doesn't give the scumbag a chance. They are very knowledgeable and have an online IQ, so they will never suffer. 2. Jiang Yan, not much revealed, you will sigh after reading it 3. The writing is solid, the descriptions are detailed and vivid, and the beauty of ancient literature makes people feel comfortable. Yes, I am short of words and cannot describe it, but it is a very comfortable feeling. I think buying shares Not a loss.

I like this kind of true novel with a million words that is still in the foundation stage [Like]

You don't need to watch it when you go to the East China Sea, it's all about love and love.

Awesome, the author's writing is very novel and very common. I like it.

I have read a lot of books about cultivating immortals, and this one is considered to have a novel angle. The setting of Taoist Gou is interesting. From the wretchedness of the little characters, the world of cultivating immortals gradually unfolds into the grand and beautiful world. Although the early stage is a bit narrow, I can still watch it with gusto. I look forward to it! I hope it won't be too overwhelming!

The roller coaster ride is still a bit exciting in the front, but the rocket ride is directly behind. The body is in the sky, and the soul is chasing behind.

I think the farming novel is quite good, except for the emotional scenes that are a bit abrupt and embarrassing, and the fact that I owe spiritual stones every now and then, but it doesn't affect the reading. It's worth recommending. Come on!