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At present, the senses are good. Although Ji Anyao is very arrogant, she can't say that she hurt the male protagonist, nor is she involved with other men. If she recognizes her feelings, she can still restore her relationship with the male protagonist. Fairy Luo is also very good, cute and cute.

The title of the book is deceiving. I thought it was just another show of pretentiousness that slaps the female protagonist in the face, but it turned out to be just a tsundere heroine. It's really interesting without the bloody plot. Come on, don't gain any physical improvement from the system. It's best to slow down and get good reviews so far.

The author of this book is really good. It seems to be the first time I have seen a novel with this theme. The writing style is also quite good. There is no language barrier. The update is just a bit too slow. I don't ask for more, but at least one update every day. I hope readers will work harder.

It looks really good so far, but there are big problems with updating. If this book can be updated stably, it has the potential to become a big hit. After all, judging from the title and subject matter, this book is destined to be long. If this book had been steadily updated and followed the regret flow after it was published, it would have become popular by now. Unfortunately, the regret flow has passed now. The writing is online and the story is okay, but the opening chapter is actually not very attractive. For Tomato, this kind of book can only be written long, and it should be able to be stably updated to 300,000 words. If the book test is completed, it will probably have a blowout. The opening chapter has both advantages and disadvantages. The writing is not very impactful and cannot arouse emotions. However, the author has finally found a writing style that suits him.

How should I put it, I felt pretty good after reading it, but I felt a little uncomfortable in my heart. Suddenly I thought of my ex-girlfriend. It's a pity, but it's just a pity. In the end, a sentence of "not worthy" is better than a thousand love and joy. She is indeed excellent, but this does not mean that your excellence can be arbitrarily belittled to me. I am afraid that my low self-esteem started from you. After thinking about it so much, I found that I still like you, but you think it is inappropriate. It doesn't matter. Here's a toast. ——In May, drunken remarks after watching

I really like every female design that appears, so I'll buy them all!

The writing is very delicate, and the heroine didn't do anything wrong, but hey, I hope there will be a happy ending.

The writing is very delicate, which is really rare among so many romances about cultivating immortals. The characterizations are also quite distinct, Ji is the pre-death tsundere Bai Yueguang, Luo is the secret admirer, and Jiang is the redeemed one. However, Luo's character design feels not very complete yet. Where did he meet the male protagonist and where did he develop a crush on him? I hope the follow-up plot can be developed.

The artistic conception of looming and leaving is very good, but it seems to be a bit overdone. It is not suitable for a fantasy web novel, not to mention that most people who read here like a fast pace. But if you don't care about the number of people watching, it's not a bad idea to write slowly.

The more I use TikTok, the more I look at Ji Anyao, the more she looks like Liu Ruyan [face covering] Although she is just a tsundere, it turns out that tsundere has been delisted, and Liu Ruyan is the real one [laughs evilly]

This book is quite freshly written. When I read the latest chapter, I found that there is no bloody plot and the characters are very three-dimensional and full. In the end, Luo is the final destination! ! !

It's well written. Come on, the author. The Sword Sect Saintess recommends that you accept it.

It looks okay now. Let's give it a good review first. Speed ​​up the progress and let the chief sword sect chase the husband fiercely.

The writing style is delicate, which is considered high-end for this kind of writing. If it can maintain its current standard, it may be able to become a god.

How did this book get into the dark room?

Let's leave it like this for the time being, the sword girl tsundere likes the male protagonist, but the hero has no feelings for the sword girl, and he has said so. For now, it seems that the sword girl will have a mediocre ending. She won't enter the harem or become a black man. Everyone will be fine.

The male protagonist belongs to the male version of Lin Daiyu, and the female protagonists attack hard, so this mouth will feel comfortable.

The emotional line is written more delicately, and the process revolves around the protagonist with mainly positive descriptions and side descriptions. The psychological shadow of the protagonist's mentality at the beginning is too big, and the emotions feel too bland and a bit sad.

5 Years Will it win? You're guaranteed to win. Such a favorable wind is a life-saving grace. You can win even with your feet. 5 Years later ? The trend of attack and defense is reverse.

I read a little before the author's last book, but I stopped reading it after it stopped (sigh). I hope the author sticks to this book. The writing is very good, and it's good to read! ! ! ! ! ↖(^ω^)↗

Strongly support it, strongly support it, it's really beautiful. Some unreasonable things will not be mentioned later. If you read it patiently, you will find that this is a very good book. (Some unreasonable parts will be made up after more than 20 chapters. If you still don't like it after more than 20 chapters, it is recommended to withdraw it directly.)

Very literary and beautiful

Author, will you accept it later? After watching more than a dozen of them, I was a little bit emotionally involved. I was a little afraid to watch them. Then I would feel uncomfortable doing emo [crying]

Very delicate, but still the same old routine

So far, it looks good. I hope the author will portray the emotional changes more carefully when accepting the heroines later, because it would be very abrupt if they were accepted suddenly.

I love watching this kind of thing. It has routines but also has a comfortable writing style. It's not as boring as traditional routines.

This writing style is a bit familiar, it feels like the domestic light novel style in a certain app, and it has a strong sense of déjà vu.

To be honest, it's not that cool, but it's weird and feels comfortable to watch.

From the original one that was blocked before

The writing is okay, but I don't know why the popularity is so low. It's no problem at 9 points on Tomato.