Harry Potter and the Obscurus

The content is very good, but it would have been better if the heroine was not Hermione. When I saw the heroine suspected of being Hermione in the middle, I lost the desire to read it. If anyone sees that there is no CP at the end, you can tell me, I am very interested in reading the novel without the heroine. Of course, it's just that I don't really like having a female protagonist. I don't mean to say that the author's writing is bad. On the contrary, I think the content is very unique and I like the setting of Obscurus very much.

It looks good, but this Hermione feels so annoying, without any sense of boundaries, so I would rather knock Harry x Mo Ran than hope that Harry's CP is Hermione, okay [crying]

Love to read, love to read, more updates. But can the author write it as Narcissus or without cp? Haha, some people (like me) are not very good at it.

Well... How should I put it, it's my favorite type, with a high IQ, but many people may not be able to accept the bloated ideological description and emotional ambiguity. To put it bluntly, there is too much nonsense and poor CP. But soul enlightenment and so on are still very fragrant to me! Big cheers for the author!

The setting is very novel, the two protagonists, Mo Ran and Harry, are one and the same, but have two souls, but their personalities and magic are different, there is no system, and the description of magic is very profound. One of the scenes that impressed me the most was Mo Ran's feeling about the "right path" during time travel. After swallowing all the dementors, the rioting energy was silenced. The other scene was that of Mo Ran and Voldemort in the east and west respectively, transforming at the same time. It has a sense of fate and imagery. CP is Ha He, Mo Ran should be Ginny (it would be nice if a new heroine character of Cha is also set), in short, I support it!

It's nice to read. The cp of this book is haha, and the protagonist should have no cp. This book written by Harry is very handsome. He is good in all aspects of study and has a good relationship with Germany. Voldemort retired in the fourth grade.

It's good to read. It's rare to see Mo Ran's novels.

It's a good book. It would be better to treat him as a double male protagonist. Although the main character Mo Ran has a little less role in my opinion. I don't know how to describe the rest, but the reading experience is very friendly to me. I feel refreshed after reading it. There are really few books that give me this feeling. At present, I see the protagonist becoming an independent person. I hope there will be more exciting content in the future and a good ending.

A very interesting perspective, one body with two souls but a bystander setting, Harry of the Lion House, haha ​​with cp, and the writing is still online. It's not a cool article, the author has some ideas.

I've been chasing it for a long time. I like this book because it makes up for the shortcomings of the original work, and because the author has good settings and good writing. One of the regrets about HP's original work is that the magic is not rich enough and the battle scenes are not coherent enough. Most of the fights end with a few waves or even dodging takes up the main part. The only long shot of the Ministry of Magic, Lao Deng and Lao Fu, does not show that he is much better than ordinary wizards. There are many wonderful fighting scenes in this book, and the spells are also well added. The growth of the protagonists Mo Ran and Harry is clearly seen, and Lao Fu's fighting ability is not belittled. Victory requires planning and paving the way, which also shows the charm of Lao Deng, Hermione and others. The second and most important regret about the original work is the emotional line. I am dissatisfied with the sloppy and inexplicable emotional lines of Harry and Ginny, and also dissatisfied with the awkward emotional lines of Hermione and Ron when they were young, so I embarked on the path of HP fandom. In this book, Harry and Hermione are natural and smooth, and the indifferent pairing of Ginny is unexpected but the subsequent perfection is reasonable. If you mention it more, Ron and Lavender are developing well and slowly becoming rational. If you think about it in the longer term, there is a third regret, which is also a sore foot in the original logic: the problem of the integration of Muggles and wizards. This is inevitable as technology advances. After Emperor Ge, he never saw the masters who dominated the magic world think about this issue again. Although Emperor Ge had the common arrogance of wizard nobles, he really considered this problem and sought a solution, and put it into practice. Dumbledore may have hope because of his strength, self-control and love, but he was busy fighting with Emperor Gatorade and Lord Voldemort until his death. He left the problem to Harry and other students. Can Hermione solve it? Can her strength and allies hold up? Seventeen years later nothing has been said. The author of this book does not shy away from this difficulty and intends to make up for the future of the magical world. Although Mo Ran's plan has not been written yet, I infer from the existing clues that it is a superhuman idea of ​​using deterrence to peacefully transition quickly until mutual benefit and win-win are indistinguishable and they enter the interstellar space. Looking forward to the answer to this last and final regret! It ended today. What a pity. It didn't write about the integration of the magical world and human society without magical talents. It used another ingenious idea to resolve the contradiction and establish the Happy Ending. The political and economic hole left by Rowling is really difficult to fill.

Big cheers for the author! The subject matter is novel and the writing is very good. It is worth reading.

The plot settings are very good, but can the teacher mark the cp in the introduction? This haha ​​cp has no way of imagining what the protagonist will do.

The setting is quite interesting. It's the first time I've seen HP from this perspective. The disadvantage is that it's too short and not enough to watch [Thinking][Thinking]

CP Haha, I don't really like it. The plot is okay and the writing is not bad. If you like it, you can enter.

Haha can accept it No CP is better Don't marry Luo He! ! !

It's very exciting, especially exciting. The plot in the middle and later stages is almost completely separated from the original plot, and it makes up for many contradictions in the original work. It is completely different from many fans who have always followed the original work. The protagonist and Harry's strength growth is not soaring. The emotional development is not industrial saccharine, and the characters are not forced to add drama. The plot is real and rigorous, which makes people feel very good.

Oh my God, I finally tied it. The time travel part is quite interesting. The previous holes have been filled in. The relationship between the characters is more complicated. The magic feels more wonderful. There is also a feeling of preparing for the separation of perspectives. Now that Harry is separated into independent individuals, Harry's perspective has weakened, and Mo Ran is regarded as a villain... It feels so bad. I pray that the truth will be revealed, and I especially want Ron and Hermione to know that they actually had dealings with Mo Ran. I always feel that according to Trelawney's prophecy, the two of them are fighting among themselves, and Mo Ran is swallowed up by the darkness and Harry has to fight with him. Now, just like what was said before, the prophecy is not that accurate as long as it is not true. I am looking forward to the follow-up. The author is really good at digging holes, but he can also fill them up. This is very good. Please continue to write quickly. I want to see the follow-up (scroll here and there)

It is a novel that is in line with the personality of the original characters, and there is no character failure. I hope the author can have a good ending, as long as it is not a bad ending. If you don't want to write it anymore, just stop it. It is better to have regrets than to be upset about a bad ending.

Although this setting is indeed very good-looking, it feels like the CP is Hermione, which I think is a bit weird. I thought there was no CP or a little bit of a heartthrob, but it seems that the CP is Hermione, which is still a bit hard to stand. I hope the author can mark who the CP is next time he writes? After watching it for a while, I felt like the sky was falling.

The setting is novel, but I can't get enough of this pair of CPs [crying][crying][crying]

It's very logical, everything he does is very logical, there's no Mary Sue feeling, there's no crunchy feeling, it's like those people really exist. He described that feeling very well, and he also wrote a timeline. Although I don't understand it, it feels so awesome. The author also has a unique insight into the world of Harry Potter and has a very thorough understanding of the events of Harry Potter. Although I have not seen the movie version or the novel version, I have not read the original version, and I have not read the other guys, I think he is very reasonable.

It's good, very good. I hope it won't be as bad or discontinued as some of the books I read.

I really like this setting of possessing a mentor! When I read the original novel, I always felt that Harry was so stupid and I wished I could teach him what to do.

A very good hp fan, I hope the author will work hard and update it.

The writing is very good, the characters are very realistic, and the plot of the protagonist, Harry and Dumbledore made me feel like I was watching the original work. But I can't stand the emotional drama with Ginny. I need to take a break.

Nice. (My best review)

The writing is good, but the time travel part feels a little confusing. I read it roughly and couldn't quite figure it out after reading it. But overall, I wrote something of my own, and it's not like other fans who just added some things based on the original work.

I went and watched the movie again, and finally I was able to compare! Well done to you! Well done to you! It is recommended to update 10 times a day, each update is 10,000 words, thank you [laughing evilly] I can't stop reading.

Very good 1. I can't accept cp 2. The natural paragraph is too long 3. A little ooc 4. The original work has been changed

Narcissus or Hermione?