Huang Mao Cultivates Immortality, but the Main Sufferer Is the Senior Sister

There are very few people commenting on it. I am the first to try it. Personally, I feel that the content is actually quite novel. The character of the male protagonist is quite lively. I like it a lot, but the content is too small. The content is more life-oriented. It feels a bit not the traditional type of fantasy novel, but it is still quite interesting. I hope the author can update it soon. After reading it, I felt prickly because there is no subject matter, but it is still quite novel and rare. Is there anything similar?

This is the most comfortable book I have read in a while (the last one was Star God). There are three volumes in the text, and I have read the first two. I have to say that the author's grasp of emotional drama has reached a perfect level, making people's mouths watering every time they read it. Especially the daily life with his junior sister is really a highlight. Later I saw someone saying that the speed at which Senior Sister was captured was a bit too fast and a bit stiff. Emm, I want to explain it with a sentence I saw in the comment area: Senior sister has never felt loved since she was a child, and junior sister has grown up in the love given by senior sister. In short, senior sister lacks love. It is undeniable that this book has some minor flaws. For example, in the early stage, the junior sister was 80 after the protagonist went to the Demon Sect. Later, the senior sister dealt with the junior sister's emotional problems... But this book is still worth reading. If you happen to be free and happy, or busy and irritable, then this book will bring you happiness. (The above only represents my personal opinion, I don't like to criticize [salute])

The male protagonist has a good character, he is cute enough, pretentious enough, and naughty enough, but he is not pretentious, and he occasionally becomes serious. He is really much better than other male protagonists who have been fooling around until the finale. It may not be considered very good, but it is worth watching.

You, the author, are bound to be popular. To be honest, there are not many books that can make me lie in bed without feeling sleepy even though I will be level 4 or 6 tomorrow. This book is really comedic. The male protagonist gives people the impression of being both shrewd and naive, playing with the world without falling into it. This kind of character is very lovable. At the same time, the humorous way of grasping the emotional line is also very attractive, and it has the temperament of a big IP. Come on, try to escape from the dark room as soon as possible [laughing] [you taste it carefully]

The subject matter of this book is really rare, and the author's writing style is hard not to doubt whether this is the author's side job or his main job The writing is very good. The two female protagonists are not actually Lily in the strict sense. Just like what their adoptive mothers said, they lived too hard in the past and had little social interaction, so they regarded this attachment as love. The author's shabby subject matter can be regarded as a mudslide among the similar industrial saccharine. It is novel and fun, and the writing style itself is funny. It is a good read. The only problem is that there are too few updates😤😤😤Not enough for me to read.

Why is such a beautiful book so little known? Although the male protagonist is a little nervous at the moment, his character, outlook, and temper are all admirable. I can't imitate such a person, but I like the male protagonist's personality [full] [full] [full]

Evaluation after reading eighty chapters Top-grade grain and grass (small boutique capital) A non-traditional fantasy novel under a traditional fantasy background. The content is more everyday. The characters of the heroines are very well written. The various emotional changes of the characters are traceable. The character creation is mature. The supporting characters are flat but not perfunctory. The overall look and feel is maintained well. It is a fun-loving part. It's also very familiar [laughter], the world view is purely a traditional immortal cultivation template (after all, the point of view is not a novel world view, the foreshadowing is good), the entry point is novel (the male protagonist sandwiched between the lesbians [laughter]) and the description of the details is just right. The point of view is quite good, and the refreshing points are well laid out. However, at present, it seems that it may be difficult to maintain the freshness in the later part (there are not many descriptions of the main plot except for the corner). It is still possible to maintain the quality of the previous content and continue to make small products. It is very suitable for fun people and high-speed bucks. Subjective rating four stars Follow the entry-level bookworm Smoked Fish to take you to read online articles [Blow a kiss]

The author's writing is quite good, and the rhythm is well grasped. Although it feels a bit conjectural, it is really sweet. I think the two heroines given by the author should be the elder sister and the younger sister. Currently, the main character is the younger sister. The younger sister's character is still very attractive. I haven't started writing about the older sister yet. The author estimates The plan was to write about the younger sister first and conquer her before conquering the elder sister. However, the elder sister was put aside for too long and I couldn't see any advantages of the elder sister. The younger sister was written so well and it was easy to create a contrast. As a result, the sister did not look like the heroine, but was a stumbling block on the male protagonist's way to conquer his younger sister. In addition to the male protagonist conquering the two sisters, the plot also has a normal plot in the world of cultivating immortals. There are no big problems here. It is just that the bullying of the small group at the peak where the sister lives seems a bit dramatic, and it is not like what would happen in the world of cultivating immortals. It's a potential stock. I hope the author can write the sister well, otherwise it will be a failure.

It suits my taste very well. I like this kind of protagonist who is humorous, but can also take the people he loves seriously. He will not downplay the existence of the heroine for the sake of comedy like other novels. Sometimes as I write, I feel that the heroine is a passerby, or becomes a bystander. This kind of emotional line is really good. At the same time, the protagonist has not forgotten to improve her strength, but it is not overly exaggerated, so that saying that the heroine was severely left behind has no effect at all. It is indeed a good book No one cares

I originally thought it was a vulgar novel, but I didn't expect it to be unexpectedly good. It was very enjoyable to read. The male protagonist is a top-notch fun-loving person who is naturally cool and handsome, and the junior sister is already as good as imagined. The writing style is very real and humorous. I originally wanted to buy more, but after reading it, I couldn't help but read it in two days. It's invincible.

To put it bluntly, it's a very good book. On role setting Senior sister, it's cold on the outside and hot on the inside; Junior sister, you are so cute; The protagonist has no face. Plot The plot of picking up the junior sister outside has ended. The next step should be to explore the secret realm and capture the junior sister at the same time. The plot of picking up the junior sister is very detailed. I look forward to the following plots, especially when the lilies wither and start to compete for pots. In general A very good book, worth reading

A very good love story, the pace of the story is slow and steady, and the descriptions are among the best in this genre. There is no so-called harem in the relationship between a senior sister and a junior sister. It is very satisfying to see both of them being able to be together with Pig's Feet for various reasons. This is because the author has laid a lot of groundwork in the early stages. The description of daily life is sweet, and the plot of cultivation is full of excitement. The two complement each other. It is very beautiful under the author's various promotions. Strong recommendation [sending heart] The tonic sealed the book [crying]

If you look at it from a book on cultivating immortals, it can only be said to be very average, or even very poor. But this book is actually a romance novel disguised as a fairy. My personal rating is 8 points (very good-looking). If you enjoy the love process, you can give it 9 points (very good-looking). If you look at the full text, there is actually no plot. There is nothing to cultivate in cultivation. It will not emphasize the realm like other fairy tales. After all, the male protagonist is a super genius and the realm will follow his needs. Moreover, there are not many secret realms, competitions, vendettas and other plots. Most of them revolve around love. If you taste it carefully, it is a love story covered in the skin of a fairy. It is very delicate. The highlight of this book is that it divides the male protagonist and the two female protagonists into: the younger sister is the female protagonist, the male protagonist is Huangmao, and the older sister is the bitter one. It is set that the sisters like each other. In the early stage, the male protagonist has an affair with the younger sister and persuades the older sister together. Later, the male protagonist engages in an affair with the older sister. Together, we hid it from my sister. Now it's my sister and the male protagonist who are attacking her sister. The male protagonist is acting with his sister, so it's very abstract, but it's very interesting. Huang Mao is with the female protagonist, Huang Mao is with the bitter master again, Huang Mao and the bitter master's sister are in love, and the female protagonist now hopes that Huang Mao and the bitter master will get together. She is really smiling. So there is not much to say. It is suitable for immersive reading. It is very comfortable after spending a few hours reading a large amount of content. But if you read it slowly, you will feel very ink-stained. At least that is my personal feeling. The progress is too slow, but the progress is fast. It seems that there is nothing to write. After all, love stories are meant to be messed up. What's more, this kind of double heroine story is similar to a single heroine. Don't you just write it with emotion? As for cultivating immortals? Cultivation of immortality is not important, but it still seems to be a bit of a main line. There are still explanations for the fragments of the great avenue, the way of mending the sky, and the black sea of ​​consciousness in the male protagonist's body. Overall, it looks pretty good, you can give it a try (personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

Never had such a wonderful start! The author's writing style is exquisite and the story development is well controlled. Although the character setting is cliché, it is not easy to write it well. I am very optimistic about the future of this book. Good luck to the author!

The emotional scenes are very well written, one of the best in Tomato. I give it five stars for encouragement. But the disadvantage is that the fighting in the middle and later stages is a mess. Basically, the male protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, and then there must be a large group of people watching. The male protagonist will point fingers when he is at a disadvantage. A fight can cost tens of thousands of words, and most of them are pointed by passers-by. I also occasionally read mindless and entertaining articles about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, but this fighting book is really hard to swallow. It is still recommended to use strengths and avoid weaknesses and write less about fighting.

As long as you don't mind dual female protagonists, like everyday, and mindless reading, this is it. It's a very good daily novel. The relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is also handled very well. The boundaries between female protagonists and non-female protagonists are also clearly drawn. There's nothing toxic about it. I just don't know why fewer people read it. Good luck to the author.

First of all, the advantages of this book are: 1. The author's writing style is excellent. There is no sense of fragmentation when reading the whole text. The overall plot is smooth and there are no obvious logical loopholes. 2. The characters are well drawn, and there are currently no character bugs or character breakdowns. Especially the portrayal of the junior sister is very lovable (but the character of the protagonist is very strange, with no obvious preferences and permanent mental state. It can be said that the portrayal of the character is just fun and lustful). 3. The overall plot is not compact but not procrastinating. Unless it is an important chapter, you will not miss anything by skipping a few chapters. The most important thing is that the author's words are very natural. At least it is very comfortable to watch and there is no obvious sense of deliberateness. After the appraisal, it is an excellent work among the four levels of God, Excellent, Common and Fecal. One star is missing because there are some poisonous points in this article, but overall it does not affect the perception. There are no big poisonous points, but there are many small poisonous points. I hope the author will continue to work hard [love] [love] [love] [love]

The theme is unique, the plot is vivid and tortuous, the emotional line is delicate, the characters are well created, and the protagonist is rational. So? Why is no one watching? Show them all to me! The author updates more every day, too little, not enough

The male protagonist was a bit of a dragon king in the beginning, but he got better and better after his debut. The interaction with the junior sister was very sweet. The transition from the pseudo-lily to the real straight-up setting was very natural. It made my aunt laugh [laughing evilly]. It was not enough to read it in one sitting. I hope it will be updated more frequently.

This book is really good, I won't lie to anyone First of all, the characters are portrayed very delicately, the plot is not too bad, and the writing style is excellent. I was annoyed for a while after reading it (meaning the author was less familiar with it). If you don't read it, you will miss a truly good book. Hehe, little Anqui, so cute [shy]

This is the first time I've seen this genre, and it's very well written. Watching this from the beginning, the biggest sticking point is that Senior Sister Yaoyao's cool points are a bit too hard, but I don't know how to change it for the better, so I'll give it a five-star rating.

It's so sweet, super sweet, and the emotions are handled very well. The interesting personality of the male protagonist also makes the whole story not boring. The most important thing is that the male protagonist has a super clear mind. Regarding feelings, he will appreciate those who are not him but will not touch them. He will try his best to pamper those who are his. He is also very comfortable in understanding and handling other things. There are no common problems in other harem novels (such as: being a bitch and still wanting to build a memorial arch). If you like it, admit it, chase it, and find a way. And you don't fall in love with someone when you meet them. You wait until the other person really likes you before you choose to understand and pursue it. Seeing that the male protagonist can really win the two female protagonists now, I hope that the two female protagonists will be on the stage together as soon as possible.

It's good to watch. I especially like the interaction between the male protagonist and his junior sister. For no other reason than the male protagonist's meanness.

It's a very good book, and the characters' emotions are very delicately portrayed. The male protagonist has very upright views. From the beginning, he just wanted to tease his junior sister, but later he was gradually taken over by the junior sister. The two people's previous mutual strategy was very interesting. The image of the junior sister is also very vivid. At first, she showed fierceness because she wanted to be independent and self-reliant, but then she gradually took off her disguise and revealed her original soft side, which made people feel pity. This book is simply the gospel of sister-controllers. The junior sister in the book fulfills all the fantasies that the sister-controllers have about their sisters, and it has been completed. I highly recommend it.

Just by looking at the title, one would think that this is a frivolous and vulgar novel, but unexpectedly, it is quite the opposite. The emotions of the characters are three-dimensional and delicate. It can be seen that the author really respects the emotions of the characters in the novel. There may be some inappropriateness in turning the supporting characters into tools, such as deliberately creating some nonsensical contradictions in order to maintain the frequency of updates. The ending may be rushed because of the author's personal reasons. It is a pity that the book is rushed, but it is also complete and worth experiencing. More everyday, excellent work

The author's writing style is amazing, it has a fresh feeling, and all kinds of jokes are well inserted. I feel that you are very good at writing a love story.

It's good to read, but I only read it for a while, because at chapter 320, I knew that this book had to be unabridged to be good, so hehe, I looked for it and found out. It's very well written, and it makes people panic. But it's a pity that it's too short. It can't be helped because the author's situation is special, but it's good that the author gave this happy ending, although I also wanted to see the knife a little bit, because I know The author killed Xiao Ku and Xiao Qi. They will definitely be rescued. Otherwise, wait for the razor blade. But, I also like to read such a happy ending. Oh, it's a pity that it's over. It's the first time I've seen such a frightening novel. I also went to find the uncut version. Hehe, but it's beautiful. The junior sister and junior sister are both very good. The shy junior sister and the bold junior sister. Hey, it's good to read. Recommended. Recommended. Even if it ends too quickly, the process begins in a satisfying way

The protagonists are very similar to each other, and the senior sister and junior sister are also super cute. They are so cute. It is rare for foreigners to write such a delicate emotional line. It is very comfortable. I can't wait to read it in one sitting. Please give me more chapters (book addiction attack [Adoration])

It's beautiful. The author's writing style is very good and the characters are vivid. The male protagonist is usually humorous and shameless but has a sense of responsibility at critical moments. The little junior sister is soft and waxy and shows her fierce state from time to time. The senior sister has not written it yet (Chapter 70)

I have just finished reading half of it. Overall, it is quite good. It deserves this rating. However, the author really shouldn't write about the world of cultivating immortals. It is not suitable. This kind of sweet and sweet article can be used next door for daily life, and it can become more popular.