The Grave Robbers' Chronicles: Taking Charge

The first half of this article is rather light and funny to read. The ideas are quite novel and the overall effect is very good. However, some details are not fully described and there is no transition. It is a bit sudden. The first book is good-looking and read[I learned it][I learned it]

You are so good! When others write extras, I do it to give readers candy. You write extras to stab readers. You guys, just the first few of them almost torture me to death. Could you please write less? Please, please

The half-month update [Punch] is still five stars (I can't beat her [Petrified] now)

Dear author, you have not updated your article today. Where are you!!!