A Liberal Arts Student Changes Another World

Author, you write well, you write well. The protagonist fits my image very well - kind and wise 👍. Some of the main characters in some books I read before looked like XTL 🤦

At present, the plot, rhythm, and writing are very good, and the supporting characters are relatively full, but I think more words can be used to describe the supporting characters to make these characters more vivid. After all, an excellent historical farming novel should be a people's history. Whether it is aristocrats, farmers, knights, thieves, robbers, cultists, or vagrants, in the turmoil of the country, every decision of the protagonist and every technological advancement will have a profound impact on all strata of the country.

It's a very good book. It's not very perfect in some places and could be improved. Overall, it's still a very good medieval book. If it's more technical, it could develop a little slower. In addition, I would like to mention the previous opinions on the military system. The author can take a look.

Okay, very good. I suggest the author take an hour's rest a day and type at other times.

A rare gem, at least for now. After reading the latest chapter, I feel that what the protagonist lacks most is not the ability to light up the technology tree, but his identity as an ordinary person. First, industry requires long-term accumulation. Even with the blessing of magic, the time it will take to reach the industrial level of World War I is still unknown. During this period, the protagonist's body will inevitably age, so it is necessary to enter the extraordinary. Second, the protagonist has no ability to protect himself. Judging from the current chapters, people of Nina's level can behead the protagonist at will, and there are many masters like the Kiwanis. The protagonist really needs a way to save his life. To be honest, modern technology is very difficult to deal with those extraordinary beings who come and go without a trace, and the protagonist's head cannot be protected from the beginning to the end. Finally, the protagonist's feeling of being powerless in the face of extraordinary beings is really unpleasant. Whether it is Nina or those Kiwanis, they are too arrogant. I look forward to the day when they fall from the altar. The author will update quickly! I want to see rivers of blood!

We already have a system, so it won't be difficult to enter the industrial age. Let's get some German weapon masters to destroy humans, and then slowly destroy other races. I suggest the author take a look at "Alien: A Total War between Technology and Magic"

Not much to say, the quality is above average and worth a look.

The pace is very good, neither fast nor slow, but there are too few and not enough to watch.

Actually quite good

The plot is all about the rise of industrialization in the Middle Ages. There is not much to say. Let me talk about my feelings about the characters in it. Let's talk about the king first. He is indeed a normal ordinary person in the 21st century, with various emotions and rationality. There are indeed many flaws. Even the safety of the king can be assassinated by anyone with a brain. However, there is no such arrangement. Maybe it is to promote the plot, so I won't go into it. I don't care if the female knight rebels or not, but one of her choices indirectly hurt the soldiers who were defending the country. This is very indignant and should be punished. Considering that she had no intention and had difficult reasons to directly eliminate her, I think it is a pity. I really like to see the daily life of the female knight and the king. One is aloof and the other is trustworthy and they love and kill each other. It would be better if the female knight and the king interact more and eliminate the barriers. The plot is also good. If you add the emotional line with the female knight, I might like this story more, so I will give it 4 stars. The one star deducted will be regarded as the regret that your female knight ended! I just put it on the bookshelf. I probably won't come back to read this for a long time. I hope I can see the joint efforts of the female knight and the king next time 🤭 but it's over and it probably won't happen again 🤦