He School ********

This book has many flaws, the pace is fast, and the details are not enough. Fortunately, the author has good control over daily life, and the plot is very comfortable to read. As a debut novel, it is quite good (Brain Loss. Jpg) The author can consider adding some details. For example, the plot of Jin Yu being kidnapped is reasonable if you think about it carefully, but it seems strange at first glance. The problem is that the description is not detailed enough. The psychology at the time, the specific actions of the kidnapping, including the dependence on Xiyao are not clearly described. This kind of highly dependent character is rare. Once written, it will be very attractive and the sense of substitution will be stronger, instead of being a drama after reading.

It is very beautiful, every bit of it is beautiful. From my point of view, it is simply the love letter of my dreams. I never dared to imagine that I could read this kind of book. It is so beautiful that it is even better than the novels I imagined. The novels I imagined are just like this. It refers to the kind of novel that I imagined. It is better than what I imagined. It is the type that I like very much. This five-star review is given. The author is my god. He wrote my favorite type of novel for me. It is better than what I imagined.

This novel is a rare unsystematic novel. The content is relatively relaxing and healing. It is very relaxing to read. It is also comparable to the novel I have read - Daughter's Heart. Personally, I prefer to read articles that are more about daily life. Of course, the slow ones are the best. I can say that this novel is very suitable for me [smile][smile][smile] I think the cover should be changed, it's not attractive enough [Thoughts]

Looks good, give me 100 million points more

Let me make a bean😳 I also want a girlfriend to cuddle up in my arms and call me sister! ! (๑>_<๑)

Among unsystematic transformation novels, I think this one is very good. It's not like some transformation novels where you get married or fall in love after changing for a while, because the protagonist is in college, and a man who has been a man for 18 years and becomes a woman should have a transition period to accept the reality. Also, this book should be written by a female author, right? The strength of a normal 1.5 Meter boy is usually 30 to 50 pounds. He is still relatively weak and has been a male protagonist for more than ten years. He will not have this strength, so I gave it 4 stars, 3 stars for finding a boyfriend, 2 stars for the system, and 1 star for the poison.

Sweet article, there is currently no poisonous point, you can eat it with confidence [eating melon]

Big cheers for the author

Not only is the author's writing beautiful, but he also responds instantly.

Although some places are a bit weird and the writing is average, the plot is really interesting. I hope the author will work hard [love] [love] [love]

The pace is fast, the writing is okay, it's a warm little daily routine, the overall review is great, it's very healing Warm reminder: The sweetness is too high, please prepare insulin [note]

Give a five-star review to support it [like]

Come on, I believe you can do it~

Don't worry, there are no knives, and the author's writing style is very relaxed and sweet [Sending my heart]

Very pretty, I like it

So beautiful, so pampered

I originally wanted to give it three stars, but one was for the author and Ken replied and the other was for why the author didn't change.

It feels like it's a bit flawed, but it's pretty good [Adoration]

It's very interesting. There are not many Lily novels like this. I hope the author can give this novel a happy ending!

It's good to watch. I love watching it. I hope to see what happens after they have children. The author writes so well, the sugar content is beyond the standard, I really love it, it touches my heart [Admiration]

Well, it's very beautiful.

I'm not good at speaking but I like this book very much

Very sweet, very fast, very beautiful Did it take me more than 30 minutes to read from the first chapter to more than 200 chapters? No way

A good book, the plot is straightforward, and the author often interacts with readers

The plot is great and the author responds quickly to comments

It's really sweet and worth reading. Come on, author [like][like]

It's okay, it can hold up and looks good

In a word, the protagonist is Lin Daiyu

I'm gone. I haven't finished watching it yet.

Very beautiful, the author must write well The author must not be banned