The History of Honkai, in the Name of Honkai, the Course Is Modified.

The overall progress and plot are good, but I personally think that there should not be too many dramatic sentences, because it will weaken the sense of immersion. Just like the previous few pictures, there are too many dramatic sentences (of course this is just my personal opinion)

There are not many knives, and the characterization is also good. Let's predict that both the big Aga and the little Aga will die to save Alicia, and the group leader also said that he will accompany Alicia in the form of a soul body, so we can assume that Alicia cannot see the big Aga and falls into Collapse, and then use power to resurrect the Great Aga, but to borrow the words of Bishop Otto, "The world allows consciousness to match the container, but does not allow the container to collect the dissipated consciousness." The protagonist, as the Honkai God, must have a system that can accommodate the law of the end if he wants to come back to the world. If the power of cocoon is not enough to create such a body, will Alicia think that Da Ajia is completely dead and choose to commit suicide? At this time, Da Ajia, as a soul body, does not have the power to change reality and can only watch love. Lithia committed suicide and was unable to change anything. She went completely black and slaughtered all the people in the world. Just like Kiana in the retrospect of the second episode of the Collapse, she inserted herself into the ground and spent the endless years alone until she had a mental breakdown and her consciousness completely disappeared from this world. (The group leader asked me to write a book review. Is it appropriate for me to write this way?) Let me correct that as a soul body, the Great Aga cannot affect the real world, so it should be that the Honkai God Great Aga blackened, which affected Cocoon's will and invalidated Alicia's previous wishes. The Herrscher of the current civilization is still a machine for killing humans, and then the civilization perished and became a member of countless world bubbles. The Little Aga replaced the Great Aga and became the new Honkai God, continuing to execute judgments in other worlds.

Not enough to watch Do it quickly. .

[Salvation] is also lonely, [the true self] lights up the fire [Commandments] are imprisoned in fate, and [Gold] leaves behind fragments. [Spiral] divides oneself, and [annihilation] returns to silence. [Tianhui] fell into the sea of ​​trees, [In an instant] her youth was sealed. [Xu Guang] dims and dies, [Infinite] pursues the truth. [Stars] Looking at the sea of ​​stars in the distance, [Floating Life] is a dream that lasts a thousand years. [Empty Dream] The mortal world dissipates... Well, that's all (the damn Aga asked me to write a book review again) Ahem, I was just caught by erosion and now I am the real me. So Raven, island, why can it fly? When the power of the Herrscher of the Sky descends on modern civilization, only the island of freedom can escape from the destined destruction. That's right, in order to prevent the Herrscher of the Sky's attack from falling, the island flew into the sky. The island will be destroyed and fall to the sea. If you want to withstand it, you, you, must build a bigger island. This is the logic that after blasting the small island, it belongs to the big island. (Hey, as expected of me, I lost so many words easily😆😆)

There are no requirements, the writing is very good, don't be a eunuch, I hope it will have a good ending, right?

After searching for two months, I finally found a good Honkai Impact fanfic [shy]

Not bad, quite to your liking

It's very interesting, but I feel like the author will write a lot of knives There is another question. Will Alicia die?

The book is very good, I don't have any objections, I just hope the author can keep updating it.

I come to praise, I come to redeem, I come to protect I promise everything to the shooting star God follows man's wish No regrets despite all the hardships All for—Alicia!

Very good, little author [laughing evilly]

Use elbow strike on the author, the effect is outstanding

Personally, it is very well written.

No one has good works, no one has good works! ! ! (Sad and sad It's really beautiful, but there's no one around (beating chest)

Looking forward to them being together (looking forward to (๑˙ー˙๑))

Author, I hope you will fulfill your promise and not be too harsh. Also, when will Ellie and Aga get together [laughing]

Come on, author, please don't finish the work ahhhhhh [I understand]

Save Liu: This is a long review, I like reading it, the writing style is getting mature. Do you know what HE is? I've seen so many hellish endings! Author, you changed the message temporarily, I want to die now, thank you [smile]

I beg you, Agares, please come back and update. I have been waiting for you for six months😭

In a simple sentence, just look at it

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Come on, great author

It is very important when the relationship can be confirmed

Has Azhe sent this book? There's no way I'm the one who fostered you [eating melon]

Well, apart from being short, I haven't found any major faults for the time being. There are some minor faults, but they don't affect the viewing experience, so when will the author start to update [smirk]

I think this book is very interesting. Good luck to the author!

I think Be is better. Agares wants only love, while Alicia wants love equally for all living beings.

It looks good, but it's a bit short.

Good luck to the author!