Reborn in the Apocalypse, I Started Cultivating Earlier Than Everyone Else

Give me 5⭐. The author really wants to work hard. Let me talk about the problems I see. The characters have tried their best to get through the red mist. Some things are just not considered. Then there is the equipment weapon. Can't we keep pace with the times? The author is great. Really, take 2 minutes to learn about the current country's weapons and equipment. For example, the electromagnetic gun CS21 and the pistol P50 both have 50 rounds. Let's take a look at the bows. Now all the bows have repeaters. The pendants are also diverse. Infrared magnifiers are available. There are two types of bursts, 6 and 10. Finally, there are too many books written now. A book that has just passed the test is of no use at all. Fighting and killing monsters are turn-based. Personal advice. You look at fighting games. Street Fighter 6, Tekken 8, Mortal Kombat 11. Just watch it for 2 minutes and you'll understand what I'm talking about. Especially Mortal Kombat 11. Finally, let's talk about the structure of the story. If I am the author. There must be no space. There is enough time and there are many ways to solve the problem. It's the end of the world. There is also wireless food. I don't know when this way of writing became popular. I think it's the stupidest thing. Come on finally!

Okay, it's pretty good. The protagonist has brains, but he's not a virgin.

The writing is good and the plot is well arranged, but the beginning is long-winded and the ending is too fast.

It's pretty good, support the author.

Although the book is short and some plots are not very reasonable, it still cannot conceal that it is a top-notch novel. I, an old bookworm who has been reading novels for 50 years, also finished this book.

The framework is good, okay

Not bad, keep up the good work!