Trial Ground: What Is the Mission This Time?

It's Chapter 45 now and it feels pretty good

The second copy feels quite exciting. Is it a matter of my courage?

It's a very good book, and it's all very well written, including the copies and unlimited streams. Especially the real world part, it can be said to be stronger than most similar works. The protagonist's character is also upright, decisive, brave and resourceful, which suits me very well. The problem is, the infinite flow is too short, the growth length is insufficient, and the decisive battle is entered too quickly. Parts such as the country and the people's livelihood are somewhat lacking in writing power, far inferior to the battle and wits parts, which appear abrupt and stiff. The biggest problem is that the length is not enough, and the plot unfolds. It would be much better if some foreshadowings such as Son of Destiny, Demon Hunting Operation, and Rape Organization were slowly recycled.

Although there are some suspicions of water leakage in some places, as long as you update enough, it is not irreversible.

The early stage is very good, and it feels very professional. The protagonist does not do mindless things, which is very suitable for the identity of the killer. However, in the later stage, the style changes can be seen with the naked eye. It may be that the author is anxious to finish it. But the first hundred chapters are really enjoyable to read. The puppet school has a good feeling. It would be better if it is more terrifying.

Specifically, very good I have some doubts, is there a female protagonist? I came here based on other people's recommendations and there was no female lead. To make up 50 words The plot is smooth, the structure is clear, and the protagonist is super handsome

Now I don't dare to sleep, what should I do?

Now I've read Chapter 55, and I think it's quite interesting.

The writing is not bad, why is the score so low?

Although it is obvious that it is a fierce imitation of a player, there are differences everywhere upon closer inspection. Overall it's okay, the rating of 6.8 Is low.

I haven't seen such a smart person in a long time.

Be careful not to lose your fighting strength.

It's okay, why not rate it?

Why did you suddenly play Amnesia?

It's very well written. Why is there no one?

Good. I like the protagonist who has brains, occasionally goes crazy, doesn't play dirty jokes, and has strength.

It's a very interesting book, but there are too few of it. I really like reading this type of book.

Nice! Big cheers for the author [blowing kiss]

Come on, author, don't cut it in half

It looks good, but the main plot seems to have not been released yet. Is the heroine Rao?

The thinking is clear, but a bit short.

The shortcoming is that it is too slow. The actual writing is not very good, but the game copy is really good.

It's okay, just don't lose your fighting power, the plot is excellent

I enjoyed reading the content of the copy very much.

It can be seen that the players are fierce and the same style

The language is humorous, the structure is fashionable, and it is a rare masterpiece.

It looks great, I hope the author can speed it up a lot.

The writing is good and there is nothing too bad about it at the moment. Give the author five stars for encouragement.