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I found another treasured book on cultivating immortals [like] [like], it's good, I love reading it! ! . This book is one of the most recommended among the novels about immortality that I have read. There is no rebirth, no time travel, no golden finger, this book is simply a breath of fresh air. The male protagonist (Shen Chuan) in the book is not ridiculously strong right from the start. He is a mortal cultivating immortality, and he is a veritable mortal cultivating immortality. It's just a normal step-by-step way to defeat monsters and upgrade, but the story is also very exciting and makes people watch it. [Love][love] The author's writing is coherent and logical. [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Top Post][Top Post] When I read the back part, it didn't break down. It was obvious that the author really wrote with great care. [Love] Strongly recommend[like][like][like][like][like][like]

This is the first time I read this kind of immortality novel. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs, especially the beginning that directly addresses the topic. For mortals, the road to immortality is bumpy and bumpy, and they have to sail against the current. If they don't advance, they will retreat. On the ever-changing road of immortality, there are countless conspiracies and deceits, and there are countless mechanisms that can't be completed. There are many foreshadowings in the article, so I look forward to the subsequent development.

The author will update soon! Shen Chuan's stories are not enough! ! ! ! The wall is cracked, please update 10,000 chapters a day! This book is definitely worth investing in! No loss in investing! The male protagonist, Shen Chuan! Although he was born into a poor family, it is precisely because of this experience that he has more perseverance and patience than others who entered the path of immortality together! He is also extremely cautious and serious when dealing with things. His perseverance and cautious character also help him never forget to be on guard when he encounters an opportunity! There will be no pie falling from the sky! This perspective is really different from other authors! Opportunities are not easy to come by! Sometimes there's a price to pay! ! ! The writing is particularly delicate, and the plot design is smooth and reasonable! ! ! !

This book is really good, I can't help but comment on it, hahaha [love] [love] [love] [love]. The author's writing style is very good, he has laid out a lot of foreshadowings and all of them are rounded off, and he does a good job of echoing the previous and later chapters. This is very good [like][like] The image of the protagonist is also fully portrayed. In terms of content, it is a story about mortals cultivating immortals. The male protagonist Shen Chuan is an ordinary person. The ordinary people's journey of defeating monsters and upgrading is progressing step by step, step by step. The story is plain but exciting. The male protagonist Shen Chuan is not born as a proud man, but relies on his own efforts to grow up step by step and move forward bravely. [Like][Like] This is one of the best books on immortality that I have ever read. Worth watching [like]

Emmm, in fact, at the beginning, I felt that the author's writing style is very good, and it makes people want to read on. However, the author's broken sentences really have the flavor of ancient traditional writing. It is too long, one paragraph is too long, and it is not suitable for today's short-term reading. I hope it can be changed to lower the reading threshold. The author's writing is really detailed. I remembered that there is a book on a female channel that also writes about cultivating immortals, but it writes more about alchemy and talisman refining. It is also very detailed about cultivation. This is the first time I have seen such a detailed description on a male channel. I personally think it is quite interesting. The details of the writing indicate that the author's conception of the worldview should be quite complete. It feels like telling a story, and it is told eloquently. There is no so-called golden finger. The protagonist starts from a child and walks through it step by step. It is quite good-looking in a coming-of-age story. Let me mention it again, divide it into paragraphs, it looks so good in capital letters, and it would be uneconomical to raise the reading threshold without dividing it into paragraphs. (Have you ever written period novels or farming novels before? I feel that the previous style is quite similar. When I read the first chapter, I felt like I was watching a period novel in the 1970s. In fact, there is a market for period novels.)

I would give it a five-star review without the cheats alone. It's like a breath of fresh air among the many cheats I've seen. The story is clearly explained, and the plot is not procrastinating. It is very enjoyable to watch. It contains a lot of foreshadowing. It is not suitable for quick browsing. I missed it if I didn't pay attention. I have to rewatch it several times. The most important thing is that they can still bury them after digging so many holes. It looked so good, I couldn't help but want to turn it over to see what the following chapters were about. I casually saw the assassination chapter and saw this paragraph: "I can't shed the tears of heroes, I can't forget the hatred of the world, I can't finish the glass of wine, I can't finish singing the farewell song, I can't let go of the knife in my hand, I can't kill all the enemies!" Wow, is this the author's own creation? It feels so appropriate to put it here. It has a heroic feeling like drinking wine and going to the battlefield. It reminds me of the martial arts novels in junior high school. (But I can't mention it if I'm not gay.)

The plot of this story has ups and downs, and the road is bumpy, and everything is caused by chance. Shen Chuan relies on his own hard work and chance to figure out countless conspiracies and tricks, countless mechanisms, and ultimately becomes an immortal or a demon. The rhythm is updated every day.

I read hundreds of chapters overnight. The author's writing style is steady and powerful, revealing his profound cultural heritage. The structure is rigorous, the logic is clear, and the writing skills are profound. Reading it is like eating pickled pork with pickled vegetables. It's very lovable [admirable]. The protagonist's path to immortality is full of ups and downs, hardships, and ups and downs. The world view in the book is completely and generously constructed, and you can feel the rich charm of oriental mythology. The portrayal of Shen Chuan is three-dimensional and clear, he is down-to-earth, hard-working, spiritual, and has a high level of understanding. His growth process is full of twists and turns, and he is simply the standard for cultivating immortals. The other characterizations are also unique and unique. In addition, the book also has a profound description of how he deals with intrigues and intrigues. Shen overcame thorns and thorns, worked step by step, and finally achieved his own path, which is fascinating In general, the writing style is unique and charming, returning to the purity and simplicity of traditional fantasy, and telling the legendary story of the protagonist's cultivation of immortality. It is a masterpiece worth reading. Highly recommended, author, come on, look forward to the follow-up [Blow a kiss]

The author's thinking is clear and the plot is fascinating. Shen Chuan started from a grassroots and walked step by step towards the path of cultivating immortality. The hardships he experienced can be imagined. He is determined not to give up and moves forward all the way. I hope that his journey to cultivating immortality will become smoother~

The writing is good, and the setting follows the traditional ancient setting of cultivating immortals. It is not like the golden finger system and so on in today's cultivating immortals. Moreover, there are many foreshadowings in the text, and readers need to dig out the deep meaning on their own.

I have to say that as an old bookworm, I have really read 666 books of the same type. This is the only book that I read from beginning to end without skipping over it. I have also read several books in Tomato. This one is really good and I personally think it is worth reading.

The story of sect grievances, martial arts training, and intra-sect martial arts competitions is so exciting. The author has laid a lot of foreshadowings. In addition to Shen Chuan, the supporting role is also very unique. Shen Chuan is smart and steady, and has a strong heart.

The male protagonist has experienced countless hardships and challenges in his cultivation of immortality. Every setback makes him stronger and more mature. The portrayal of this growth is very real. Really super pretty [like]

The author needs to work hard and urge more updates. Shen Chuan always speaks in a gentle manner, which reflects the author's writing style. Reading now, although I haven't seen Shen Chuan's success, but without the golden finger, the whole character has become more alive.

The plot is very smooth. I am very impressed by Shen Chuan. There are many things he pretends not to understand, but in fact this is a clear choice. The road to becoming an immortal is very bumpy. There are also many small thoughts and ideas among fellow disciples. These are all written very realistically.

The author wrote this book very well. He described the protagonist's personality and family situation in multiple dimensions. He did not simply write a book about cultivating immortals for us. In addition to the content of cultivating immortals, there are also conspiracies and tricks used to compete for genius treasures. The author handled the suspense very well and it was very attractive.

The male protagonist's life is like every stage of our ordinary life, requiring hard work and struggle, and the fighting scenes are very intense. The author's description of emotions is very warm, which makes people look forward to it.

I really like the element of cultivating immortals. I saw the efforts of ordinary people. The road to cultivating immortals is full of challenges and adventures. The male protagonist embarked on an unknown journey by accident. The story is unconventional and the characters are very full.

Super pretty! ! ! Highly recommended! It's a very good story about mortals cultivating immortality. The character setting is very novel and not a cookie-cutter routine. The plot is compact and the more you watch it, the more you get hooked. I'm especially looking forward to the next plot! The author should update it quickly and update more.

It's really good-looking. There are many hardships on the road to cultivating immortality. Only by going through hardships can you achieve the right goal and become an immortal. It turns out that becoming an immortal is not that easy. I hope there will be more updates!

The difficulties and obstacles on the road to cultivating immortality are vividly displayed in the author's writing, and the difficulties and choices faced by Shen Chuan are also empathetic.

The story is good, it echoes the previous chapters, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I hope it can maintain the standard in the future!

I feel that this book is very well written and has a very good artistic conception.

I accidentally picked up this novel yesterday and read it all night long. It was very interesting! I have read too many articles about cultivating immortals with golden fingers and systematic methods. This article about cultivating immortals for mortals is very different. The author's writing style is good! Finally, I just want to say that the author should update quickly and update more! It's totally not enough!

The plot of the story is very novel, and many of the themes of cultivating immortals have been templated. The male protagonist has his own system, various cheats, and a halo, which already makes people feel tired. The plot and character settings of this book are very unique, making people want to keep reading.

It's very beautiful, no unnecessary nonsense! I'm still not satisfied with it now. I commented after reading it. It is very good. There are no big problems in all aspects of logic. Occasionally there are some minor flaws that are understandable. It is worth recommending.

I really love this book. There are no common routines such as time travel and systems. The pure path of mortals cultivating immortality is more real and difficult.

It's quite interesting. Once you're used to reading cool articles, it's also very interesting to watch this kind of mortal flow.

Love this novel! Nice mortal flow! Many points in the preceding and following chapters echo each other! Urgent update!

I am attracted by the world written by the author. It is really beautiful. The male protagonist has a calm character and I like it very much (ÒωÓױ)