The Beginning of Divine Creation

I have now read the latest chapter. From the current point of view, this book is a high-quality novel. The details of the relationship with the characters can be said to be very good. The emotional drama is also top-notch in the same genre. For me, I did not find any poisonous points. It may be that I have a high resistance to toxicity, or it may be that this book is more in line with my taste. However, from the handling of emotional drama in the writing and the logical worldview of the entire book to the control of the relationships between the characters, and the excellent handling of the characters' personalities, this book is a good book. Take a look at Jianyi

It's very good. The only flaw is that the protagonist sacrifices his life to save the world for the protection of the heroine in the first world and the kindness of giving the artifact. It is difficult to criticize this kind of behavior that attaches great importance to kindness. On the one hand, it is kindness and on the other hand, it is family, but only a male protagonist with this kind of personality can conquer the yandere.

It's not finished yet, it's to my liking, the plot is reasonable, and it's the only one among 🍅's novels for me. Come on, keep updating, and remember not to lose quality for the sake of speed. It's not terrible to delay. What's terrible is that unreasonable arrangements lead to interruptions in the novel and even eunuchs. Author, you don't want your novel to collapse in the middle, right?

The rating of 7.4 Is a bit low. I think the writing is okay. Although there are some shortcomings in the middle, it is still okay. It should be above 8.5. I hope that most book lovers can discover this book, and I also hope that the author will not have an appendix [crying][crying][crying] I hope there can be less sensationalism between men and men

So far, it looks pretty good. The two heroines Vetiwei and Fengyu who appeared earlier, as well as the two ordinary (?) Girls, have all been foreshadowed, but it seems that it will take a while before they can appear again, and the interaction between the yandere heroine and the protagonist is not locked blindly. It will be really good to intersperse the daily life of family and childhood as well as other events in this world. The description of the life and death comrades-in-arms relationship between the three protagonists is also very good. The slightly lower score may be due to the current lack of writing or too few updates? (Bushi [laughing evilly])

It's quite good. I'm a plot fan, so at least I can keep reading when I'm in a book shortage. But it must be because the author has just written a book. The writing style is a bit immature and there are some unnecessary descriptions. I hope it can be polished. Well, the plot needs to be studied. I don't know how the plot is set up. Once I enter the world and use my brain, the character design falls apart. From just a few words, it was clear that his status was high-ranking, but then he went to beg a maid [what] is inexplicable

Overall it's okay, but there are still a lot of shortcomings. The protagonist must fight on his own in the end every battle. I think it's appropriate to have a relaxing dungeon to make it more enjoyable? Although he will win in the end. And since the character of the protagonist in this book is neither old nor wise (it feels like he just takes things as they come, he plays the role of a powerful thug in a trio, not using his brain and facing things as they come), so there is no sense of satisfaction in being in control of the overall situation. Maybe the author wanted to break away from low-level cool writing? He didn't pretend to be a slap in the face, maybe because he felt it didn't fit the character of the protagonist. But I think it's better to do it appropriately. There is also this official setting that I really don't like (but it's acceptable) In the end, I'll give it 4 stars. One star encourages the author to be relaxed and relaxed. The novel should still be a little relaxed and refreshing to make people read it. (The protagonist's battles don't have the feeling of being crushed, the overall situation doesn't have the feeling of strategic planning, and the daily life doesn't have the feeling of being pretentious and slapped in the face) Emm, the only possibility is to adjust the emotional line with the heroines, so readers who don't like emotional lines should not read this book. So come on, author! This book is already overall better than the others.

This book is very well written. The characters of the supporting characters are very vivid. It can be said that the two friends of Ke Li can be the protagonists in other books. I hope everyone will support this book. It is really good.

Not bad, um, pretty good-looking, with a few flaws, but they can be ignored, um, the only thing that makes me dissatisfied now is... This is too little, isn't it? ? ? The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, so hurry up! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry]

Very nice. Worth a look. Your Majesty the Queen of WOW.

The book is a good book, with an unexpected and reasonable ending. I have read many types of books, and to be precise, the endings are similar. Next is my opinion on the book. I feel like the first and middle stages of the book are classic male videos, with passionate battles and exciting stories, and love is just a seasoning. If you come here for yandere, you may be disappointed, but if you want to watch the fun of dipping beans, this is the right choice. As for the ending, it is semi-open, so it is not a bad ending. As an old bookworm, I don't know why the score is so low. Maybe it's because wild boars can't eat fine chaff🤓

The biggest advantage: The plot is extremely layered, with ups and downs, one link after another, and a close logical relationship. In addition, the description of the characters is also very three-dimensional and artistic. Disadvantages: The writing is not beautiful enough, but the original purpose of Tomato is to read a story for fun, so the flaws are not covered up. Among them, the plot of killing gods is the most typical, and it is also the reason why I want to comment. It can be said that it really catches the readers' attention and attracts their interest in reading (doge Of course, I have seen some people think that writing the dialogue between the three protagonists is a bit awkward. This is indeed a shortcoming, but in fact it is essential because it involves the fullness of the characters. It's just that I think the author needs to reconsider the proportion of the plot and the language, which will be better (who can't say that I am standing and talking without back pain, hehe) I forgot when I read it, but now I suddenly had the urge to review it. I don't know if the latter part is considered bad (it was a bit rushed, and I didn't have enough writing power). Anyway, I definitely didn't write about a point in the book that I read in the later part. Now I forget why. Forget it, let's just drop one star. Now the taste has improved. Looking at the book reviews I posted before, I don't think it will be the same as now. But after reading 99% of it, I still won't drop it.

It's quite good-looking. Whether it's upgrading monsters, equipment, or being cautious, this kind of life-saving will not appear in a very dangerous state, and will not make people feel insecure. It is also more Western-oriented, and the emotional line is also very good. It is really good-looking. Later, you can focus on writing some yandere and the like.

The writing is very detailed, but it's a bit unreadable. Check in today and look forward to the next chapter

After chasing for such a long time, I think it's okay ૮(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)ა If you want to see the comparison, you can just watch the early stage. There is basically nothing like Shura Field, but his plot is very good and very fascinating [laughs] My only flaw with him is when will Vetina meet the protagonist. She said she wanted to meet half a year ago, but she still hasn't met half a year later [laughs] Can you update it quickly [laughs]

It's really good, but why is it rated so low? ⊙_⊙I feel that the protagonist is well portrayed, and there is nothing toxic so far. Is it delayed by the title? [What][What][What] Much better looking than the one on the recommendation list, Shili Gold Rush

The writing is very good. Why is the rating so low? People nowadays are so demanding?

I have to say this is a seriously underestimated book. If you read it, you will be attracted by the content in the book and feel the passion of the protagonists. I hope the author can continue to persevere and not finish the work

It looks good. Let's get some more. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] The overall content feels very good and clear. It's a good, good book. [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

The writing style is good [heartfelt], the only pity is that the writing style and the selection of materials don't seem to correspond, but now it is very popular to write cool, yandere and other things [face covering]. I just don't understand why this book's rating is so low [Thoughts] Is it possible that someone is maliciously cheating on points? [Thinking][Pout] In short, the author's writing is getting better and better, and I will give you a meager rating [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] It felt like things suddenly started to get awkward later on, and I felt like I was digging my toes into the ground [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

It's really good-looking. Don't look at this as a yandere ヽ(≧Д≦)ﾉ. It's not really a book. Well... How should I put it? Anyway, it's a very nice book ୧(๑•̀⌄•́๑)૭. It's still as good-looking now, but it's about to end!

The plot and background are purely original. It can be said that although the novel is yandere, the content is not like that. Some people think that it may open a harem, but for the time being, it does not have the feeling of a harem in the first 300 pictures, and the characterization of the characters is still relatively detailed. I think this book should be rated more than nine points.

Now that I have finished reading the first chapter of the yandere story, I think it's pretty good. I don't quite understand why the score is only 8.2, But maybe it's because the plot when I first met the yandere in the first world was a bit poor, so no one watched it after a while. After reading this article, I thought it was actually good, but they didn't stick to it.

This book is really good, but the word "yandere" doesn't reflect it very well [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon]

The worldview is well conceived, the emotional lines and writing style are very delicate, and the twists and turns are not straightforward. It is obviously very interesting, but why are there fewer comments than the number of chapters? Brothers rise, the author pays great attention to publicity

(I've finished reading it. It's a bit strange to read on my phone offline.) It's a good book, but the golden finger in the middle has no sense of existence, and there are too many love debts. The ending is also quite sudden, does it just keep restarting the world? But the plot setting is still okay, and the pretense is enough.

That's great (⌯' '⌯)👏🏻, brother. It's not at all the level that Tomato should be. To be honest, the name puts you off. Before you clicked on it, you really didn't expect it to be such a book. According to the current trend, as long as it doesn't end badly and the characters don't collapse, it will basically be among the best on the Tomato platform. The arcs of the characters are very complete, and each character has its own growth. The writing may be a little green in some places, but the flaws are not hidden. The entanglement between the contradictions is also very good. Under the influence of his best friend, Li Chenyang gradually changes. Even though it may be his negotiation skills, when faced with the question of why he wants to protect the world, he can selfishly say, does protecting the world also need a reason? Like ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧The following are some of my humble opinions. The female characters are a bit saturated. It is difficult to have more romances around the protagonist. The author's writing skills may be tested after writing. Then, there is the issue of group portraits. The growth of the protagonists has been very complete. I think you can write a little bit about the growth of the supporting characters. The supporting characters are also the protagonists in their world and should not be just the foil of the protagonist. Of course, I only give this opinion because I think this is a book that favors group portraits. I hope you can stick to it, come on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The plot is very good. It doesn't quite match the title of the book. This is not a harem in the traditional sense. Most of it is about the real world. It is different from the traditional strategy of copying talents of yandere. The protagonist is not a scumbag. The plots are very novel. The second and third male characters are both pretty funny.

Highly recommended, suitable for most people - I am inspired to read every book and give every author who writes a book seriously a five-star rating♥~

So far it's pretty good, there are no typos, and the plot doesn't have too many problems. I'll give it 5 stars first. If the author does something later, the names of Ke Li and Ke Meng actually imply that "Ke" and "Meng" tell me that everything is fake and I will give it 1 star. The last scene gave me a bad impression. I wasted a lot of time for the final battle. In the end, there was no need to fight at all. The world was restarted directly. Everything Ke Li did was basically to defeat the Corruption. Lighthouse also made a lot of preparations to defeat the Corruption. In the end, there was no need to fight. So what was the purpose of doing so many things earlier? The yandere part was also very unclear. Of course, excluding the plot after the yandere and the Corrupted God of War invaded the world, it was still quite interesting.