Mysterious creatures, strange methods, how can an ordinary person survive in a mysterious world? Criminals, thugs, thugs, and small policemen taste the joy and joy of daily duty! There are also murders happening rampantly. Friends, the weather is dry and things are dry, so go home early!
Reader comments
The novel was really well written. It stopped abruptly at the climax. I hope I can continue after I have sorted out my mood. It was really good! ! ! If someone finds out that this novel is really popular, cheer up.
I think one of the problems with bad data may be that the introduction is too general and does not attract readers to read the content. The introduction has been changed to be more concise and clear, with a few popular hot spots. Let's continue to update. Big, the content is really good. I have read a lot of novels. It is really just a newcomer who is not popular and the name and introduction are not attractive enough. Persistence is victory, big.
It is recommended to read the last chapter before deciding whether to read the whole book. I felt the author's frustration in the last chapter.
The plot design of the whole book is actually quite interesting. I feel like it could be written in more depth in many places. I thought the main line would be longer and interspersed with several cases. I really like this kind of case interspersed with daily stories. I didn't expect it to be finished in a hurry. It's a pity. I hope the author will not give up writing.
The part I wanted to skip in the whole book was the emotional line. It was very strange and a bit difficult to read from the beginning when the male protagonist was inexplicably jealous. It was not as natural as the relationship between colleagues in the early stage. The male protagonist had a paragraph to analyze the reasons why he fell in love with the female protagonist. The description was too easy to associate with the third man. Personally, I think a male paper person should be as far away from a real human being as possible.
I think your writing is very good. The narrative logic and filling in the pits are quite good. Don't give up just because the reading volume is low. The characters of the male and female protagonists are well developed. Unfortunately, the male protagonist's life experience and Lin Anbing's story can actually be extended to a long length. I hope to see a sequel! ! ! Think carefully, I believe you! ! !
It's really a "book delayed by its name". I haven't seen such a beautiful article on Tomato for a long, long time. The writing is excellent, the plot logic is smooth and not perfunctory, the foreshadowing comes and goes, and the characters are all distinct. Both the male and female protagonists have endured hardships and pursued their respective goals with perseverance. . .
The only, only flaw is the rushed ending.
But even so, the author also gave a relatively reasonable ending, and even sublimated it a bit
555 I really want to see more. . Cried
After reading the ending, I felt like I woke up from a dream, a little regretful and disappointed. The writing, plot, and characterization are all very good. If you stick to it, I feel it will be as good as some of the blockbuster works. I really like the characters of the male and female protagonists. I was originally looking forward to their fantasy adventure journey after they went to Xiangxi, but the story ended abruptly. Moti has not yet been promoted to a full-time assistant, and Lian Qing has not yet learned the whereabouts of his parents. It makes people a little caught off guard and unwilling to accept it. I hope that the author will occasionally think of this work, like picking up a long-lost treasure, and continue writing.
A very, very excellent book! ! ! This is the second book I've read on Rotten Tomatoes! I hope the author doesn't give up! Keep writing! Lian Qing is not completely defeated in reality. She has so many people who love her and need her. She is their hero! I hope she will wake up from her rest soon and embark on a new journey [Like][Like][Like]
The book is quite nice, the story content and background are very attractive, and the character descriptions are also very good, but it is really a pity that the ending is rushed. The previous writing is very exciting, it is really a pity, oh oh oh [crying] [crying] [crying]
It looks great, I hope you can encourage me. The various events are very logical, the content is compact, the progress is relaxed and relaxed, the character creation of Moti is also very distinctive, and the plot twist of the parents also makes people cry.
This book is well written, and the poor data is definitely not the fault of the author, but definitely a problem with Tomato.
Such a male and female protagonist is really eye-catching. Finally, he is not the kind of male protagonist who is the boss/is at his peak when he appears or has a ceiling of combat power. This combination is quite tense.
At the end, Warehouse felt like I suddenly won the lottery and was not ready to write anymore, but the content of the story from the beginning was really interesting, haha, but I still haven't finished reading it.
Up to the last few hundred words, the book is very good. I will definitely support it if I write it normally. I should encourage it no matter what, but the last part really brought me more trauma than the dream ending. At least I will never forget this book...
The novel is very interesting, but the ending is very regrettable. I look forward to the author writing a new article [Love]
It's nice to read, the author's writing is good, and the story is very attractive.
The beginning is really well written, and I got into it right away. However, the background setting is a bit vague, so that it is a little unreasonable for a female to transform into a male. If it is a fox demon, it will be smoother whether it is a boy or a girl. The writing is really good, and the setting of the heroine is also good. She is strong, brave, and hardworking. Although life is not satisfactory in various ways, and everyone she meets is bad, the heroine is kind, not a Madonna-type kindness, and female-friendly. Come on, author, she has great potential.
The early stage is very interesting, the heroine is tough and vital, and the story is very imaginative. Seeing them going to the mall to buy things and various sects, it felt like a big world and a long story. In the middle period, it suddenly started to speed up 800 times. In the end, although it was unfinished, it still gave an ending and could continue to be written. I hope the author will write another one in the future.
I don't like the male protagonist very much, maybe because the author pulled the strings quickly in order to complete the relationship.
Anyway, I still think the idea is good. I would like to encourage the author with five stars, hehe.
Didn't it look good, and it ended like this? When will the follow-up come out?
It's very beautiful, well written, and perfect in terms of characterization, logic, and narrative plot. But for some reason, the author just started the story line and ended it forcefully, leaving many things unexplained. There is a kind of appetizer that is so exciting that when you are happily waiting for the main meal, it suddenly tells you that the meal is over, but it is barely enough to savor.
It's pretty, but a bit short.
It would be nice if it wasn't forced to end.
The writing style is quite good, and I can see that I am trying my best not to be too far-fetched and not to be a bad ending. I wish you all good luck in the future.
It's very interesting, but it's a pity that I haven't finished it yet.
So interesting, right? Hahahahaha
The world of metaphysics is so interesting
It's good to read, but it's a pity that I didn't continue writing. I want to see if the author has any other articles. The writing style and ideas are really flawless and I like it very much.
Nice! The characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are very good! The writing is very good and the plot is exciting! It's really good to read, and I look forward to more works from the author!
This book is very good, and it gradually makes people unable to resist reading.
The plot advances reasonably and the language is simple and not procrastinating. Very nice
Crying to death, is it finished? My happiness today... Is gone, it ended suddenly. The writing is very good, the characters are well drawn, and the plot is well laid out. The author is taking good care of himself and looking forward to the new work.
It looks good. It's the most worth-watching water I've seen in Tomato recently. I highly recommend it. The heroine is very good and the author's writing is also good.
Why didn't you write about the author? It's such a pity to end it so hastily. You really did a great job!
The plot is smooth and the heroine's IQ is online. It just ended so suddenly, I don't know if the story can continue.
So pretty! The emotional lines are also very good! I read reviews of other books and they were so good that I didn't even finish reading a few chapters, but this one felt really good! If you can read it, you will definitely not be short of books!
The novel was really well written. It stopped abruptly at the climax. I hope I can continue after I have sorted out my mood. It was really good! ! ! If someone finds out that this novel is really popular, cheer up. I think one of the problems with bad data may be that the introduction is too general and does not attract readers to read the content. The introduction has been changed to be more concise and clear, with a few popular hot spots. Let's continue to update. Big, the content is really good. I have read a lot of novels. It is really just a newcomer who is not popular and the name and introduction are not attractive enough. Persistence is victory, big.
It is recommended to read the last chapter before deciding whether to read the whole book. I felt the author's frustration in the last chapter. The plot design of the whole book is actually quite interesting. I feel like it could be written in more depth in many places. I thought the main line would be longer and interspersed with several cases. I really like this kind of case interspersed with daily stories. I didn't expect it to be finished in a hurry. It's a pity. I hope the author will not give up writing. The part I wanted to skip in the whole book was the emotional line. It was very strange and a bit difficult to read from the beginning when the male protagonist was inexplicably jealous. It was not as natural as the relationship between colleagues in the early stage. The male protagonist had a paragraph to analyze the reasons why he fell in love with the female protagonist. The description was too easy to associate with the third man. Personally, I think a male paper person should be as far away from a real human being as possible.
I think your writing is very good. The narrative logic and filling in the pits are quite good. Don't give up just because the reading volume is low. The characters of the male and female protagonists are well developed. Unfortunately, the male protagonist's life experience and Lin Anbing's story can actually be extended to a long length. I hope to see a sequel! ! ! Think carefully, I believe you! ! !
It's really a "book delayed by its name". I haven't seen such a beautiful article on Tomato for a long, long time. The writing is excellent, the plot logic is smooth and not perfunctory, the foreshadowing comes and goes, and the characters are all distinct. Both the male and female protagonists have endured hardships and pursued their respective goals with perseverance. . . The only, only flaw is the rushed ending. But even so, the author also gave a relatively reasonable ending, and even sublimated it a bit 555 I really want to see more. . Cried
After reading the ending, I felt like I woke up from a dream, a little regretful and disappointed. The writing, plot, and characterization are all very good. If you stick to it, I feel it will be as good as some of the blockbuster works. I really like the characters of the male and female protagonists. I was originally looking forward to their fantasy adventure journey after they went to Xiangxi, but the story ended abruptly. Moti has not yet been promoted to a full-time assistant, and Lian Qing has not yet learned the whereabouts of his parents. It makes people a little caught off guard and unwilling to accept it. I hope that the author will occasionally think of this work, like picking up a long-lost treasure, and continue writing.
A very, very excellent book! ! ! This is the second book I've read on Rotten Tomatoes! I hope the author doesn't give up! Keep writing! Lian Qing is not completely defeated in reality. She has so many people who love her and need her. She is their hero! I hope she will wake up from her rest soon and embark on a new journey [Like][Like][Like]
The book is quite nice, the story content and background are very attractive, and the character descriptions are also very good, but it is really a pity that the ending is rushed. The previous writing is very exciting, it is really a pity, oh oh oh [crying] [crying] [crying]
It looks great, I hope you can encourage me. The various events are very logical, the content is compact, the progress is relaxed and relaxed, the character creation of Moti is also very distinctive, and the plot twist of the parents also makes people cry.
This book is well written, and the poor data is definitely not the fault of the author, but definitely a problem with Tomato. Such a male and female protagonist is really eye-catching. Finally, he is not the kind of male protagonist who is the boss/is at his peak when he appears or has a ceiling of combat power. This combination is quite tense.
At the end, Warehouse felt like I suddenly won the lottery and was not ready to write anymore, but the content of the story from the beginning was really interesting, haha, but I still haven't finished reading it.
Up to the last few hundred words, the book is very good. I will definitely support it if I write it normally. I should encourage it no matter what, but the last part really brought me more trauma than the dream ending. At least I will never forget this book...
The novel is very interesting, but the ending is very regrettable. I look forward to the author writing a new article [Love]
It's nice to read, the author's writing is good, and the story is very attractive.
The beginning is really well written, and I got into it right away. However, the background setting is a bit vague, so that it is a little unreasonable for a female to transform into a male. If it is a fox demon, it will be smoother whether it is a boy or a girl. The writing is really good, and the setting of the heroine is also good. She is strong, brave, and hardworking. Although life is not satisfactory in various ways, and everyone she meets is bad, the heroine is kind, not a Madonna-type kindness, and female-friendly. Come on, author, she has great potential.
The early stage is very interesting, the heroine is tough and vital, and the story is very imaginative. Seeing them going to the mall to buy things and various sects, it felt like a big world and a long story. In the middle period, it suddenly started to speed up 800 times. In the end, although it was unfinished, it still gave an ending and could continue to be written. I hope the author will write another one in the future. I don't like the male protagonist very much, maybe because the author pulled the strings quickly in order to complete the relationship. Anyway, I still think the idea is good. I would like to encourage the author with five stars, hehe.
Didn't it look good, and it ended like this? When will the follow-up come out?
It's very beautiful, well written, and perfect in terms of characterization, logic, and narrative plot. But for some reason, the author just started the story line and ended it forcefully, leaving many things unexplained. There is a kind of appetizer that is so exciting that when you are happily waiting for the main meal, it suddenly tells you that the meal is over, but it is barely enough to savor.
It's pretty, but a bit short.
It would be nice if it wasn't forced to end.
The writing style is quite good, and I can see that I am trying my best not to be too far-fetched and not to be a bad ending. I wish you all good luck in the future.
It's very interesting, but it's a pity that I haven't finished it yet.
So interesting, right? Hahahahaha The world of metaphysics is so interesting
It's good to read, but it's a pity that I didn't continue writing. I want to see if the author has any other articles. The writing style and ideas are really flawless and I like it very much.
Nice! The characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are very good! The writing is very good and the plot is exciting! It's really good to read, and I look forward to more works from the author!
This book is very good, and it gradually makes people unable to resist reading.
The plot advances reasonably and the language is simple and not procrastinating. Very nice
Crying to death, is it finished? My happiness today... Is gone, it ended suddenly. The writing is very good, the characters are well drawn, and the plot is well laid out. The author is taking good care of himself and looking forward to the new work.
It looks good. It's the most worth-watching water I've seen in Tomato recently. I highly recommend it. The heroine is very good and the author's writing is also good. Why didn't you write about the author? It's such a pity to end it so hastily. You really did a great job!
The plot is smooth and the heroine's IQ is online. It just ended so suddenly, I don't know if the story can continue.
So pretty! The emotional lines are also very good! I read reviews of other books and they were so good that I didn't even finish reading a few chapters, but this one felt really good! If you can read it, you will definitely not be short of books!