Marriage from Heaven! Heartthrob, He Is Cool and Sweet

Not bad, not bad. It's rare that there is no Mary Sue-style description. The writing is surprisingly good, and the plot is not a bad routine, so it can be considered novel. The emotional description also has transitional plots, which are not blunt, and it is not the bad routine of "when you meet the other person, you will feel that the other person is amazing, and then you must be the king". The most important thing is that Shou's character is no longer a delicate one! And it's still a painting style of a normal person, which is rare. I'm a little moved [crying] [get it] It's a young man with a normal painting style ~ [send heart] There are no other big problems, but the title of the book can be improved by the author. It's a bit hard to explain. I read it at first glance I thought this book title was a crappy "old-style Mary Sue novel", the kind that only I could read a few chapters in when I was in a literary drought, and then I still couldn't stand it and abandoned the text [face covering] Who knew the text was so refreshing, I missed it several times [staring]

The plot is very novel, the routines are good, the plot is ridiculous, the characters are well created, the description of the characters' mental journey is also detailed, smooth and natural, and the writing is also good. Watching them read fanfics makes me really embarrassed as a reader, mainly because the fanfics in them are too real. But it's funny at the same time, their reactions are really funny hahahaha.

I don't know why, I came here to take CP, but when I saw the end, it was more like gossiping. Just after I finished watching a melon, the next second, a big melon came, and the corners of my mouth never came down.

Super beautiful (♥∀♥) The author is great, can you let Jiao Jiao accept them all? I really want to see them together [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

This is my first time reading a book like this, [Admiration] [Blowing kiss] Come on

Super super super super beautiful! This setting is somewhat similar to the type of article written by Guanyin. It's super good-looking. It's the first time I've seen this type of article on Tomato. It looks good, love to watch, watch more hey hey [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's very interesting. While doing CP, I can listen to the gossip immersively. It's the first time I've seen this type of film and I like it very much. Big update soon [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Finally I found a book with two male protagonists and one arrow. It's not easy! The book written by Da Da is really interesting, but I really want to know when Da Da will update it [crying]

It looks good, the plot is relatively novel, but there are too many psychological descriptions (the author can try to choose), and I want to see what will happen when the monk appears. I will update it soon [Adoration] [Sending Hearts]

Nice! ! ! The setting is very novel. When I first read the introduction, I felt it was a bit confusing. But after reading a few chapters, I found it very interesting. Please keep up the good work. ✨ ("\(●-●) \ / 0\ \ ( ) \__ T__/

Very nice! Come on, author! [Code to live][like]

When I watched it, I felt like I was getting more and more obsessed with it. Although it was a bit awkward at times, I was looking forward to the follow-up. I don't know why I wanted to read Little Monk and Jiao Jiao's Book of Secrets [Shy] Looking forward to it (*°∀°)=3

Okay, this is the first time I've seen this

The plot is very novel, the character descriptions are on point, and the ideas are great. Overall, I like it very much. Look at the duration

It's super good. I read more than 60 chapters in one go tonight, and my lips curled up from the beginning to the end. Anyway, it's so good to read, so cheer up [Sending my heart]

It's very beautiful. This type is very good and fresh. I don't force it. I will update more than a dozen chapters a day. I believe you can do it [shy]

It's really beautiful! ! ! ! ! Come on, madam, write more [love] [love] [love]

Quite novel and beautiful

It's really interesting. When the protagonist sees a story about himself as the protagonist, he knows that he is a bender. He sees himself kissing, hugging, and giving birth to children, and the other characters in the story are right across from him. . Haha, it's embarrassing just thinking about it But as a viewer, I just want to gloat

It looks good, I like it very much [blowing kiss]

! ! ! ! ! ! Help is so beautiful! ! ! !

It's really good-looking, I'm almost laughing to death, fan fiction is really harmful [face covering] I like it very much, but it's just too little. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Author, your book is so beautiful.

I like it very much, but it's a pity that it's not finished yet. I have to wait.

Beautiful, interesting, made me spin in circles on the bed

Nice looking, very novel

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

This is the first time I see the protagonist reading his own fanfic. The setting is very interesting, but the pace of the plot is a little slow. I love all the single arrows so much, cheers up [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Like it very much! Baby's writing is also very good! Hope to see more Jiao Jiao's stories❤️

Big cheers for the author! It's really beautiful!