The City of Monster Core

It can be seen that the author's worldview is quite large, the subject matter is good and intriguing, and the protagonist is well portrayed. The only drawback is that there is very little foreshadowing. Even if there is a foreshadowing in the back loop, it gives the reader a somewhat ethereal feeling. There is no impression. It feels like there is a missing layout. The characteristics of the party can travel through time and space, and it is precisely because of this that the protagonist escapes. A chase, but this idea is not big enough. There is no sense of enlightenment now. The supporting characters also lack some emotional tone. It feels like an ordinary urban novel. But I believe this book is not ordinary. It is precisely because the world view is very large. In the circle of the world view, other circles can be used to fill in the holes. Each stage of the protagonist is a layout. . This book is still worth encouraging, this kind of copy is still relatively new. I hope the author can think carefully about the next direction of the plot in the follow-up [eating melon]

It's very interesting. In Chapter 51, the protagonist said that Captain Yan's parents and sister are upstairs. I felt like I really saw the protagonist. I hope Captain Yan will not disappoint the protagonist. And I have thought about an outrageous guess that Bella might be the protagonist's sister. I really think this guess is outrageous, but an intuition tells me that it is really possible. Although I have only read Chapter 51, if this news is true, I will be really shocked. My unfounded guess is actually true. When I think of this guess, I really feel that it is so outrageous that I have reached my grandma's house. I really hope that the protagonist can find his sister. I really really hope that my God, who doesn't love such a cute sister? In order to reassure my brother that he can escape, he even lied to his brother that he can keep up. Where can I find such a good sister? And Bella, I really like it. I know there is no heroine and I don't hope there will be a heroine, but I hope Bella can live. I don't want it to be a knife. I always feel that I need to knife Bella. I have a strange intuition telling me that Bella may have a knife. I blindly guessed that it was a big knife for the protagonist. I also think it is very possible. I can recreate the scene like the protagonist's sister. I feel like it's not enough, but it's very interesting. I want to read it. I suggest the author to write 300 chapters in one day or 600 chapters in two days. I think these two suggestions are great. I promised the author to write 500 words, but now I only have more than 400 words. I'm really going to cry. I'll write another Cthulhu Little Theater to make up the number of words (twisted space) (twisted Buddha statue) (someone accidentally broke into this place) (headless Buddha statue seems to be crying) (he Hearing countless murmurs and shouts) (His cognitive distortions and reshaping) (Upside down and falling) (The Buddha's cry seemed like a smile and a dream) (A drop of turbid water fell on his head) (It was like a miracle that woke him up) (He regained consciousness) (I don't know if it was the next time) A fall) (He felt that he was omniscient and omnipotent) (Or it was Him now) (The body began to twist and turn) (He found that he seemed to be unable to see himself clearly) (His vision was blurred and he could only see the body of the headless Buddha statue) (The Buddha statue seemed to be waving to him) (He Moving forward step by step with his invisible body) (He walked to the headless Buddha statue but found that he seemed to have become the Buddha's head) This is the end of the short story. Not only is it enough, it is now more than 700 words |•'-'•)و✧

After reading Chapter 80, I also saw the author's process of revising the article in the book review. Overall, this book exceeded my expectations. It should not be a seven-point book. In my heart, it has at least an 8.7 Rating. I have been reading The End of the Day and The House of Deception for a long time. Both of these books are highly rated and have excellent stories, so I feel that my feelings about a good novel will not deviate too much. The plot and world view of this book by the author are very good. The characters are from ordinary people but are transcendent from ordinary people. It is refreshing, but not without brains. The images of hunters, knights, etc. All aroused my curiosity about another world, and their personal charm also made me very fond of them. In short, this book has great potential, and I hope the author can keep updating it. Although the data is not very good, I really believe that it will be the next hit. Writing skills can be accumulated gradually. I also know clearly that this book has shortcomings, but I believe that the author will grow. I hope that the books written by the author will get better and better.

Marvelous! ! Among the 1,000 books I have read, this book ranks among the top five

If you don't praise good books, then fewer people will read them.

The author's world record is 128 words per minute. Since you are not the record holder, we calculate it as 80 words per minute. There are 24 hours in a day. Excluding ten hours for sleeping, two hours for eating, and one hour for other things, the author is given two hours of rest time, and another hour for inspiration to ensure the quality of the work. According to this calculation, you can update 38,400 words a day, but why do you only update more than 4,000 words a day!

The protagonist's three views are not brainless, the author is active and can listen to suggestions, and the details and character foreshadowing are well written. I highly recommend it. By the way, this is not a cool article [Blow a kiss] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] Rising Show Hold on, please. There was no popularity at the beginning and fewer people read it. It is normal for a new book to have a low score at the beginning. I hope the author will not give up on this type of book. It is quite rare. The score will gradually increase. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I think it's a god-level book

What a nice b! It's a potential stock, brothers. The protagonist has a three-dimensional image. I hope the author maintains his style and continues to work hard! This book is very interesting, pertinent, and not too subjective.

The setting is novel, the protagonist is not a virgin, and tries his best to help the people around him. This can be seen in the matter of life and death with his sister, renting a house, and saving Li Bella. However, the protagonist's brain does not seem to be outstanding. The current main line is to find his sister and earn points. Mane, the language expression is quite satisfactory, and the hunter's madness does not surprise me. Except for the detailed description of the protagonist in the space Summary: potential stock, novel setting, distinctive protagonist, clear main line, and the author has room for improvement Come on＾0＾~

This book highlights one thing: it focuses on IQ and EQ online. It is already a good source of food and has the potential of fairy grass.

Why is the author so slow in updating? Is it because he went to the liminal space to find materials?

Sorry, this book is really good. Except for the plot point where the protagonist is inexplicably reversed at the beginning and I hope to make up for the setting later, I feel a little uncomfortable watching it, but at least so far I haven't seen any bad points. Please help the author make up for it. This book has no system, no cheats, no worldly sophistication, and the protagonist has a normal outlook on life. In Chapters 55-58 of Lightning Protection, it was agreed that there would be no female protagonist, but the author still had to write some wife scenes, which was a bit disgusting.

Everything else is good, but Chapter 4 is a little bit toxic. At least give the protagonist a better story and support him in fighting in the sea of ​​mosquitoes. I mentioned earlier that for ordinary people, even mosquito toxins are not that effective. We should add another trick, such as limited-time unlimited stamina and a cooling time.

It's a very novel and beautiful book. A group of kind-hearted monsters fight for good. Is it too difficult to write a copy of the author's book? At this pace, you can consider getting in touch with the secrets and speed up the pace.

This book is quite nice! This book on Tomato can definitely be above 9.0, Why is the rating so low?

It's very exciting, the structure is very novel, the plot has ups and downs, the pace is fast, the author's description is very good,,, the protagonist has a decisive character, and the supporting characters are also very full of character, it is worth watching, very interesting [Blow kiss] [Like] [Like] [Like]

It's invincible and beautiful. If you like urban legends, you must not miss it (PS: It's a pity that there is no female protagonist, but I won't force it)

The writing is quite good, but I feel there is something wrong with the name and introduction, so there is not much traffic. It's the appendix. ，

Don't be misled by the ratings of this book, it's a good read.

The latter part is quite different from the previous one, it just gives people a sense of chaos like the Shibuya Incident, but the first one is worth recommending, it just depends on how the plot ends now.

The work is good-looking, the main character is ruthless, and the plug-ins are weak. It also gave me a feeling that I had when I read The King, Spare My Life, which is amazing (இдஇ; ) The author is great, please persist

It's a pretty good book. It reminded me of an old book I read several years ago called "The Original Hunters". The hunters in this book and that book are both pretty cool, but the original hunters draw more on blood relationships.

I don't like to read tomatoes. I couldn't find the book I wanted to read at a certain point recently. I came here to read it. It is a refreshing article about killing decisively (so far it seems like this). The world view should be chaotic and has a feeling of apocalypse. It is a bit green and there are problems. But the idea is right. If you persist a little longer, your results will gradually improve. Come on!

Why is the rating so low? It's really good-looking. It's not the Holy Mother. It kills decisively. Every character is a person with a complex psychology, not an NPC.

Opening high, I don't know if it's going to go low.

It's great, oh my god, all I can say is that every character in this book is a human being (wow, I don't know how the author wrote the protagonist's personality so much like me)

It's really good-looking and has its own worldview, which is rare in Tomato

It's really good-looking. It compares favorably with more than 85% of the books on the market. It's definitely not a lie.

It has the same effect as the Lord God Space