An excellent teacher can often send students from the mountains to the mountains, but Shi Bai directly pulled them from the mountains to the border.
Get on the Shibai Flight Bus and take them step by step on the road to the King of Heaven.
Reader comments
In general, the content of the protagonist is okay, but the supporting characters take up too much and are meaningless. You wrote a lot of student challenges, especially Lozi. It is very difficult to understand what the purpose of writing this character is? The protagonist clearly has a system, and he could show off his strength when the other school comes to challenge him, but he chooses to live in it. The same goes for the part when he returns to the Liu family to visit relatives. However, your description of the protagonist's character in the previous article is completely inconsistent with your paragraphs. The role of your system here is minimal and bland. It's bland, there's no foreshadowing, you're already a high-level cultivator, so why is it that the main character's family is the head of the talent center, and you, Bankiras, haven't completely buried the pit. That paragraph was painful to read. Also, please write down the main lineup of the main character in full, and don't just jump out a few chapters every few chapters. I suggest the author read it yourself.
In general, the content of the protagonist is okay, but the supporting characters take up too much and are meaningless. You wrote a lot of student challenges, especially Lozi. It is very difficult to understand what the purpose of writing this character is? The protagonist clearly has a system, and he could show off his strength when the other school comes to challenge him, but he chooses to live in it. The same goes for the part when he returns to the Liu family to visit relatives. However, your description of the protagonist's character in the previous article is completely inconsistent with your paragraphs. The role of your system here is minimal and bland. It's bland, there's no foreshadowing, you're already a high-level cultivator, so why is it that the main character's family is the head of the talent center, and you, Bankiras, haven't completely buried the pit. That paragraph was painful to read. Also, please write down the main lineup of the main character in full, and don't just jump out a few chapters every few chapters. I suggest the author read it yourself.