Hacker**********

In the first three chapters, apart from the protagonist's extraordinary abilities, the rest are quite good, and the most important one is Little Dafeng! ! !

Hey, hey, I didn't expect it to be me again. Brother, your book Xiaotiancheng is very good, but you have just opened it again. But the author, I can only say that your new book has ideas, but it is too weak and inconsistent. Your method of entering a different world from a player's perspective through your own technology is very similar to an idea I had two years ago. I wanted to write a Bengzi, but I quit the version that Xinhuo released. I couldn't understand the subsequent plot, so I gave up. Next are some of my suggestions for you to take a look at. First of all, the "Tiandao Hacker" you gave to the protagonist also has some embarrassing skills. There is not much description, and it is not professional enough (it just makes me a little embarrassed). Of course, what I mean is that you can add some high-end proper nouns to improve your character and reduce violations. (Not many people understand it anyway, and they don't dare to say more for fear of being ripped off. [Grief] Dog head saves life). The protagonist's image is not as good as that of Xiao Tiancheng, and the details are not very smooth. For example, when using the terminal to repair the power system, you can describe it in detail. (Come on: when the circuit is damaged, it is a bit nonsense to repair the circuit directly through the terminal. It would be understandable if the backup is enabled.) 3 (A bit anxious at the beginning, a bit poisonous) + 1 (thoughts and expectations) = 4 stars Author, don't worry. When you wrote Xiaotiancheng, you opened both books. Now that you have opened another book, it will be too much for you. Pay attention to your health. [Cover face][cover face] It's a bit too boring, there are too many poisonous spots, and the plot is confusing and dragging. [Petrochemical]

My review for this book is, update soon! There is no greater praise for an author than these two words.

It's not enough, it's not enough at all. Kou Ya

It feels ok, as long as it doesn't collapse at the back

When I went there, I realized, isn't that who it is? The author of Commander Maomao, please give me a good review first.

My brother cheated again today, right? Really, why did the light stop updating?

It's been almost a year since I quit the industry. After reading this book, I wish I could give myself two slaps. My wives, please wait for me. I'll do it. I'll do it. [Crying]

I am looking for a return flow, but when facing my own girl, I don't hide anything and pretend to have amnesia and go straight to A and give good reviews. It's very to my liking, and my daily writing is also very touching [laughs] Come on, the author, please update more, it's not enough.

The content is smooth and fluent, and there are no poisonous points. In terms of plot, it is much better than those who are shocked and return to Barabara at every turn. I can't express it. It's just a good feeling. Anyway, it is good-looking. It can be ranked among the top in Bilan. As long as it is updated continuously, the completion of a thousand chapters can basically be circulated in the Bilan circle for several years. The admiral of the deep sea in the ship C next door is basically known to everyone who reads Kanniang. Hope it gets better and better!

Very well written

It's pretty good. This is the first time I've seen such a ship girl setting. For now, being too short is a drawback. Xiao Dafeng is the first ship girl I've met and the first time I've met, usually they are mature big sisters like Guanghui [laughing]

Damn it! Author, it only took me a while to read it! So beautiful!

The author's update speed is really fast This makes those authors who write a chapter of 2,000 words a week feel embarrassed.

Has the author won the resurrection game, or is he coming back to his former glory?

Not bad, really good. (Why does it have to be five words? I'm not good at writing comments.)

It's good. The author writes very well. There are no poisonous points at the moment.

Good book. It's the first time I read this type of book. I feel pretty good.

Blue fandom must be five stars. It has a lot of imagination. When it comes to various flashbacks and other writing techniques, it is still used sparingly. The writing style is really good, but I personally feel that it has a literary youth. I can't feel it when listening to the book. It feels a bit awkward when I read the words. I don't know if it's my imagination.

Can the author include pictures in the chapters? I have never played the game.

Quack quack quack quack

Good job, author.

Big cheers for the author!

Looks good, the stickers are great

Super exciting, super beautiful Come on, great author!

I like the setting of this book

I give you five stars to see if you realize it or not.

When will Dadi Mama come out?

Not enough, completely not enough

My rating is that it's okay, just a little bit lacking.