In Order to Become an Immortal, I Became an Entertainment Boss

It's good-looking and attractive, unlike ordinary grassroots rise. With full strength, you can have whatever you want, as long as it is operated and transported. The most important thing is that I only started the plot after going to school to study, so it is more realistic and practical. I've seen too many poor people. This is unusual. In fact, many college students can't even read music scores and can't play musical instruments. It's outrageous to write songs suddenly like that. Come on, author✊

It's okay, but it feels so fast. I feel like the author can take his time and describe the content of some songs and novels. You make me feel that I have no feeling when I read it. The writing style should be more delicate. You write all these simply and not in detail, so it makes me feel very empty. Many of them are just praise [smile]

It's nice to read and the author is very stable.

It's very interesting, but it's a pity that the author ran away. Will he come back? Yanzi [crying] Please update me.

Not bad, but there were too many songs, the process was too fast, and the response from the audience was not very full. I hope the author can make corrections in the future, keep up the good work, and keep working hard!

Encouragement for new authors

The cool thing about this type of article is the analysis of novels and songs and the feedback from readers. As a result, the author has all mentioned it in one stroke, which is a bit scratchy.

Okay, nothing too bad about it.

Pretty good, a bit like an outline

It's nice to read and very attractive to read on.