Hell Begins: Why Do You Call Me a King?

Author, you write well, you write well. The protagonist fits my image very well - kind and wise [like]. Some of the main characters in some books I read before looked like XTL [face covering]

At present, the plot, rhythm, and writing are very good, and the supporting characters are relatively full, but I think more words can be used to describe the supporting characters to make these characters more vivid. After all, an excellent historical farming novel should be a people's history. Whether it is aristocrats, farmers, knights, thieves, robbers, cultists, or vagrants, in the turmoil of the country, every decision of the protagonist and every technological advancement will have a profound impact on all strata of the country.

It's a very good book. It's not very perfect in some places and could be improved. Overall, it's still a very good medieval book. If it's more technical, it could develop a little slower. In addition, I would like to mention the previous opinions on the military system. The author can take a look.

Okay, very good. I suggest the author take an hour's rest a day and type at other times.

A rare gem, at least for now. After reading the latest chapter, I feel that what the protagonist lacks most is not the ability to light up the technology tree, but his identity as an ordinary person. First, industry requires long-term accumulation. Even with the blessing of magic, the time it will take to reach the industrial level of World War I is still unknown. During this period, the protagonist's body will inevitably age, so it is necessary to enter the extraordinary. Second, the protagonist has no ability to protect himself. Judging from the current chapters, people of Nina's level can behead the protagonist at will, and there are many masters like the Kiwanis. The protagonist really needs a way to save his life. To be honest, modern technology is very difficult to deal with those extraordinary beings who come and go without a trace, and the protagonist's head cannot be protected from the beginning to the end. Finally, the protagonist's feeling of being powerless in the face of extraordinary beings is really unpleasant. Whether it is Nina or those Kiwanis, they are too arrogant. I look forward to the day when they fall from the altar. The author will update quickly! I want to see rivers of blood!

We already have a system, so it won't be difficult to enter the industrial age. Let's get some German weapon masters to destroy humans, and then slowly destroy other races. I suggest the author take a look at "Alien: A Total War between Technology and Magic"

The pace is very good, neither fast nor slow, but there are too few and not enough to watch.

Not much to say, the quality is above average and worth a look.

Actually quite good

The plot is all about the rise of industrialization in the Middle Ages. There is not much to say. Let me talk about my feelings about the characters in it. Let's talk about the king first. He is indeed a normal ordinary person in the 21st century, with various emotions and rationality. There are indeed many flaws. Even the safety of the king can be assassinated by anyone with a brain. However, there is no such arrangement. Maybe it is to promote the plot, so I won't go into it. I don't care if the female knight rebels or not, but one of her choices indirectly hurt the soldiers who were defending the country. This is very indignant and should be punished. Considering that she had no intention and had difficult reasons to directly eliminate her, I think it is a pity. I really like to see the daily life of the female knight and the king. One is aloof and the other is trustworthy and they love and kill each other. It would be better if the female knight and the king interact more and eliminate the barriers. The plot is also good. If you add the emotional line with the female knight, I might like this story more, so I will give it 4 stars. The one star deducted will be regarded as the regret that your female knight ended! I just put it on the bookshelf. I probably won't come back to read this for a long time. I hope I can see the joint efforts of the female knight and the king next time [laughing] but it's over and it probably won't happen again [face covering]

Very good, the main theme is to give the reactionary aristocrats of the Middle Ages a bit of modern shock

I read all the chapters of this novel from beginning to end in one go today. I like novels with this theme very much. The male protagonist of this article is still shaped like a modern person. His choices are no different from those of most people. This is also what I like about this book. I look forward to the author's new chapters.

It's pretty good, and the pace is okay. I like the step-by-step approach. The plot also has ups and downs, as well as humor and jokes. I hope the author can persevere. If you read too much, it will be unfinished because the data is not good. I will give you the three power generation points every day [please update]

The quality is good, the subject matter is to my liking, and the author listens to readers' ideas and reminders, and never delays correcting typos. This alone is better than many authors. (Actually, three chapters a day is enough, but I would like it more if it could be updated faster (ಡωಡ) [laughing])

A good western fantasy novel, but why is it so low? It's a pity that the protagonist started to become unserious in the later period and read like a loser.

Undead magic [smile] Free labor and machines that don't require rest, the capitalists are crying

Why are there so few people watching? Too few people have read this book. If it's of this quality, it shouldn't be. Nina is done, the first wave of crisis has passed, so what follows is a development period of several months?

The descriptions of various details and characters are very good. The only thing that makes me feel uncomfortable is that Nina has not been punished yet. This is the case with other countries. The military strength of the two sides is so different that they don't directly destroy their country. Maybe I will write about it later, but I haven't seen it yet.

Why is the score so low? The writing and plot are very well presented, and the details are quite good.

Not bad, not bad, but the king is too weak. Anyone in this magical world can kill him. I feel like he would have died long ago without the halo of the protagonist.

The book is very good. Your book is a good one. If you recommend it more, more people will read it.

It looks good. Although there are some flaws, the overall picture is still very good. I hope the author will not give up.

Novels about national salvation, where productivity comes first, the Bolshevik monarch, and low-level martial arts rule the country in a fantasy world [sneaky laugh]

It's quite interesting, good luck to the author!

This book describes a man who traveled through time and elbowed the entire continent and sat on the throne and said "man, what can you say!". Readers will gradually discover the fact that the author is unfinished during the reading process, which makes people laugh. But the content is still good [face covering]

A pretty good western fantasy novel

It's well written, but a bit idealistic.

Can the author add an honorary noble or ennoble it appropriately? There should be some excess

It's a bit frustrating in some places, but overall it's good.

Not bad, pretty good, give it 5 stars