Allison's Magical Adventure

In fact, it is very good. As the first step for a newbie, Allison has the shadow of Harry, and Elvira also has the shadow of Hermione. The plot setting is novel, and ordinary readers may not be able to read your mind.

It is really a bit difficult for ordinary readers to understand. The thinking is good and the writing is good, but I feel that there are too many concerns and the writing is a bit anxious. Keep up the good work!

Come on, meow! You can do it!

Come on! I'm optimistic about you Very beautiful