HP: the Dark Wizard from the Past Does Not Want to Save the World

The plot is very well written, and I can see that the author has laid out a few foreshadowings. Moreover, it is rare to see fan fiction written based on the original work. The protagonist also has the feel of a legacy protagonist, and the writing style is also good. In many places, it is different from most fan fiction, which is quite fresh. It's rare to connect the protagonist with Dumbledore. When I played the game, I wanted to see Dumbledore in the first grade when he was in seventh grade, but the game didn't allow it. . The update is just too slow! So deduct one star and update soon!

Great! "It's just black magic, isn't it? Dear XX, I will take care of it all." (Fire tongs Liu Ming

Legacy players are ecstatic, I'm looking forward to the appearance of Chinese cabbage [smile][smile][smile][smile]

I especially like the author's description of the special friendship between the three of them, and the logic of thinking that is slightly different from modern values ​​​​but placed in the context of their time a hundred years ago, is extremely natural, smooth and reasonable. I really like their opinions and judgments about (dark) magic/power, murder (or goblins), life, friendship, and each other. Based on the recognition of differences and similarities between each other, they ultimately chose the kind of protection, closeness, and tolerance that includes selfishness and self-centeredness. The author's writing style is impeccable, the characters are storyboarded smoothly without losing the sense of rhythm, and the scenes are clear and clear, which means that each paragraph has a clear enough sense of picture. To be honest, I personally think that the author should have a relatively clear image in his mind when describing most of the scenes. Otherwise, how could it look so vivid and vivid? It is no exaggeration to say that it is as fascinating as watching a movie with ups and downs of plot, brilliant images and well-organized narrative. I feel that the author has very clear ideas or concepts about the scenes, plots, and characterizations he wants to express. From time to time, there is a special black (?) Humor in it, but it is not over-exaggerated, so that the sense of layering is also blurred out. All I can say is that I am more than impressed. Although the author's cooking is exquisite and the output is sufficient, I feel a little guilty for urging me to update, but I still hope that the more the merrier, be grateful and cherish blessings, and be grateful and cherish blessings. 🙏🙏🙏✨

Oh my god, it's so beautiful. Protagonist, please rise up... Wuwuwu, a person like Angus who is venomous and rational but has a little bit of kindness is suitable for being investigated over and over again until he is speechless... The threesome is excellent, Angus is like the mistress of Ominis and Sebastian. Wuwu🥹🥹🥹, please let me see Eric bite back and be so possessive... (What a new name, it's too hard to remember)

How can such a beautiful book receive less ratings (ฅ>ω<*ฅ) I feel that this book makes daily life humorous and interesting. The protagonist is both good and evil. It borrows the game setting very well.

My favorite book, the author has perfectly controlled the character of each character, and the main characters are complete, and Omi has returned to the light. The shaping of friendship is not deliberate but very perfect. The trio of main and Seo are the best wuwuwu. None of the characters in the original work are OOC. The protagonist is a good-natured but cheerful person who has his own moral standards and bottom line. I prefer logical ones to mindless ones. Many of the protagonist's subsequent actions followed legitimate routes and legal channels, which was very comfortable. Although he is an aborigine, he has saved many people who were lost in the original work without knowing the plot, and even saved the Longbottoms. The author's brain is also very good, and the subsequent plot development is crazy. The subsequent plan is really meticulous and the disguise is so good. Currently, the Ministry of Magic has been renovated and Voldemort is plotted. He is the initiator of all chaos, but he completely packages himself as a "savior". Besides Sebaomi, who else can recognize his true face under his gentle appearance?

The previous plot almost put me off, and many things were not explained clearly, but after finishing the first part, it suddenly became very interesting. It's strange and I don't know why there is such a big difference between the before and after. It's too late and I can't see the update. I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body. It's been particularly interesting since Ominis and Sebastian appeared. If you don't like the previous ones, you can jump here and start watching. Although the protagonist is the heir to ancient magic and is very powerful, the plot will not be boring because it is too powerful. Issues such as time travel and changed plots are waiting to be explored, and the main plot and daily life are well balanced.

The protagonist is really a very charming person. It is difficult to distinguish between good and evil, and he can penetrate people's hearts. Without God's perspective, who can guarantee that he can see him clearly? The protagonists, Ominis, and Sebastian are so interesting to get along with. Sebastian is also very naughty and managed to get beaten by two people. Albus's younger brother is adorable, but Ariana is still a pity. Also, Mortlake is really impressive, cough cough doge, the episode where the main character is the most aggressive.

It was well written and successfully sparked my interest in Hogwarts Legacy. I need to keep writing more, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that I really love them, the characters are not too biased either, it's really rare to see them

A very delicious article - I secretly tasted it for a long time and finally couldn't help but comment. There is no OOC in the character plot whether it is from the original work or from Huo Yi. It is rare that it does not follow the adventures of Harry in the original work, but has a completely independent plot - so delicious 🥰 I really like watching the interaction between the protagonist and Sabaomi. The snake and snake trio live a good life like this. It makes my regret of Huo Yi finish the game woo woo. Please keep writing, I will always support you.

Very beautiful! The protagonist is Slytherin's Huo Yi, who is really cool! The plot is a bit slow and the author has a lot of foreshadowing, but it will be taken back in time. The key is that the author can also draw! It's really rare to have such a versatile author! ୧⍢⃝୨Don't let this author get away with it!

Very cute writing! The rating was so low that I almost missed it. . The interaction between the protagonist, Omi, Sebas and other characters is very interesting. The main plot is clear and does not completely rely on the plot of the original sub-generation. Please update it vigorously [crying]

I'm not happy when someone is alive. Voldemort was afraid when he heard my name.

Very well written, teacher! I saw a recommendation on lof before and read it. It's really awesome. It's one of the best long-form articles among all the HP articles I've read. 😭 And it's the Huo Yi theme that I like... (Because Ben people like long novels very much, so the teacher has a lot of words...) I've read Chapter 60 or 70, and I'm really curious about Eric's feelings for the protagonist! Watching his conversation with Albus, I always felt that he was a little liar. I really hope that he really made a big fat arrow to the protagonist and was discovered. Hahaha, the heartthrob protagonist, you rise! In addition, the emotions of the Big Triangle in the Snake Yard are really well written! Like! Come on, teacher! !

It is a particularly beautiful book. The characters are very detailed and comprehensive. For example, the protagonist. Sometimes you think that he will be at least a little better, but he will still be the same as before... But after thinking about it, you find that it makes sense. Moreover, the creation of non-protagonists is also very three-dimensional. They are not characters composed of labels, but the same, complete people. They also have their own stories, their own beliefs, their own ideals and pursuits, but they are not the protagonists. There are also many extras inserted into the main text, which is really worth the money. The interaction between Angus, Sebastian and Omi in the front is really cute, with a relaxed, daily atmosphere. The days of going to Hogwarts are like being on vacation... Whether you are a student or a professor, I like it so much. Maybe you can watch it as a daily routine? The subsequent exchanges and heart-to-heart conversations with Dill are also very... Interesting. The third volume adds some other very novel world settings, and it does not just propose that the settings are not rounded out, which is very logical. The narrative is also perfect, but maybe there are a little too many knives? Those who can't eat with knives should think more about it. And the number of words in this book is really high! There are so many! One chapter is 7,000 words upwards! Eat a lot and be full! ! Quality is also online! Nothing to say! (It's best not to read too fast... It's easy to get dizzy and have a headache...) It seems to be almost finished now, and the number of words is really large... It will take at least a week to read. All in all, this book is very good, the author is also very nice, and the book club atmosphere is also very good. Everyone is welcome to read it! Highly recommended!

This book must be given a five-star thumbs up! Because I read this book on another account, the reading time does not exceed thirty minutes, but please don't worry! I have read most of the book seriously! I have to say that this book is very beautiful and cute. . . First of all, I enjoyed watching this plot. I finally saw that the main character of HPL was not as busy as the Gryffindor Triangle plot. I have always found the plot of the protagonist who has ancient magic or Slytherin constantly participating in various activities of the trio after traveling through the generations to be very strange. I support the protagonist (or the protagonist and Omi Sebao) to have independent plots and live a life that belongs to us old men and old ladies! (?)😌😌😌 Then when I was reading the book, I had a really rich mental journey. One moment, I felt that Angus, an evil and venomous brat (not), was very nice and delicious😋😋😋. The next moment, I was attracted by various foreshadowings and plots related to Angus's life experience. I couldn't understand it, so I read on without any hesitation. 😂 It must have been during the winter vacation this year that I just started watching it. I watched it intermittently on my mobile phone, but it didn't connect the plot very well. I just thought, "Why am I writing so well? I can still watch it for another hundred years!" Now I just happened to re-read the previous plot, which can be regarded as a regular watch (?) All in all highly recommended! Come and see them all!

It's so cool, the character of the protagonist is completely the character of my protagonist Huo Yi. I like that Angus has his own principles and persistence, and he has a detached attitude while valuing friendship. By the way, the melon content is also very moderate, which makes it refreshing. It's over. The more I watch it, the more I feel depressed.

It looks good, I like it, the author, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

The writing is quite good, a rare combination of the Huo Yi indigenous people and the original world. It just updates too slowly! I remember that this book has been on my bookshelf for a while. I wanted to keep it for a while and fatten it up before slaughtering it, but it turned out that it wasn't finished yet [face covering] The characters are not too OOC, the plot logic is reasonable, and they will not take away the highlights of other characters, or blackmail a certain college. I really like the interaction with the cat and snake!

I haven't read much, although it's less, but his chapters range from 10,000 to 5,000 words, while others have more than 2,000 words each. And I really love this author to death. Although he has few words, he has many words. My God, I wish other authors could be like this. Wow! It's so good! [Like][Love]

It's super pretty. Hehehe, can I give you a CP? ♡ The author is so awesome! (Send flowers) (Send flowers) (Send flowers) [Send hearts] [Send hearts] [Send hearts]

The author is so honest, each chapter has an average of five to six thousand words, and the writing is also very good. I hope I can keep it till the end [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's obviously very good-looking, but I don't know why the score is so low. Maybe I was a little impatient at first? I really like this book. I rarely see books written about Huo Yi. This book is very good-looking. You must be patient and read to the end! ! !

The descriptions of the Snake Yard trio are all very good, but the hidden character looks very uncomfortable, and I don't know when it will end [crazy] Can the author tell me in which chapter you will reveal his identity? I just want to see their daily life.

Saw the first episode. I'm so nervous. Is the little ball of light the villain? Will he be tortured later (I don't dare to watch it at all). Can you tell me in advance what will happen after the Angus trio!

Author, I love you so much and must continue writing! Of all the Hogwarts Legacy fanfics, this is my favorite. I think the friendship between the protagonists is very well done, as well as the rhythm of the plot and so on. Except for a novel called Youqi Invasion that I read in another circle, this is the only serialized novel that I follow. It has a super high gold content! I always have a kind of hope when I follow the serialization. It feels like the book is never finished. The author once again confesses, I love you! Let's add another follow-up comment, hahaha. It's been a while since I checked for updates, so I thought I'd save some. But it's really great. Hahaha. Qing Mimi looks forward to seeing the guy with socket holes in his nipples when he watches it later. He was beaten many times.

I was shocked by how good it was. I have been looking for Hogwarts Legacy fan fiction. To be honest, I was skeptical at first when I saw the low score of this book and the author's explanation in the introduction. But you only have to read a few chapters to understand the weight of this book.

You, the author, are like an angel descending to earth. You are able to achieve high quality even with so many words in each chapter. Author, you must not abuse me. The Slytherin trio must be fine. Finally, I need to confess that I should have opened this masterpiece earlier instead of hesitating several times. Fortunately, I was extremely lucky and did not miss it. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food]

Looks good, gosh, author, come on💥💥 This should be the longest HP article I have seen so far. Although there are not many chapters, each chapter has a lot of words. By comparison, if the author writes 2,000 words per chapter, this book should have more than 900 chapters (praise the author) Looking at the writing now, it's still acceptable. The plot is also very interesting, I recommend watching it