Comprehensive Comics **********

How should I put it? I feel that the proportion of text is too small. It seems that most of the comments are made by the author, so the plot does not feel coherent. Some of the comments by the author can be put in the comments.

If you just read Yili, this book is still very interesting. Although the plot of spring objects appears more frequently, the author also has some original settings. Entering the dungeon world with Yili gradually warms up the relationship between the two people, changing Yili's prejudice and fear towards the protagonist. The protagonist joins the service department. In the subsequent plot, there should be a plot where the protagonist brings Yili to entrust the service department to change Yili's personality. There are still a lot of pitfalls buried in the past. It depends on whether the author can fill them up. In the subsequent plot, there should be a rivalry between Yukino and Ichiri. I am looking forward to how the strong and perfect Yukinoshita Yukino and the autistic and inferior Gotou Ichiri communicate. I believe that even the perfect Yukinoshita Yukino will have a headache. In short, I hope the author will continue to work hard. The number of words in each chapter is too few at present.

I didn't expect it, I didn't expect it to be everyday and weird.

It looks great, good luck to the author.

Good reviews, good reviews, good reviews

It must be 5 stars after all, this is the first time I have been replied to by the author.

The writing is a little rough, but the interesting stories make up for it.

As for the book, it is good to read. But the writing style needs to be improved. Come on.

Come on, the future is promising

It's nice to chat, I like chatting. It's a holiday, happy.

Good reviews, nice to watch. [Blowing kiss]

I've read half of it, and it's a good review.

I feel a bit incomprehensible. Come on, author. I originally wanted to polish it up, but the author is more active and listens to opinions, so I'll stick with it. The main reason is that the transition is too stiff, which makes people a little incomprehensible. I hope the author can improve it.