Dragon Clan************

Personally, I think this is a very good Dragon Clan fanfic, and the author didn't follow the plot mindlessly. Finally ~ Hui-Pear-Yi-Sai-Gao! ! ! ! !

First of all, as a new dragon fanfic, I will definitely support it. Secondly, the quality is also very good. The main character is reasonably powerful. There is no cliche plot. The writing is also good. The plot is to skip Dragon 1 and Dragon 2 and start the neon line of Dragon 3 directly. I think this is very good. I have seen the step-by-step plot and this kind of plot is very novel. The main thing is that I always like Eri. The three CPs are all from the original work, Mingfei and Zero, but the two people in the original work are also very suitable. The protagonist and Eri are not only suitable because they like Eri, but their experiences are also quite similar. Eri was used as a weapon to survive for 18 years, and in the end he was sacrificed without seeing any more scenery. The protagonist, as a new soul born in Xia Zhi, an iron-blooded soldier, was born without a normal living environment and lived in the shadow of others for 18 years. Even though there were many people around him, he still could not stop the erosion of Blood Mourning. The so-called old friends and comrades-in-arms also She is just an old friend in the memory, so she has always been the loneliest one. When two aliens with similar experiences meet, they are greeted by overwhelming feelings like a flood. In the original novel, Lu Mingfei only wakes up after her death, but people cannot be resurrected, and they are just chess pieces in the hands of chess players. Now Xia Zhi is another chess player, with enough power to set off the entire chess board. It is an unplanned variable. His arrival is enough to rewrite all tragedies. The relationship between Eri Yi and Xia Zhi is mutual salvation and unlimited future. Be sure not to be eunuchs or unfinished ones (the writing is not good and the expression may not be clear, please do not criticize) Look how many hours have passed

The light of the prosperous age flows in the girl's eyes, and the reflected stars are as clear as the sky. The evening breeze lifts the hair and creates ripples in the heart. The fragrance of cherry blossoms outlines the romance that fills the air. I am fine in this world, and I sing for you. The night on the Tokyo Tower was a little noisy. The countdown people clasped their fingers and relied on each other. When zero returned, the world seemed quiet. The fireworks swayed straight up, like broken bits of stardust, giving a grand brilliance. Looking at each other and smiling, the words are spoken in the heart. The two hearts resonate for a moment, writing the greatest eternity. Lao Tzu's book review, Tomato, you are too embarrassed, reprinting an original comment that was originally in the review of this chapter of Chapter 52. Xia Zhi gently stroked Eriki's face, and under Eriki's dull gaze, the two gradually got closer. The breeze blew a strand of Eri's hair, and Xia Zhi felt a little itchy on her nose, mixed with a slight fragrance. "It's the smell of cherry blossoms, but isn't the flower season already over?" Xia Zhi thought, but her body did not stop leaning forward. It was a slightly cold touch, as elastic as jelly, and Xia Zhi secretly rejoiced, "This is my first time kissing a girl." Xia Zhi had never had such an experience. A girl's lips kissed him and he couldn't stop. He felt in his heart that it was so sweet. When his nose moved, the smell like cherry blossoms came to his face. Xia Zhi couldn't help but hugged Eri Yi tightly. "It turns out to be Eri Yi's body fragrance." Eri Yi's dull eyes lit up, like the joy of a child eating candy for the first time. Eri Yi smiled.

Come on, author, the heroine Hui Liyi will increase her score [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

This fanfic is pretty good-looking, and it ranks among the top five Dragon Clan fanfics I've read. Even though it has a low rating, it's really good-looking, which probably outweighs the rating. The plot is written relatively quickly. Other fanfics are written in a slow and meticulous pace. This is a fast pace without foreshadowing, but it is also very interesting to watch. The ideas are clear and complete, and it does not make people feel too messy.

It's really well written. Although I haven't watched Dragon Clan in its entirety, I know a lot about it. The characters of Xia Zhi are well created. I hope the author will work harder and give Dragon Clan fans an ending they want. I really can't get enough [Like][Like][Like]ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

It's one of the better ones among all the Dragon Clan fanfics I've read.

I don't know how to write a long review, but this book is the first good Dragon Clan fanfic I've read. (The author has a good attitude. If there are typos, they will be corrected as long as you post a paragraph review. The author is also very active.) The plot is also good. I only read Dragon Clan recently, and now I have also seen Dragon Four. Overall, it is not much different from the original work. It is a really good fanfic. I really recommend it. On this day, I wish the author a Happy New Year, and I also wish all book friends a Happy New Year. I hope this book can be finished. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's a very good Dragon Clan fanfic. I've read a lot of Dragon Clan fanfic, but I don't think it's very good. They dare not write about Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze. After all, these two can be said to be the biggest bugs.

It's a very good book, quite sweet, the protagonist is invincible, and it's a really cool story, with no brainless plot (the author would write better when he falls in love [smile])

Very interesting, ranked in the top three among all the Dragon Clan fanfics I have read.

Not bad [Adoration] [Admiration] My dragon fandom's spiritual support is full again

Well, I personally think Shark's writing is pretty good, and the plot speed is okay, but I still want it to be faster. The characters of Summer Solstice are also quite distinct. The cp pairing is also very good, but I would rather see the relationship development between Lu Mingfei and Ling, because I would rather see a relationship drama between a bad boy and a talkative and introverted person. Secondly, I hope that the book can give some writing to my little shot. [Laughing] By the way, I want to speed up the growth of Lu Mingfei. For Xia Zhi, try not to strengthen it. I think it is already strong enough. Otherwise, it feels a little bit incapable of highlighting the strength of my little Shota. @Easy-to-know shark

It ranks among the top three Dragon Clan fics I have read, and the setting of the Human Emperor is also very novel. It would be even better if you could arrange a tongue kiss between Herzog and Jiang Nan [laughter] [Like]

Not many Tomatoes write about dragons, and even less about the heroine Hui Liyi. I really hope the author can continue writing, and the writing is really good [crying] [crying]

I think it's very interesting. Although I haven't read many Dragon Clan fanfics, I think it can be ranked in the top five among the ones I've read. I hope the author will continue to work hard and give Eri a good result. I like Eri the most.

It feels very good. I give it five stars. The author would mind adding a supporting role (the supporting role would be better). Name: White Sheath Age: 17 (What's wrong with being a minor?) Interpersonal relationships: getting to know Xia Zhi (rebirth version); having a relationship with Lu Mingfei Abilities: Lai Yin disguised as Jun Yan (never used in front of outsiders); powerful sword skills (the original idea was Su Xiao from "Reincarnation Paradise", who has extremely strong sword skills); extremely strong mental power He does not hate dragons, but is immersed in the ideal world he has built (an imaginary world of peaceful coexistence), and constantly travels in reality to enrich his imaginary world.

It's well written, but it's a little too abrupt in some places, but that's innocuous. Love plots and combat plots are most compatible, but most people probably still want to watch "Tokyo Love Story" by Natsuki and Eriki. Come on, there are very few well-written dragon fanfics. I hope I can stick to it. I have read a few dragon fanfics before, but they have been discontinued. I hope the author can stick to it.

Personally, I think it's very interesting, and the author's writing is also very good. The story of Eriki itself is miserable, so I hope she can live a happy life. I feel that Lu Mingfei and Eri Yi shouldn't be together. I didn't like Lu Mingfei from the beginning. The author also made up for my regret. Thank you very much. (I really like the author's ignorant love story about Eri. It's very similar to another book I've read. The book is called: Dragon Clan: Starting from Summoning Eri.) (It's a double heroine, the other one is Xia Ya, which is also very sweet)

I feel very good, the ending is better than those given by the damn Jiangnan, and although the protagonist is very strong, the author did not use the usual routine of those cool novels to write it, which feels very good. Give it five stars, I hope more people will see [learned it]

The novel "Dragon" is my favorite one, and I have some regrets, especially for Eri. I have read many dragon novels, and this one is my favorite. Although it is a little short, the content is quite good.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. You are the best among the dragon books I have read! ! !

I feel that I have tried hard to write it, but it still cannot avoid the vulgarity and cannot catch my attention quickly. There are only two ways to attract people, one is the literary and youthful writing style of Jiangnan, and the other is the unique setting, this kind of character and this kind of dialogue and the description gave me a strong sense of déjà vu. Maybe I have read more. I can only see that I am trying hard to write well, but it still doesn't fully attract me. Fortunately, the score is high enough and I can look forward to it. I will give the author some more time and just treat it as a blessing. I wish you a good write-up.

Let's put it this way, I've read a lot of Tomato's Dragon Clan fanfics. They are either half-way eunuchs or the settings are outrageous. They either directly collapse in various ways or directly descend from other worlds. Anyway, it's uncomfortable to read. But this book by the author is really different. There are almost no poisonous points, the plot is compact enough, and the writing is powerful. The descriptions are all in place, and as a fanfic of the Dragon Clan series, the plot is almost pushed forward with minimal changes to the original characters. Some characters who did not appear for a long time or whose character descriptions were not much, such as Norton, did have major changes, but it is not too abrupt in the overall picture. The creative process of the protagonist is also very comfortable. It is not a rubbish idea such as a system or soul travel, nor is it the idea of ​​most dragon fandom authors. Most of the other authors' ideas are to rely on the original plot characters to mutate and force their dreams to come true, or to directly change the original character's personality. It seems very inconsistent and quite uncomfortable. I commend the author here for his great love. The characters remain basically unchanged on the original basis, and the protagonist with a complete background is used to create a butterfly effect, which achieves the effect of changing the plot without changing the characters. Therefore, it is very comfortable to read. I probably opened this book at about 8 o'clock the night before, read it at about 4 o'clock in the morning, and then read it all the next morning to finish all the existing plots. So I really feel that it is not easy to shape it into what it is now. This is also the first time I have read Dragon Clan fan fiction for so long without finding any poisonous or urinary points. It can be said that it is full of energy. It can be regarded as a dream come true. After all, no fanfic I have read before has had such a feeling. So the author must work hard, don't be an eunuch halfway, and you must give yourself an explanation for your regrets at the beginning, right? It took me nine hours to read Chapter 197 from the beginning. From around 4pm yesterday to 11:30 now, I feel ridiculous just thinking about it.

A reader of 2,000 hours, has given no more than ten five stars, and this is one of them. Among Dragon Clan fans, your writing is as good as that of "The Road to the Perfect Ending Mingfei". This book has a lot of personal flaws, but it is not inconsistent. It can be seen that the author has worked hard. In fact, as long as you write well, readers will not be stingy with the time to write a long review for you. I like the setting of this book very much, and I have written a lot of pictures. The scenes of Yi are not like other books where the dragons have a harem, or the heroine paints Li Yi, but the scenes of Yi Li are pitiful. This book is very well written, and the other one I like, the Dragon Tribe fanfic, does not follow the normal route. Generally, Dragon Tribe follows the flow of the original book, but that one is written in a very different way, and the protagonists of the two books have one thing in common, that is, the protagonists are very powerful. Yes, hurry up and speed up the update. Come on, author.

The plot of this book is fascinating and the characters are vivid. The author's superb writing skills made me completely immersed in the story. I enjoyed a wonderful reading experience. The writing is beautiful and smooth, whether it is descriptive or argumentative, it made me feel fresh and new. His views are unique and profound. He gave me a new understanding of some things in the original book and enriched my way of thinking. (The above are all comments made up of words. The author apologizes. It is too difficult for me to write my own words, so I can only search for universal comments)

As a new author, it is extremely rare to have a story line without confusion. Not only that, the author's character creation and plot development are also extremely good. It has been a long time since I have seen an excellent dragon work. Come on.

It's very good. Although it doesn't completely restore the style of the original work, the old thief's writing style is not something that anyone can imitate. At least it made me feel comfortable watching it. It would be nice if the character of the protagonist could be made more fleshed out.

The plot is good and the portrayal is good, but the pearl is in the front, which is a bit imitating Jiangnan, but it doesn't have that feeling. But I think you are more suitable to be the number one writer on the rich list than Jiang Nan. You can already step on his head just based on your plot.

How can I put it this way? Compared with other novels, I found the plot drawn by the loneliness between the protagonist of this book and the two little monsters Eri and two people who seem to be in different worlds but are the same at the same time, very interesting. The author's writing style is also good, and it feels very immersive. In the end, Eriyi competes at the top! Herzog and the old thief are happily married and may have a son soon haha ​​ヾﾉ≧∀≦)