Master, Don't Come over Here

Very good, the plot must have a plot, very exciting, but don't abuse it, but in the latest chapter, why are the female protagonists and male protagonists unequal in appearance? The male protagonist can be the center of attention, but the female protagonist must be responsible for her appearance, but it doesn't matter, just focus on the female protagonist. The female protagonist is the center of gravity, and come on, I believe in you, of course don't touch the female protagonist like a bad cucumber, I love you.

Five stars. This book is really well written, although some of the small worlds are a bit messy, especially the world where the heroine was kidnapped. The writing is really depressing, but I think this is actually a kind of talent, because it means that the author can grasp the details of the description very well and make people empathize with it. My personal suggestions are: 1. A book has a clear theme. For example, if you want to write about robbery by force, then write the whole book in this genre and try not to change the style. 2. It is best to write a main outline and then write around it. Of course, I know this is difficult. After all, when I am doing homework or something, I often miss the topic as I write. This requires more practice. Authors don't need to be too anxious. Keep writing at your own pace, and you will definitely become popular. I'm optimistic about you, so keep going! ! ! [Love][Love] (ps: The first long comment in life is for you)

The writing is a bit messy, but fortunately it is in the world of short stories. In most worlds, it seems that the female protagonist does not voluntarily stay with the male protagonist, especially in the world with children. It is actually a bit depressing to accept the male protagonist because of the child. There is a shortage of books to read.

It's beautiful and superb. I like it very much. When I saw this book before, I thought it was an ancient world. I didn't expect it to be about time travel. I dismissed it at the time. Now that I have read it, I realize how good I was at that time. Such a beautiful book, I just saw it now, it's amazing! ! ! Big thumbs up for the author! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I accidentally opened it and I was completely amazed. Cheers [laughs][laughs]

Give life a little sweetness.

The short story is really good, and the heartthrob takes advantage of the situation. Similarly, Jing Ruan's quick travel story is also a short story. I've found another meal replacement.

I like it, there are so many stories, you can choose on your own [Qing Mimi, I would like to ask if the author can write more about Chasing Wife Crematorium [Shy]]

I've read several chapters, it's great

It looks good. I give it five stars. [Sending my heart] Do you have any similar recommendations? [Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's super beautiful (｡ò ∀ó｡) and very innovative. Kudos to the author.

Zuokan Dada has perfectly controlled my xp, and the plot is also super interesting.

Good-looking, novel subject matter, short story and fast pace

It's so beautiful. It's very in line with my taste. I just like this kind of slightly forced love. Thank you for the author (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's really beautiful. Come on, author, come on [love] [love] [love]

It's really good-looking and has a lot of meat. I like the short length and it's not sloppy. I don't know why the rating is so low.

I like this kind of text that tortures people when they should be tortured and sweet when they should be sweet [love] [love] [love]

Well... What can I say, the pace is fast, the content... It depends on the individual, I quite like it anyway

It's pretty good, nice [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [love] [love] [love]

It looks great, good luck to the author! ! ! ❤️❤️❤️

Very good, I like short stories

Super pretty! ! ! The short story is not too long and doesn't seem to drag on. It's a pity that it's coming to an end. I hope the author will have another one.

It's nice to watch, each world is self-contained, and all short. Big cheers for the author! [Adoration][Adoration][Love][Love]

Very nice! There are many books that I abandon after reading them. The shortcoming of this book is that it is too short! Big cheers for the author! This is a good-looking article about a super-face-controlling heroine🌹🌹🌹

I like the proud mysophobic lady x the male protagonist who doesn't love himself. In this world, it would be nice to have more of this type [laughing][laughing]

Good-looking, short and concise

Like like like

It's too short, but it's okay [face covering]

Take a good look at it

This article is good to read, not bad, not bad