Pirates: the Straw Hats Practice Steel Fists

It's super good-looking, and the male protagonist's combat power is very suitable for the ship. There is no breakdown in combat power, and there are no OOC characters in the original book. Although everyone has been criticizing the male protagonist for not having watched One Piece, I think the behavior of the protagonist would be more realistic if he had not. And it feels bad that the adventure is spoiled. You can enjoy the journey better if you haven't watched it! When the original book was in Shampoo Land, Usopp asked Rayleigh if the Great Treasure really existed and what it contained, and Luffy immediately knocked him down. So I think it's a good thing that the protagonist doesn't know, at least he doesn't have to worry about his butterfly wings developing in bad places.

It is a breath of fresh air among pirate fics. It is not like most other fics that give the protagonist a template to quickly gain combat power, and then just pretend to pick up girls. This one writes about that unique friendship and bond. The last one that gave me this feeling was the Neos Okupen fic. To sum it up in one sentence: it tastes so right~

After reading the latest chapter, I am only slightly dissatisfied with the content of the book (I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, and it is almost impossible for any online article to completely satisfy me. This is a nitpick). I just feel that the protagonist is a bit missing, but other aspects are well written, with a good grasp of the character, and the atmosphere within the Straw Hats is also reflected.

The connection between the plot and the emotions is just right, and the emotions of the protagonist and the crew are also very emotional. Everyone is very three-dimensional, giving people a feeling of being aboriginal. This is something that other fan fictions do not have, and it is also your advantage. Among the fan fictions I have read, I think it is the best. However, the update is too slow, and the production team doesn't dare to rest like this. Quick update! ! ! !

It's the kind of novel that truly depicts the bond between partners. Although it feels like it spans a longer time than other novels, it's really good to read.

The author's writing style is very good, the story is very interesting, and the protagonist's character is consistent with the original work. It makes people's eyes light up after reading it, and they are attracted immediately.

Is it broken? Is it well written?

How can I put it this way? So far, this book is the best book I have ever read. Maybe it's because I haven't read much of it.

I have seen a pretty good pirate fanfic on 🍅, but the combat description is a flaw, but I like the setting better. The protagonist does not know the plot line, so there is no sense of separation from the world. It is integrated well. I hope the quality will not collapse later.

Is there a female protagonist? Who is the female protagonist?

When the author comes back, the book will be really good!

It's about a male college student who suddenly travels back in time and then starts living as a pirate again. How can I say that? It's very well written and I highly recommend it. What I didn't write about when I was traveling through time was the story after the time travel.

I stayed up all night and finally finished reading it temporarily. The author is a bit short and weak! Come on, I'm catching up on the update anyway.

Each character is well portrayed and behaves completely in line with the original character's personality. Because Sanji abides by chivalry and causes injuries to his companions, he blames himself. This is a true companion.

Not bad, but it feels a little rushed, and the atmosphere is always not rendered properly. The most important thing is that it is too fast, the advancement is fast, and the camera changes are also fast.

I used to hate following the boat, but I know it's hard to be successful if you follow the boat in the plot. This book is good, the choice of the protagonist is right, or it can be said that there is no choice. I saw the small garden, it's okay, come on⛽

It's very interesting. Keep up the good work, author.

Don't underestimate the bond between us, bastard, you can do it, right? Updates three times a day

🉑, I'm just not used to watching Invincible novels. The protagonist is not very strong and it doesn't change the plot much, but the author's writing is quite flavorful.

At present, it seems that although it is following the boat flow and the plot, it does include characters created by itself (which can make people involved). I hope the author will work hard and maintain his original intention.

The writing is very good, it really captures the atmosphere of the Straw Hats, and the design of Goldfinger is also very good [laughs]

The plot is reasonable and in line with the characters, and the original plot is eye-catching. Luffy refuses the protagonist to board the ship, and Sanji's conflicts are all very well written and exciting.

I have seen the most faithful version of the original work so far. The protagonist blends in very naturally, neither pretentious nor weak, and has a very upright outlook on life. Mai Tuan's relationship is warm and passionate.

It's super beautiful, partially original, and emotionally progressive. Come on.

After reading the first dozen chapters, both the self-created plot and the anime plot are very smooth, keep it up, come on ٩(๑^o^๑)۶!

Steel Fist is the steel from Heart Steel in League of Legends. At first I thought it was Fullmetal Alchemist, but this book is very good, Steel Gate [laughing]

I can't say 5 stars, but it's well written.

Very good, good luck to the author

Follow your own path and let others have their say. If you don't have anything else to say, write a few more chapters and get 1 million words early.

Needless to say, this is the first time that this kind of boat flow looks so good.