Elf********

The theme is very good, but you don't need to follow the official settings of the game in Little Life. Their cartoons are for children, so of course they can't be grown up. Besides, you have special settings, so why follow their settings? It can only feed readers poison. It's better to be more relaxed and open up the game.

Fortunately, there are a lot of typos. The price of the props can actually be adjusted to prevent the span from being too large. I am also a little curious about the elves at the back. It is known that Nido, La Luras, and an unknown dragon type (most likely a Tyrannosaurus or a biting land shark, but it is also fun, so I dare to guess it is a pink airplane). I am really curious about what the other three will be.

I feel great, why is no one watching? Don't everyone like cool articles and daily articles? How boring that is

I highly recommend a few elves to the author. I really hope that the protagonist can conquer these elves. The first Thunder Fantasy Beast "Zeraora", The second boxing master "Martial Arts Bear Master", The third shadow fantasy beast "Mashado", The 4th Fire Swordsman "Blue Flame Blade Demon", The fifth fire warrior "Red Lotus Armor Rider", The 6th waveguide hero "Lucario", I strongly recommend "Zeraora" to the author. Whether it is "Zeraora" in the anime or the movie version, her performance is very eye-catching, and her appearance is super high. She also has the exclusive move "Plasma Lightning Punch". The yellow "Zeraora" is so handsome, "and being handsome is a lifetime thing", so I sincerely hope that the author can consider my suggestion, thank you The yellow "Zeraora" is super handsome. Compared to the flash, the yellow "Zeraora" is more handsome. Thunder traveling through the forest city

Write quickly, I really like Nidoking

I think I can also tame a Iron Dumbbell, because ghost-type Pokémon and psychic-type Pokémon often get together, so it's best to start training them from the egg stage [laughter]

There are advantages and disadvantages. In terms of advantages, I think at least Larulus has finally stopped evolving into Gardevoir and prefers cool elf dogs and electric cats.

Author, why didn't you update on time today? What happened? Look, please don't stop updating. It's better to stop updating than to stop updating. Comparatively, you can't do it either. Readers all know what you are doing! Update well. I think your writing is good. Come on, catch up with Teacher Lu!

The plot is very good, and it is the first book I have read so far that uses Nidoking as the second Pokémon. And the content is not like other authors who sell dog meat with sheep's heads. It is about Pokémon, but it is actually a harem novel.

Overall, it's okay, but the price is a bit wrong. It cost 7 million to treat Lalu Lash, which is too much. Isn't that right about the part about fighting Gyarados? It's too outrageous. If you use 4x Restraint, 10 Force and 10 Life Orbs to defeat a Gyarados of the same level with one punch, don't you still owe a life? That 79 points of physical defense, 95 points of HP can resist for so long, it's outrageous.

Not bad. It's been a long time since I've seen such good urban Pokémon writing.

The content of this novel is very interesting. I hope the author will update it soon and don't stop updating it.

You can update more every day, maybe keep four updates, it's not too much [Thinking]

A very good fan fiction, but the update is too slow.

Come on, author, don't stop until you finish writing.

Awesome, very interesting

Very good, cheers author

Keep working hard, come on, come on, come on

You can use Sakaki as a template to make a giant needle bee

Aren't we going to get a second characteristic? Did I miss it?

It's still pretty good, come on

Personally I think it looks good

Good, come on, well written

Oops, there's nothing wrong with me.

Very well written, keep up the good work

Yes,,, but I feel uncomfortable when I see a Pokémon from the future traveling back to find myself in the present. The book is fine,

I used to be dismissive, but now I smell so good

It's very good, it's very good, but it's just very little work.

It will look better in the back (trust me)

When I look at it, I feel like there is going to be a female protagonist, but there is a foreign woman ogling the protagonist.